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Don'T Quit Your Daydreams

Daydream: fragile as untempered glass. Coming to life on clouds' rainy sky. Building hopes it will at last surpass other dreams we had and watched go by. Wind's rustling leaves can nudge a dream, though often found in bird's lovely song, dandelion seeds wafting by streams, sunset's reds massed in brilliant throng. When you capture a daydream to own, it will need some substance to sustain; strength of desire, with future unknown, don't let strength falter, people disdain. Hold tight a daydream, or it may fade. Once released, it may not reappear. If, for moments, it lingers in shade, It may become mist and disappear. November 22, 2022 for Don't Quit Your Daydreams poetry contest by Craig Cornish 6th Place

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Date: 12/9/2022 2:16:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your contest win with this outstanding poem.
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Date: 11/27/2022 3:36:00 AM
Day dreams if let slip, will vanish into thin air ! Hold fast to them stubbornly and they may come to fruition some time. Greatly enjoyed your poem Ann! All the BEST
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Date: 11/27/2022 3:34:00 AM
Day dreams if let slip, will vanish into thin air ! Hold fast to them stubbornly and they may come to fruition some time. Greatly enjoyed your poem Ann! All the BEST
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Date: 11/25/2022 10:50:00 AM
Ann, you have no idea how much I like this. From the first to the final lyric, the entire thing exudes tenderness and is crafted with such skill. A powerful message within.
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/25/2022 11:00:00 AM
Dear Lasaad, Thank you so much for your kind message. It has brightened a cloudy day!
Date: 11/23/2022 11:27:00 PM
A beautiful poem with wonderful imagery packed along with muse wow! Kudos! ^^^^^^^>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^^^^^ plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/25/2022 11:02:00 AM
Thank you for such nice comments! I did read your poem and loved it ~ left comments.
Date: 11/23/2022 7:12:00 PM
Love your musings on daydreams, Ann. G.L. in the contest! ~ gw
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/25/2022 11:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon!
Date: 11/23/2022 5:05:00 PM
"Wind's rustling leaves can nudge a dream, though often found in bird's lovely song, dandelion seeds wafting by streams, sunset's reds massed in brilliant throng." Beautiful writing! And great advice.
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Ann Peck
Date: 11/24/2022 9:25:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joe, for your kind critique! I appreciate it!

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