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Oh, the grief, the stabbing --

Grief penetrates a person with untold, pain and sorrow, a life lost, ever cold; the puncture, the piercing permeates deep, a thick mask hides the truth that comes in sleep. I want to shout loud with booming screams, memories and sadness swirl in my dreams; I am empty, alone in my torment, aching, bursting with sad disappointment. On my knees, I ask God, when will this end? When will this shattered heart finally mend. ________________________________ February 28, 2015 Rhyme For the contest, Pierced, sponsor Rob Carmack


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  1. Date: 3/1/2015 12:54:00 PM

    Great write Constance. Love
  1. Date: 3/1/2015 12:47:00 PM

    Your tears seep out of your words and dampen the page with their sadness. Emile. #7
  1. Date: 3/1/2015 2:48:00 AM

    good luck in contest. you cadence is magnificent in this one. as usual your post is full of raw emotion entertwined with deep thoughts. love the thick mask line
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 7:54:00 PM

    Wow, nicely written...the answer may be it starts with a smile from the heart :) Good luck with the contest!
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 7:45:00 PM

    Deep is this pain that pierces the heart . . . only one who has experienced this pain can articulate the depth of despair . . . broken before God. 7, fav
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 6:01:00 PM

    wonderful flow rhyme and alliteration - deep sad write - I can relate to it so much - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
  1. Date: 2/28/2015 5:05:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Everyone grieves differently but there are similiarities with each person..You have expressed it well..Thanks for droppiing by..It is been gray a lot here for the last two years which can begin to grate on one's emotions..Sara