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Today, Tomorrow and Forever

The reflection of eternity Vows of love coming from your eyes to mine Serene mirrors of sensitivity Manifest my hopes for endless bliss Your lips are still; movement only in pools of blue Dazzling irises speak from your heart Here and now becomes an everlasting vow Garden nourished by promises of tomorrow Many roads we’ll travel before sunset When our spirits commune on another plane Take my hand, reach out without reservation Let the fruits of our love flourish evermore *For Brian's October Contest

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Ralph Taylor

Date: 10/6/2011 4:21:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Great write. Nice going. luv Ralph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/5/2011 4:12:00 PM

Lovely writing. Glad to see your name among the winners. Love, Joyce

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/5/2011 3:01:00 PM

A lovley choice for the contest Carolyn, and good to see your win today..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2011 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "October-Your Choice" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/16/2010 10:23:00 AM

Lovely & sweet beyond words. Beautiful like a serene music. What a great write you have created in these words which touches deep our mind and heart even our soul. A gem of a Poem and a well deserving win. This is going to be my favorite as well. Love and best wishes always........Ravindra...........Carolyn Devonshire

Roger Page

Date: 6/6/2010 10:06:00 PM

Written with feeling, Beautifully written. Love Roger

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/5/2010 8:00:00 PM

Wow, Carolyn!! I missed this beautiful poem! my congratulations on your Ist Place win, so well deserved!!! One of my favorites for all time! Truly enjoyed! Love, Audrey

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/3/2010 10:47:00 PM

Carolyn, I enjoyed your beautiful love poem. The song "Here and Now" made my heart leap with emotion. Your words are an extension of that kind of love. I have enjoyed reading your work in the middle of tonight! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Zera Masters

Date: 6/3/2010 9:27:00 AM

Moving and inspiring, thank you! I love reading a genuine love poem.

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/3/2010 7:15:00 AM

beautiful poetry love Jayne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2010 11:15:00 AM

Congrats on another number one win.. back to back..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2010 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations, Carolyn, on BOTH your top places recently. This poem was just wonderful. LUv,Andrea

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/1/2010 6:47:00 AM

Another 1st place for you Carolyn.....you are amazing!! Congratulations on your winning and wonderful poem!! ~ Love, Carrie

Rick Parise

Date: 6/1/2010 12:44:00 AM

Congrats to you for your #1 in my contest ~very beautiful ~Rick

James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2010 4:38:00 PM

I have heard of Luther, but regarding his music i have to hold my hand up and say i have not heard this one. Good luck in the contest Carolyn >> Jamesd

Victorias Pline

Date: 5/27/2010 10:23:00 PM

What warmth this brings to the imagination -Victorias

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/27/2010 6:16:00 AM

I absolutely love this one Carolyn, nice read on a cold winter's day - love Wilma :)

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 5/26/2010 7:55:00 AM

Hi Carolyn, The singer is David Alexander. He is a rather unknown singer who died on the canary isles a few years ago. Blessings, Joseph

Elaine George

Date: 5/25/2010 10:12:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful! Carolyn. Thank you for sharing and thank you for your kind comments. Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 5/25/2010 12:24:00 AM

Some great colourful imagery here ,especially liked the inner poem of the second verse.Carolyn.Rgds Brian

Daver Austin

Date: 5/24/2010 12:44:00 PM

Hey! "Eyes are a reflection of the soul." Is that how it goes? Those love-eyes are reaching very deep in this one. Love, Dave

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/24/2010 7:27:00 AM

these vows you write of sound so true and comes from the heart. beautiful poem. may there love always flourish the way it did from the start..now that would be something special. good luck,always. -Always&Forever Lynette

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/24/2010 7:20:00 AM

Beautifully written, Carolyn! And so romantic! Thank you for your friendly comments...Love, Gert

Ashley Yates

Date: 5/24/2010 12:07:00 AM

So lovely, wonderful Romance thanks for the moment of bliss. Amazing write! Ashley

Margaret Foster

Date: 5/23/2010 11:10:00 PM

This is a lovely poem Carolyn. I find free verse difficult but this flows and can't be anything other than pure poetry. good work...Margaret