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In The Light

~In The Light~ (Villanelle ) There was something not right this dark night It came creeping slowly by Passing through before it was light It filled the forest with a glow bright She grew so frightened she did cry There was something not right this dark night And as she ran all the while in fright She quickly gazed at the dark sky high Passing through before it was light In the dark she closed her eyes tight Praying in her mind to God she didn't die There was something not right this dark night Of sudden she stopped as she saw an sprite Star like did gleam in those very tiny eyes Passing swiftly before it was light Now she had something about she could write As more sprites fairies flew 'round oh my! There was something not right this dark night Passing through before it was light. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 January.26.2015


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  1. Date: 1/26/2015 3:57:00 PM

    Great imagery and I can see the sprites dancing around in the darkness. A wonderful poem.
  1. Date: 1/26/2015 2:27:00 PM

    Just beautiful Dorian ! I so love dreaming dear poet....and oh how far into the dream you placed me with this awesome write ! Have a wonderful week....much love, james
  1. Date: 1/26/2015 2:13:00 PM

    - I dreamed me far away in your words and pictures ..... beautifully written, dear Dorian !!!! ... (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 1/26/2015 10:04:00 AM

    Work of a creative dreamer Sweet D. Want to see your own painting. I know painting is your another passion.Love>rajat
  1. Date: 1/26/2015 9:47:00 AM

    Etheric writing, dear Dorian! A seven!
  1. Date: 1/26/2015 9:32:00 AM

    Loved this poem . . . it captured my imagination and I was gliding through the dark! Another signature write from your pen . . . 7
  1. Date: 1/26/2015 8:43:00 AM

    Beautifully written and perfectly whimsical. For a moment I was transported! Thank you :)
  1. Date: 1/26/2015 7:53:00 AM

    Dorian, a very magical, winged write, very creative. Should be in a illustrated story book. A 7. G & Dee