Domestic Bliss Poetry Contest. Sponsored by: Margarita Lillico

Domestic Bliss Is Feeling And Seeing

Looking out my bay-window,
I am feeling the new day and seeing colors of indigo.
The pretty indigo sky with big white fluffy clouds,
turning ominous and into dark thunderclouds.
My neighbors pretty garden of indigo flowers,
are getting a drink and much needed showers.
Domestic Bliss Is Feeling,
the love from living out doors is healing.
Domestic Bliss Is Seeing,  
out my bay-window because it is freeing.

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Karen Croft

May 19, 2026 at 9:43 AM

A very nice relaxing poem

Paula Goldsmith

May 19, 2026 at 10:48 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you found this to be, A very nice relaxing poem. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed/great/fun day writing away...................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

May 19, 2026 at 9:32 AM

Dear Paula, born from a morning that simply opens its hands and lets you breathe. I loved how the indigo sky shifting moods, the garden drinking its blessing, the way a window can become a small sanctuary when the world grows heavy. You caught the sweetness of ordinary moments, the kind that steady the heart without asking for applause. Very warming! Blessings, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

May 19, 2026 at 10:47 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, kind words. Glad you enjoyed this write. Yes, the early morning opens the great day up with all the pretty colors. We can enjoy the beauty from our window. Have a blessed/great/fun day writing away...................

Victor Buhagiar

May 19, 2026 at 8:31 AM

You make me indulge in pleasant solitude.

Paula Goldsmith

May 19, 2026 at 10:43 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. Early morning is a great time of the day with all the pretty colors. Have a blessed/great/fun day writing away...................

Valsa George

May 18, 2026 at 10:00 PM

Reading your soothing poem, I too get that nice feel. Early morn with indigo sky that changes before our eyes into a cloudy sky, allowing a much needed drizzle is so delightful. All the Best dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

May 19, 2026 at 10:42 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Also Thanks for your, All the Best. Glad you enjoyed this write. Early morning is a great time of the day. Have a blessed/great/fun day writing away...................