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Whispers of Your Soul

As starlit night glows, half-lit cast To blaze soul's faith along a dream And hears my wish ‘pon a river glassed, That spills of love’s trails, agleam. I covet deep my prayer's lore As starlit night glows,half-lit cast Igniting air from life's ardor Where arms hold unto peace steadfast. Oh lyre, my tune; from crescent's mast This whispered invocation sung, As starlit night glows, half-lit cast From loud noises through days prolonged. The moon dims, my soulful hums rest On tender lifetime unsurpassed, When heaven grants this need's request As starlit night glows half-lit cast. Contest: Your Favourite Old Poem #3 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton 12/19/2014

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Date: 6/30/2015 6:44:00 PM
once again nice win
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Date: 6/28/2015 9:44:00 AM
I enjoyed, Congratulations.
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Date: 6/28/2015 12:49:00 AM
Nette, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2015 5:08:00 AM
such an enchanting pen Nette Congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:58:00 PM
Nice win....LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2015 5:07:00 PM
Hi Nette, your poetic words touch the soul like a whisper. So symbolic and serene. Congratulations on your win. A favorite for me. 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/9/2015 1:32:00 PM
Congratulation, Nette, on your winning poem. Blessings & hugs to you my friend eve
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on your deserved win Nette...huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:03:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/9/2015 10:45:00 AM
Your muse touches the celetials, nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/24/2014 4:55:00 PM
This is so enchanting and serene, like something inside of a dream... A truly lovely poem, Nette. Your words never cease to amaze me! Good luck in Gail's contest!.... I hope that you and your family have a very Merry Christmas!
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Date: 12/24/2014 10:50:00 AM
What a beauty you have created Nette. Brilliantly composed a Poem like a Song. The third stanza is too good and too sweet. A beautiful and lovely sweet Poem to read again and again. It is going as my favorite one. My good wishes for your contest entry. Love and best wishes always with the wishes for a Merry Christmas....Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 12/21/2014 1:47:00 PM
- Nette, I have only one word after reading this: BEAUTIFUL! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2014 11:18:00 AM
Merry Christmas nette and goodluck in the contest...huggs
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Date: 12/19/2014 11:59:00 PM
I am about to go to bed, and this, well what a beautiful last thought to have before sleep! Wonderful!
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Date: 12/19/2014 10:43:00 PM
Your night shines within this amazing write my friend! I love the symbolism in this delightful poem! You have portrayed such a fabulous piece! I really enjoyed reading this gorgeous poem here this evening! What a lovely write, Great Work!!
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Date: 12/19/2014 9:38:00 PM
Nette...your first stanza sets an amazing picture of fine art to follow! hope your safe from turbulent weather...jimbo
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Date: 12/19/2014 6:38:00 PM
oh so so beautiful this amazing imagery Nette - you have such a gift my friend - good luck - its a 7 from me:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/19/2014 3:58:00 PM
Because of the depth and beauty of this fascinating poem,you enlighten the soul with much grace. Hail to you, Nette! Winner!
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Date: 12/19/2014 3:43:00 PM
The soul is a sanctuary where serenity fills its well, while the bucket waits to be filled by a seeker of truth wanting to quench their thirst.
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Date: 12/19/2014 3:37:00 PM
Leaving me breathless as your metaphors lead to a place of serenity, Nette. Excellent poem, top-rated! A fav!
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