Vultures

Vultures ----- -----------passing over dying shadows nothing to feast on the wind came and carried them away 10-26-13 SandyIvy

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/8/2015 8:07:00 PM

One does feel pity for them, with these words...very interesting verse.. I believe I wrote a poem about vultures some time ago, but yours is much more awesome. Great work! Always, Laura

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 11/14/2015 11:15:00 AM

You have expressed so much in so little and that too with a longing beauty to read it again and again dear friend Sandy. Your Poem leaves a very deep impression on the minds of the reader. Great write dear friend. It is going to be my favorite Poem. Thanks you Sandy once again for your kind words on my last poem. Wishing you all the best. Please stay in touch with us even when you are busy in your new venture. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor

Len Gasun

Date: 10/30/2015 10:04:00 AM

Oh, i've missed this awesome poem of yours my dearest Sandy. But I'm so glad and thankful to read it tonight. It's been a while. Hope you'll be back soon my dearest friend and I want to greet you a very Belated Happy Birthday, although our special day was already over. I'm sorry if I come only now cuz I was quite busy attending my mom who was sick during my birthday. Hope you'd a great birthday my dear and wishing you all the Best in life. B-lated thanks for your greetings. <3 lots and hugs LG

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 3:02:00 PM

:) Where you at. SKAT

Charlene Wilcox

Date: 9/20/2014 6:39:00 AM

Sandy I don't know where You went but I think You should come back and continue to write because You have talented marking threw out Your Poetry and it really is worth expanding it into New Horizons...Keep writing and never give up and never give in and that is spoken from a very small Heart compared to Others but it is meant....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2014 10:11:00 PM

sandy, where are you? come out come out wherever you are!!!

Robert Johnson

Date: 3/23/2014 8:20:00 PM

Tie an anchor to your wings. Sooner or later the heart sings.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 3/22/2014 9:58:00 PM

Grim but so vivid and real, it takes a good pen to do so with very few words ' ------- passing over dying shadows... ' An air of Tennyson genius here! Good write Sandy!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/7/2014 7:01:00 PM

Very interesting write here, and thanks you my friend for your comments. cheri

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/7/2014 11:56:00 AM

They will move on when there is no carrion to be found. The shadows had no substance; so they went elsewhere to find something. I hope that clarified things somewhat for your other commenters.

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 3/7/2014 8:15:00 AM

You have to stop by and tell me the meaning of this. I can make all kinds of assumptions but there is nothing greater than the true meaning from the creator of this magnificent piece. I simply love reading it and how its displayed.

Justin Bordner

Date: 2/22/2014 1:52:00 PM

Defeated by their own emptiness. Cool Art Sandy. J.A.B.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/6/2014 4:43:00 AM

- Moving written Sandy ! - Thank you for loving words on my post: "NOT A POEM - SOME EAT THE PLEASURE" - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/5/2014 9:47:00 PM

I think it concerns people out to get you.

Skat A

Date: 1/30/2014 4:14:00 AM

don't get the meaning, but I love the image. Skat

Chuck Melugin

Date: 1/8/2014 10:14:00 PM

Sandy you write me away! When we rise above the shadows of hurt...the vultures go hungry! my best, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2013 2:29:00 AM

- Happy Christmas - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 2:26:00 AM

Sandy--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Wayland Bunch

Date: 12/12/2013 7:05:00 PM

I guess I took a little long to get to this poem, but worth the wait. When you read a poem that is so short, but has so much meaning it is intriguing. Great Work.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 2:34:00 AM

stopping by a second and third time.......saying hi,,,,........where IZ U???? .... xoxoxoxoxoox ;-)