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Thunderclouds

Towering dark cover The frenetic light waves Thunder roaring with wrath Turbulence in the sky Trembling clouds spill over Torrential sheets of rain Treading on earths parched skin 26.4.2021 Sponsor: Kim Merryman Contest: Pleiades T.

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/29/2021 7:40:00 PM

Carol, you portrayed thunderclouds very well! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/29/2021 11:29:00 PM

Thank you dear Kim....It was an honour to take part in your contest....much love :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2021 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write about your "THUNDERCLOUDS." Have a blessed day.................

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/28/2021 10:18:00 PM

Thanks dear Paula....much love :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 4/28/2021 2:56:00 AM

Great imagery dear Carol... I could almost see the thunderclouds.. Congrats on your win.. God bless.. ~ Ani

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/28/2021 5:56:00 AM

Thanks dear Ani....much love :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/27/2021 7:56:00 PM

Great Pleiades,Carol , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/28/2021 12:04:00 AM

Thank you dear Eve....much love do take care :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/26/2021 12:54:00 PM

Hello Carol Mitra, I like to listen to the thunder showers in the late evening. I like the sound of the thunder. With the rain pouring it is a soothing sound. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/27/2021 11:10:00 AM

Hello Carol Metra, much love to you. Your welcome. You also take car my friend.

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/26/2021 6:53:00 PM

Yes Darlene it is....much love and Thank you dear....do take care :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/26/2021 10:30:00 AM

Exceptional entry, Carol. I loved your description of the thunderclouds. They can be beautiful until the "torrential sheets of rain" come down. I've always wondered about the turmoil inside a thundercloud. Enjoyed your poem.

Carol Mitra
Date: 4/26/2021 6:52:00 PM

Thank you L.Milton....yes I love watching thunderclouds too....here I have used it to also portray the turmoil within us :)