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No Umbrella

Constant thunder, but no blubbering - the clouds are dry, dark, sultry; and the soil is crying out for alcohol - A little drink of pink champagne or whisky sour cocktail. No umbrella! Squeeze out the plenipotentiary sopped-up water and let the thunderclouds rip, and roar with delightful glee. Birds and insects, in hideaway, humming softly, resting.

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Date: 7/31/2025 6:33:00 PM
Somebody is tired of the heat and ready for some good old rain drops. I like it, Kim. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/1/2025 12:48:00 PM
We got some nice rain last night…needed it!
Date: 7/31/2025 4:24:00 PM
I like the idea of rain as champagne...and we need a lot of it here in Texas right now. So hot and dry. Was 104 degrees here today. EEGADS
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2025 4:36:00 PM
Yikes! Yes, it’s been hot here too!
Date: 7/31/2025 4:04:00 PM
I love the thunderstorms, the insects and birds and all the joy of rain on a dry thirsty land! We are trying to be careful to try to have umbrellas on hand here at this time of year during monsoons, but if not, a nice fresh summer shower is still a lot of fun :) <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2025 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Bj, for your lovely comment! Hugs
Date: 7/31/2025 12:48:00 PM
Love this one. Rain as champaign. Nice!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2025 2:45:00 PM
Thank you! You made me smile! :)
Date: 7/31/2025 12:32:00 PM
We are needing a nice cooling generalized rain, but sometimes in summer all we can do is hope. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I can see the scenes and heard the sounds in my mind's eye. Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2025 2:46:00 PM
I think it will be a little cooler. Today, after rain, feels so humid!
Date: 7/31/2025 11:36:00 AM
We could sure use some in Phoenix. Where I am, have not seen a measurable rain for months. Everything is parched. Very nicely written.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2025 2:47:00 PM
My Aunt said the same. She lives in Green Valley, closer to Tucson.
Date: 7/31/2025 10:14:00 AM
Hello Kim Rodringues, This type of rain needs no umbrella. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/31/2025 3:01:00 PM
Hello Kim, oh, lucky guess. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/31/2025 2:47:00 PM
;) Yes

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