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A Chaotic World

I have many cousins that share my life,
There is Happiness, Sadness, and Grief holds the knife;
There is Love, Hate, Compassion, but oh yes, Chaos,
My cousin, Chaos can be mean and heinous.

Full of malice and often we have a face-off,
Unpredictable- wanting to ruin my life's mosaic;
Oh the mosaic of my journey has been chaotic,
Full of starting over and making myself a new oasis.

When I fall, I re-build sometimes quite robotic,
I go through the motions like a neurotic;
My cousin Chaos just laughs at me- smiling,
I try to ignore him and go on in a trance hypnotic.

My life shattered, full of deaths and tears, weeping,
And Chaos is clapping and full of words, lying;
Rush here, rush there, just be disorganized my girl,
Chaotic, confused thoughts, with a what to do feeling.

Many times I have known nothingness and had to unfurl,
Like a rose, unfurl my petals for yet another whirl;
Oh my mean cousin Chaos really tries to make me nuts,
But, I am a survivor and will forever swirl and twirl.

May 26, 2016


For the contest, My Cousin Chaos
sponsor, Brian Davey


Copyright © Broken Wings | Year Posted 2016


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  1. Date: 5/29/2016 1:04:00 AM

    Lovely hearing your voice, Broken. Very well written. All the best for the contest. ~karam~
  1. Date: 5/29/2016 12:41:00 AM

    The metaphor is very strong here and I loved how you used Chaos as a literary device; it totally worked! So very well done and the paradox highlighted and underscored. Good luck and best wishes for the contest!
  1. Date: 5/28/2016 9:30:00 PM

    very nice write and read though I'm not familiar with rubiayat...I can totally relate to the robotic - has been my coping mechanism in a few instances I wish to forget... and I agree with CayCay. :)
  1. Date: 5/28/2016 7:54:00 PM

    It is somewhat surreal hearing voices of those you do not know, but who are most familiar. To click and sit back is such a novel way step into a poem and reveal it. Your unique take on yet another contest once again surprises me in a thought provoking way. I deeply relate to the last stanza which I feel is powerful. A great write throughout that will stay with me awhile. You are an individualistic individual - my favorite kind - and you give great voice ... CayCay