Thunderclouds Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Evoking the Sky

I seek the thunderclouds 
 on thunderous nights 
when karma roars under sieving clouds
 bolting within, driven by desires 
the darkness of Brahman & vitality of Krishna
rumbling earthlings, throbbing arteries 
blood rushes the heart
lightning striking limbs succumbing 
my knees weaken, 
streaked is a surrealist’s sky lit,
 shamed shadows hide
tinkling rain droplets
quenching naked napes    
given into those elements 
evoking God's wrath,
 judgement alive, awoken I’m gaining
 invoking reality, unearthing its 
primal pathways

Premium Member Domestic Bliss Is Feeling And Seeing

Looking out my bay-window,
I am feeling the new day and seeing colors of indigo.
The pretty indigo sky with big white fluffy clouds,
turning ominous and into dark thunderclouds.
My neighbors pretty garden of indigo flowers,
are getting a drink and much needed showers.
Domestic Bliss Is Feeling,
the love from living out doors is healing.
Domestic Bliss Is Seeing,  
out my bay-window because it is freeing.

Thunderclouds

Impassioned foreboders
Each of which projects
A fearsome sky
Of trees' whistly lead-ball rained
Scourging effects.
Cruel, torturous. And yet
Fine with it, I.

Impatient erasers
As streets flash pale in
Quick banishment
Of what there neath, lazy, lawned
Lie picnicking.
Again accepting. Unless
As one, glass-bent!


Premium Member No Umbrella

Constant thunder, but no blubbering - the clouds are dry,
dark, sultry; and the soil is crying out for alcohol -
A little drink of pink champagne or whisky sour cocktail.
No umbrella!
Squeeze out the plenipotentiary sopped-up water
and let the thunderclouds rip, and roar with delightful glee.
Birds and insects, in hideaway, humming softly, resting.

Tailwinds

Life’s walls remain as high as the clouds
 Covered by shrouds of thunderclouds
   Looking up I awe in vast wonder
    Mental impasse envelopes by the hour
     Hour after hour
      I grow more dour
       I knit a suit of doubt
        I only see myself with rout
         Still on the battlefield
          Inside I aimlessly yield
           A crack appears 
            The wall has fears
             A fraction of a win
              I sneak a grin 
               I smack at the crack
                I laugh as I thwack
                 Time is my weapon
                  Grit is my gun
                   The hole widens
                     The bleakness weakens
                      The wall can time-worn
                       And I can become reborn
                        Time is my tailwind

A Dirge

(In memory of Uncle Thomas)

Bumpy breeze, like a blasting roar
That day when you did soar without an oar
Twenty-two years of sorrow, too long
For many years, I sang a solemn song
Days of dark, and greedy clouds
These years have been a time of thunderclouds

What went wrong for death to take you away?
Again, this year, your memory will keep us at bay.
Your days were not in vain.
Life ends, life begins; the thrusting train 
Is still on track. Gone from this world
But not from my world

With Habakkuk Kargbo (Rabbi)
©Poem Makers SL (18/03/24)


Premium Member Cherry Blossoms in February

Cherry Blossoms in February

Cherry blossoms decorate wispy branches
In clusters of blooms like fallen clouds
Lovely flowers of sweet innocence
Shake off rain from passing thunderclouds.

Onto a Dark Shore

A turn of key looking into eternity 
A twist of soul a hard shard of light 
Splashing onto a dark shore

A spray of mist, as the sea rolls 
Dark corners of my minds tower
Like heads of thunderclouds 

Things locked deep n out of sight 
In a sea of endless night 
Slicing through hard 

Radiant and blind, light
Burning the eyes
Till darkness is infinite
The waves crash n roll 

Out to sea the thunderstorm tolls
Lightning dances, n plays
In distant memories display 

So bright, the night flashing out of sight
Going to Chrome as a key turning 
Looking into eternity

Twisted Soul, a shot into the night 
Slicing, the deep depths of twilight
The color of my mind, my inner sublime 

Listen to the sea roll 
Into the corners of my mind 
As the thunderheads build
 
Lightning boils, the wind brings the rain
The eves of the house moan
As I go blind into the endless night

Premium Member River of Clouds

Contest:  Trilonette Contest		Sponsor: Joseph May		6-21-23
#1
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River of Clouds

Lazy mists dawdle through valleys,
Wending in a river of clouds,
Surfs deep dales on rising tides.

