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Thunderclouds

Towering dark cover
The frenetic light waves
Thunder roaring with wrath
Turbulence in the sky
Trembling clouds spill over
Torrential sheets of rain
Treading on earths parched skin

26.4.2021
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Contest: Pleiades T.

Copyright © Carol Mitra | Year Posted 2021

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Kim Merryman Date: 4/29/2021 7:40:00 PM Carol, you portrayed thunderclouds very well! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/29/2021 11:29:00 PM Thank you dear Kim....It was an honour to take part in your contest....much love :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/28/2021 11:35:00 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write about your "THUNDERCLOUDS." Have a blessed day................. Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/28/2021 10:18:00 PM Thanks dear Paula....much love :)

Anitha Jayasankar Date: 4/28/2021 2:56:00 AM Great imagery dear Carol... I could almost see the thunderclouds.. Congrats on your win.. God bless.. ~ Ani Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/28/2021 5:56:00 AM Thanks dear Ani....much love :)

Eve Roper Date: 4/27/2021 7:56:00 PM Great Pleiades,Carol , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/28/2021 12:04:00 AM Thank you dear Eve....much love do take care :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/26/2021 12:54:00 PM Hello Carol Mitra, I like to listen to the thunder showers in the late evening. I like the sound of the thunder. With the rain pouring it is a soothing sound. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 4/27/2021 11:10:00 AM Hello Carol Metra, much love to you. Your welcome. You also take car my friend. Carol Mitra Date: 4/26/2021 6:53:00 PM Yes Darlene it is....much love and Thank you dear....do take care :)

L Milton Hankins Date: 4/26/2021 10:30:00 AM Exceptional entry, Carol. I loved your description of the thunderclouds. They can be beautiful until the "torrential sheets of rain" come down. I've always wondered about the turmoil inside a thundercloud. Enjoyed your poem. Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/26/2021 6:52:00 PM Thank you L.Milton....yes I love watching thunderclouds too....here I have used it to also portray the turmoil within us :)

Unseeking Seeker Date: 4/26/2021 7:58:00 AM Brilliant entry, Carol! Best of luck for the contest! Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/26/2021 6:50:00 PM Thank you dear....much love...do take care :)

Alexis Y. Date: 4/26/2021 5:35:00 AM WoW! Carol, You did good with the letter T. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/26/2021 5:57:00 AM Thanks dear Alexis....True that :)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/26/2021 4:08:00 AM Great, Carol! Login to Reply Carol Mitra Date: 4/26/2021 4:56:00 AM Thank you dear Kim...much love :)