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Still Born

Pride wiil not share or ever hide We drink it young in mother's milk And eats within and lives a lie, 'Neath a stubborn mask of iron will; It admits no wrong or mistake, Heeds no advice an with ill grace Pretends excuse with sacrifice; This fragile skin,false covering Insecurity's low self worth, Dies its death,orphaned and alone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/11/2010 4:07:00 AM
Brilliant and beautiful Poem on a theme so difficult, but so universal. It touches almost everyone in the span of our life, in someway or the other. Thanks and many thanks for your precious comments. I have placed few new poems hope you would enjoy them. Best wishes and love ......xxx Ravindra ...xxx Brian St
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Date: 3/8/2010 5:15:00 AM
Much depth in your excellent words this morning Brian.. deep and emotional ..luv.. "Sweetheart".. BTW.. a wonderful blog today... and thankxxx for your many congrats on my winning poems and lovely comments on my poetry reads.. appreciate ..luv..
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Date: 3/7/2010 8:03:00 PM
Interesting!
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Date: 3/7/2010 6:19:00 PM
enjoyed today
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Date: 3/7/2010 12:43:00 PM
thanks agin fo another chance toto share the Gospel desire good works this is very true poem great use of imagery
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Date: 3/7/2010 11:34:00 AM
Pride..What a topic to choose to write a poem about..I especially like the last three lines..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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Date: 3/7/2010 12:10:00 AM
Brian - thank you for placing me second in your competition - it has really brightened my weekend. Many regards Janette
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