Untempered Poems | Examples

The Marching Poseur

Soft marches
spawn bravado
and cavalier soldier
He who scoffs
at distant gunfire
to meet its fury
Untested untried
untempered
his blade of little worth
As conflict preys
on the folly
— of the paper lion

(Dreamsleep: August, 2025)

To the Crown Prince

O brilliant son of the desert,
You rose through the maze of your House
With precision sharper than a blade.
The future trembles beneath your feet—
But power, untempered by wisdom,
Is a fire that devours its bearer.

Do not chase the glory of empires too fast.
Rome was not built in one day—
And neither shall a just Arabia.
You cannot serve two masters:
The West with its silver tongue,
And your people, whose eyes still hunger.

Choose neutrality not as weakness,
But as strategy.
Your true legacy lies not in gold towers,
But in lifting the soul of your nation.

Forsake not your brother, Iran.
To unite the Crescent is to raise a new dawn.
The blood of Gaza weeps through the sand,
And every drop asks:
"Where is our brother?"

Sunni, Shia, Sufi—one people,
Divided by politics, not by God.
To unite them is to write your name beside kings,
To divide them is to sow your own ruin.

Beware the advisors with smiles from Tel Aviv
And tongues sharpened in Washington.
They do not dream for you—
They only use your night to hide their shadow.

The Middle East can rise again,
But only if you learn this truth:
Real power is not feared,
It is trusted.

The Annual Spring Clean

It's happened again, dammit 
And try as I might
Spring cleaning's an urge
I just cannot fight

I need a remedy NOW 
For this kind of addiction 
As I'm down on my knees 
Scrubbing the kitchen 

It's a terrible affliction
An absolute blight 
I started at dawn 
Now it's late in the night 

The days been a blur 
A whirlwind of cleaning
A hysterical enthusiasm 
Untempered by reasoning

But when it's all done and dusted
And (temporarily) neat as a pin 
I'll be pleased I gave into the urge 
And sit down with a gin


Premium Member A Tale of Two Hearts

Cold is the heart unkind

Untempered by the sun

Hollow and mercy blind

Celebrated by none

Bright is the heart afire

Splendor that blinds the sun

Hallowed and sweet desire

Cherished by everyone

Healing and Hardship 1-14

I was ten
And SHE was eleven
And the other was already gone long ago
But now we get happiness

Bad habits follow
Bad actions 
Bad moods

Unprepared parents make 
Untempered tantrums
The medicine is killing me
Why can’t I take control

Anger and Pain
Pain and Anger
A room filled with trash
But it's MY TRASH
MINE

Sometimes in healing
We cast our pain
On the people we love

Moms got medicine
She cries for yelling
I don't care
I don't care

Time to see the therapist
I HATE THIS
I hate this
It doesn’t even work

Why did you steal?
I don’t know
I don't even remember picking that up

School is tiring
I know what I a supposed to do
But nobody sees me anyway

That girl sees me. 
I don't like it
She sees me and is rude

All the other kids get yelled at for moving
I left in the middle of class
Nobody noticed when I got back

Why do homework
It doesn't matter
Nobody looks at these grades

Why keep comics
If you can't read them
I don't understand why the packaging is important
I see that you are angry

I don't see how moving a book
From one corner to another
Is Stealing
But ok

Premium Member Don'T Quit Your Daydreams

Daydream: fragile as untempered glass.
Coming to life on clouds' rainy sky.
Building hopes it will at last surpass
other dreams we had and watched go by.

Wind's rustling leaves can nudge a dream,
though often found in bird's lovely song,
dandelion seeds wafting by streams,
sunset's reds massed in brilliant throng.

When you capture a daydream to own,
it will need some substance to sustain;
strength of desire, with future unknown,
don't let strength falter, people disdain.

Hold tight a daydream, or it may fade.
Once released, it may not reappear.
If, for moments, it lingers in shade,
It may become mist and disappear.


November 22, 2022
for Don't Quit Your Daydreams poetry contest
by Craig Cornish
6th Place


Premium Member Love Incandescent

How love takes ownership with
a single kiss, 
a sigh, a movement into a world of sensuous bliss,
Your softness of skin speaks a language anew,
the warmth of your body wraps me as you pull me close to you,
and lips explore the contours with eyes closed, 
like the mind is lost to lust and is with love overdosed,
Every moment is a slice of heaven as we explore,
deeper and deeper into our own depthless vision of love,
The flow of passion sweeps across like untempered forest fire,
In that dim lit corridor our bodies provide the only glow,
One may stop a seething ocean wave but none can stop this passion flow,
it is you and me our desires as the ocean winds roar,
Fluttering silky white curtains at our bodies to explore,
the absolute marvel of creation that is unhindered love,
a force of nature that cannot be subdued, 
Shut the world out, its petty distractions no longer endured,
Let’s stay here and for ever make love!
 
Wrote for Lu lou’s poetry competition. But
Was late by a few hours, so missed it!