Silver curly-cue veils dally
On twisting rivers like a shroud -
Leaves a pale kiss on riversides.

Mystic Rom roams the pine alleys,
Gypsy brume evergreens beclouds,
Cryptic nomad without a guide.

Flat bottomed shades float like galleys,
Wispy fogs tickle thunderclouds
Stolen cloud ships on a joy ride.

Rising tule croons playful songs -
Alto whispers for a singalong.

Symmetrical Thought Shifts

Doldrum days, nothing i say make them go on their way. Away with their festering pain, smiting down the mentally sane. Bright burning light in the day bringing the sight to the brave is so close, for life has its many splendors and wonders, and for that we must endure all the thunderclouds and sunder, as we ponder of life ever after, its shaky and incomprehensible cries and laughter. many speak and rebuttal all the acclimations of the extreme and the subtle. 

“No.”
“Yes.”
“No.”

All this fighting must be stopped, plant your roots and grow or suffocate and rot, for the low never prosper in their filth and clots, and they will never glow, glow with enlightenment and the knowing of the know. You may never spark your light when your eyes carry only freight and not a shred of adventure, so look around at the pyres of your passions which radiate your loves and indentures, they will guide you through this path to your above.

Premium Member Premonition

dead calm early morn
distant grumbling thunderclouds
nervous animals

Premium Member My Hymn

As early dawn, slow breaking o’er the beach,
Paints the pale blue background of the sky
In watercolor streaks of rose and peach,
A feast God spreads for those with sleepy eye
Who needs must rise to start their chores
Before the rooster crows his bright alarm,
We two will rise and open wide the doors
And start our day with beauty, arm in arm.

Although the weather all too soon can change
And bring us thunderclouds of black and gray
Or if far and wide our difficulties range
And for surcease of problems we would pray,
That precious gift we find so like a hymn
Sustains and keeps us going through the day.
We keep our hearts and minds attuned to Him
Our true direction and our sacred way.

Premium Member The Passing Storm

Ominous dark thunderclouds boil up
Beneath sun-drenched sky lanes high,
Covering with gray blankets the green
Earth's parched barren ground, so dry
And unbroken by the good farmer's plow
Left fallow by years of failing harvest,
Indignant from the drought of moisture
Disappointed by the lack of nature's best,
The unyielding deluge moves on across
Reneging on its deceitful promise of rain.

written June 18, 2021

Premium Member Thunderclouds

Towering dark cover
The frenetic light waves
Thunder roaring with wrath
Turbulence in the sky
Trembling clouds spill over
Torrential sheets of rain
Treading on earths parched skin

26.4.2021
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Contest: Pleiades T.

Premium Member The Fourth Floor of Nowhere

In restless winds and in shadows dark
over a sweeping plain of wheat so fair
a crumbling homestead stands against fate
with a wandering staircase going nowhere. 

Warily, I clutch the creaky bannister 
willing my feet to climb treacherous steps
up to the floor of Four...then I hesitate 
for my spirit is overwhelmed and bereft. 

Herein lies a faded, neglected nursery
a drooping jack-in-the-box with a frozen smile
a broken man-in-the-moon clock hangs limp
with a chilling breeze moaning all the while. 

Thunderclouds blacken the distant horizon 
like time that cloaks events from long ago
I do not possess the keys to unlock mysteries 
but I entered the floor of nowhere..this, I know. 



Written on 9/5/2020

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