Carol Mitra Poet Free verse

Thunderclouds

Towering dark cover
The frenetic light waves
Thunder roaring with wrath
Turbulence in the sky
Trembling clouds spill over
Torrential sheets of rain
Treading on earths parched skin

26.4.2021
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Contest: Pleiades T.

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Kim Merryman April 29, 2021 at 7:40 PM Carol, you portrayed thunderclouds very well! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M Carol Mitra April 29, 2021 at 11:29 PM Thank you dear Kim....It was an honour to take part in your contest....much love :)

Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2021 at 11:35 AM Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write about your "THUNDERCLOUDS." Have a blessed day................. Carol Mitra April 28, 2021 at 10:18 PM Thanks dear Paula....much love :)

Anitha Jayasankar April 28, 2021 at 2:56 AM Great imagery dear Carol... I could almost see the thunderclouds.. Congrats on your win.. God bless.. ~ Ani Carol Mitra April 28, 2021 at 5:56 AM Thanks dear Ani....much love :)

Eve Roper April 27, 2021 at 7:56 PM Great Pleiades,Carol , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Carol Mitra April 28, 2021 at 12:04 AM Thank you dear Eve....much love do take care :)

Darlene De Beaulieu April 26, 2021 at 12:54 PM Hello Carol Mitra, I like to listen to the thunder showers in the late evening. I like the sound of the thunder. With the rain pouring it is a soothing sound. Enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu April 27, 2021 at 11:10 AM Hello Carol Metra, much love to you. Your welcome. You also take car my friend. Carol Mitra April 26, 2021 at 6:53 PM Yes Darlene it is....much love and Thank you dear....do take care :)

L Milton Hankins April 26, 2021 at 10:30 AM Exceptional entry, Carol. I loved your description of the thunderclouds. They can be beautiful until the "torrential sheets of rain" come down. I've always wondered about the turmoil inside a thundercloud. Enjoyed your poem. Carol Mitra April 26, 2021 at 6:52 PM Thank you L.Milton....yes I love watching thunderclouds too....here I have used it to also portray the turmoil within us :)

Unseeking Seeker April 26, 2021 at 7:58 AM Brilliant entry, Carol! Best of luck for the contest! Carol Mitra April 26, 2021 at 6:50 PM Thank you dear....much love...do take care :)

Alexis Y. April 26, 2021 at 5:35 AM WoW! Carol, You did good with the letter T. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Carol Mitra April 26, 2021 at 5:57 AM Thanks dear Alexis....True that :)

Kim Rodrigues April 26, 2021 at 4:08 AM Great, Carol! Carol Mitra April 26, 2021 at 4:56 AM Thank you dear Kim...much love :)