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Sand Castle De Mal

~Sand Castle De Mal~ Beauty sails along the shores of life Out there broken dreams form above sand dunes Silent, God listens to the triumph of his creation 3-14-2015 3 line verse

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Aparajita Bhattacharjee

Date: 3/18/2024 1:15:00 AM

Hello Skat A lot is said, described, defined. Loved the lyricism somewhere with the repetition of 's'.

Heather Secrest

Date: 6/1/2019 7:47:00 AM

I love the imagery! I can just picture in my mind people throwing hopes and dreams off the top of the sand dunes hoping for God to listen to them. Lovely poem!

Xuefeng Pan

Date: 10/25/2018 11:03:00 AM

concise and meaningful

Cecilia Cortez

Date: 11/3/2016 8:39:00 PM

ver nice it touches my heart

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/17/2016 6:58:00 PM

Very beautiful poem, Skat. Depth of thought/simplicity of expression. A true artistic combination. Wonderfully done, Ms. Poetess. Love your work as always my dear. Much love to you.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/17/2016 6:58:00 PM

Very beautiful poem, Skat. Depth of thought/simplicity of expression. A true artistic combination. Wonderfully done, Ms. Poetess. Love your work as always my dear. Much love to you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/28/2016 9:16:00 PM

Still loving this one, Skat.

Joe Dimino

Date: 7/27/2016 9:50:00 AM

Beautiful, thoughtful writing! For sure, God is in charge--thank God!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/9/2016 1:50:00 AM

I love this Skat....it is so inspiring! 7 ; )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2016 8:52:00 PM

Loving this one again! And thanks so much for your words on my five words poem. I really enjoyed writing that one and being able to have it recorded. It may be my first and last. I cannot figure out how my student saved the converted file so that it can be uploaded to the Soup post.

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 2/14/2016 8:18:00 AM

Lovey poem, touches my soul x

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/6/2016 1:45:00 PM

Hi Skat, once more you amaze. Three lines and the vision is told. It takes me ten lines to say hello. May the gold you create with ever run onto your canvas and give us the gems of life as you see it. This is a definite seven for your creativity and a fave, so i can read it when i so wish.

Shining Bright

Date: 1/4/2016 3:02:00 PM

Superb, beautiful lines.

Robyn Campbell

Date: 12/29/2015 9:07:00 AM

Skat, like I keep saying to myself, you are a true poet, through and through. No one can write any better than this. Three lines that tell a complete story. Reminds me of Hemingway's 6-word story.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2015 1:30:00 AM

Skat, a question for you. When you say best October Poem, can it be a poem written in an October several years ago? I Really want to know!!

Dominic Amezimi

Date: 10/27/2015 4:18:00 PM

you're so good, you could amaze me in three lines... nicely put!

Sohom Gupta

Date: 10/24/2015 2:58:00 AM

Wow! The poem reflects true beauty. You possess a golden pen that can depict heavenly pleasure...

Skat A

Date: 10/20/2015 11:13:00 AM

Thank you CAROl... SK

George Aul

Date: 10/19/2015 9:58:00 AM

Very nice, congrats........... George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2015 5:45:00 PM

Hi, Again, Skat!! Thanks for the recent comments!

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/21/2015 11:17:00 AM

brilliant lines,almost felt a serene cool breeze caress my face.such beauty and what an ending line!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2015 5:31:00 PM

Still love this one, Skat!

Thomas Reyes

Date: 9/8/2015 1:50:00 PM

It is more than evident that she knows of what substance beauty consists of. Look at the flowing of red within and around her light. The gods color. A man being so could get lost in such divinity. Where does she sail to? What mal befalls her that she is forced to be wrecked among the shore with the rest of us? Where time stands still. And agony resides. Yes above the sand dunes she tells. What infatuation I have for here tale. If I could only know her. Perhaps we could leave this shore together and sail toward perfect bliss. Away from the mal. Away from the mal. Now away with you. Silent, God listens to the triumph of his creation. Such magnificence. Such beauty. Away from the mal.

Len Gasun

Date: 9/5/2015 11:49:00 AM

Hello my dearest, Skat. Stopping by tonight to embrace this amazing terse verse of yours once again. Again, I've thoroughly enjoyed and thank you so much! May I also have this chance to thank you from the bottom of my heart for appreciating my October sky poem in your contest. I'm so sorry for the late expression of gratitude cuz I've got a problem with my laptop and just solved a while ago. Again, thank you sooo much and more blessings! Many hugs to you from me! love much, Leonora

Deborah Foster

Date: 8/13/2015 3:10:00 PM

This is very hopeful and soft. I like it a lot.