Who Speaks Now

The educational forest has thickened
 I can't see the forest from the trees,
are they Republican or Democrat?
 voices once spoke out without a doubt
a lost message loud and clear for change,
 those voices have since been silenced
by the onslaught of time and age, untempered truths.

Who speaks now?
Is it only the loudest voices
 shouting bullies and the braggarts
who wave and aggrandized their failures as achievements,
 the gray men staunch in their self-centered ways
unwinding progress and holding time hostage
 to the dreams and successes of yesterday,
the future of possibilities.

These are the times that try men's souls
 looking back and tossing out the compromise
of a warring world seeking peace and conjoined hands
 where power-hungry individuals take charge not to lead
but to satisfy, enrich and praise themselves above all others;
 one giant step for the political bureaucracy
no small steps for the average man.
America is better than this.

Art's Greatest Gift

The lack of fame
  my spirit free

A bird uncaged
  amongst the trees

Its weight not lifted
  and never there

My breath in sequence
   above the air

The lack of fame
  art’s greatest gift

My oath to no one
  allegiance kept

As thoughts go hither
  and feelings yon

My soul untempered
  —my words to song

(Villanova Pennsylvania: September, 2018)

For Those of You

Who have remained steadfast
Who wield strength when beaten senseless
Who dare to taste the ugly and unrevered
Who allow emotional currents to breeze by
Who carve the hairline fracture of knowledge into deep jagged untempered faults of creation
Who pause for the soothing rumble of a child's voice
Who take a stand when legs are broken and irrevocably unbalanced
Who play to win yet never keep score
Who think win-win is obvious and redundant
Who value shelter and engagement of all sizes and shapes
Who see the crystal godly images obscured by billowy smoke and heinous toxicity
Who sing and relish the quiet participation in the shadows of the common man
Who reach down when no one else will
Who pursue and dream even when time and humanity has rendered it futile
Who know the reason why we are called mankind
Who feel that all hearts should beat together as one

I salute you.

(3/5/12)

Premium Member Dante's Path

Oh seed of Dante, dost thy path
in mid-life's turning gone astray
upon a sylvan darkness hath
to tread a rut with feet of clay?

Wast thou that youth of virtue pure
who bargained not with Judgment Day
untempered green convictions sure
before life's tests induced decay?

Didst compromise and circumstance
thy dreams of glory put away
to promise them a second chance
if thou but wouldst concede delay?

Rejoice upon thy wisdom learned!
With youth's illusions purged away
there's still a kingdom to be earned.
Persist, persist, and find the way!

June 28, 2014

Flames

The warming flames of a fireplace
Easing away the frost and the cold
The warmth massaging my face
As the sparks crack in the fires mold

The flame stretches one inch too far
Touching lightly the untempered wall
It catches and burns all things inside
Turning the walls as black as the night

A sad desolation, caused by one little spark
Chaos and destruction, by the once warm hearth
Things can change without you knowing why
Something you once loved, bringing tears from your eyes

Raleigh

It’s days like this that my mind returns to Raleigh

The pitch, sandy futon, and our intertwined deviant legs

Pushing for a fix

I for one goal, you for another


I would be more aware by the end of the night

of the smoothness of your forehead, and your full Latin lips

While you would know my hips 

and fistfuls of my golden hair

We would each know the fire on our tongues

and the familiar feeling of a heavy mind, tossing and turning

chest to chest


I loved you, but was surprised to find your hands rough

and your lips untempered

Like a child, you indulged in me

without the mind for what I am, or the culture to know better


Though still, you press and carry me

under the door frame, to the floor

and as we rest,  night continues to sink, like theatre canvas

And We are disposed to move


With your golden skin, you lie

As your fingers trace circles in my skin

I thought that you loved me too...


But when my mind returns to Raleigh

My thoughts return to you

and your cold bed, our swimming heads

and how at dawn, you dropped me off

My bitten skin looking redder in the tail lights

The Grounds of War

In time, a faded letter turned to ash,
dampened teak now acrid and abused,
a timeless quarrel's scene, an ancient clash,
one paroxysm fierce, two mastheads fused.
Subsumed in fortune's cast of reel and ruse,
blended masses nursing wounds and fears
ne'er comprehending how it ended here.

What forced each flag to wield its harshest hand,
yet cause to happenstance may seldom look,
wild thoughts untempered, soldiers of the grand,
nostalgia or clean might for pride mistook.
Fair warning to the hungry, e'en wisest book
makes not the calm of vernal noon's delight
worth more than ashen spoils from the fight.

Aftermath

Beneath the weight of that 
Decisive 
Moment, 
your mind rifles for a memory of me. 

... a waltzing illusion 
of whispered lashes upon 
tear-stained cheeks. 
Slippery images of half grins 
and muddied promises 
left outside the door to find their own way. 

I’ve met untempered currents 
that dragged you beneath 
monochromatic layers 
of near death. 

I’ve raged against the forces 
that checked your wings, 
the pale blue of your gaze 
adrift on low tide 
that missed the shadow of me 
loving you. 

I hear your voice still, in words 
left for me. 
Alone. 
And I hear time abysmal. 
And time rules our worlds. 

So I wait.

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