Surrendered Poems | Examples

Be Surrendered To A Loving Saviour

All of us are in a wilderness
a maze that holds us down
but there's good news for you
there's one to take away your frown

Jesus Christ has come here for you
taking on our earthly frame to wear
even our sins He's put on His body
taking it to the cross to be laid bare

This Jesus died with all our sins
paid the price for salvation's cost
crying out to all to draw near
no matter your state as cold as frost

Jesus calls for your surrender
giving over to Christ's holy rule
bring yourself to His humble feet
proving that you're nobody's fool

Jesus is indeed a loving saviour
one indeed so loving and true
His love is wonderfully majestic
it's worth it to give Him all of you

I'M Surrendered

You can blame me as a nefarious devilish being
Your judgment can convict me as a hellish king
But I'm a surrendered creation from the womb
Where my birth has cultivated my ultimate tomb

© Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
01/05/2023

Surrendered

You can't from the well-guarded escape.
It should be a wonder mouths to gape,
Each warder to think self big Ape;
Maximum security Rape!

You dare not from the prison escape;
All days, after recapture, Grape,
Warders familiar with the landscape;
The things you say, your plans, your cough tape...

Gosh! I can see them all your hairs scrape, 
In prickly clothes your flogged body drape
And sweat cause to break out on your nape
You don't when surrendered escape

Suns Surrendered

Bucks managed to win
By their own teeth’s skin.

Surrendered Love

caress me with soft love
and a lullaby it would sing a starry night
up above

fierce flame will burn
harmony of passion will light
unworn

breath kiss
by candle light
bliss

fleeting glance awakes Love
bathing in afterglow moon's light
bliss

3/5/2021

Minichu form by: Mohan Chutani
to late for the contest


 

1. This is a New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU (proposed by Mohan Chutani)
2. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
3. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 
4. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of  stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.
Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.
5. Syllable count : 
Stanza 1: 6,12,3 (3 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 2: 4,8,2 ( 2 times 2,4,1)
Stanza 3: 2,4,1
Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

Surrendered Love Love Me Like You Mean It

Fragrant magick candlelight flickers hot, 

blue, red flame stimulating sparks bind hands. 

Tame harmony remains. "Love." While love awakes

a wanderer of my emboldened heart;

gentle wind meander blows, and gusts oppose. 

I discern your quintessence in the breeze

emerging out of dust of dry humble ground 

from I was formed ... a fleeting glance into 

colorfulness night; for our love rhymes 

of aged mirth; our unconditional surrendered 

love eclipse with flickering light while honey 

sips our lips. Bound by love and devotion

my soul embraces you …you cradle me close

a thirst to be near for all eternity.

A dwelling among this vessel knowing

that you are in me and I in you 

bathing in the afterglow of sunset 

under heavens studded with bright stars.

11/29/2019

Poetry Contest: Love Me Like You Mean It 
Sponsored by: Julie Leigh Rodeheaver 

magick
NOUN
archaic spelling of magic.

Breath Surrendered

Words apprehend
  a willing prisoner
    —verse to fly between the bars

The latest inmate 
  with breath surrendered
    —an incarcerated bard

(Villanova Pennsylvania: February, 2014)

Surrendered Dreaming

I knew you long before
    pursuit's intention shone,
felt you in sun's fiery warmth
       & shooting star surrender,
heard your voice on soft
  burbled whispers of sweet zephyrs
    and nectar'd songs of hummingbirds,
saw your depths of magnificence
        in sapphire ocean tides
     cresting 'neath effulgent moons
savoring breaths of crystalline
   snowflakes on crisp sea air,
I knew strength in your convictions    
   for it braved every fantasy's illusion
     acquiesced 'tween dulcet desires,
whilst the strong presence of your charms
     envelop'd every night's dreaming

I Surrendered

Mine eyes never saw such a handsome face,
thoughts of you became every part of me.
I longed to be in thine strong embrace,
You set my being aflame immediately. 
 
One look from you unlocked unknown passion, 
your presence caught me by surprise.  
I have no doubt you will bring much satisfaction, 
I want to rest on your chest until sunrise.

Who knew I'd be smitten by just a glance, 
my mind, body and soul belongs to you.
In awe of your physique; I'm in a trance,
You rescued me from feeling sad and blue.

I've found the one who holds the key to my heart,
I surrendered to love; and we shall never part.


 




 
Alexis Y.
08-02-16

Living Fully Surrendered

A life lived pleasing yourself
nothing of value does it bring
only leaving you a void within
just left to feel a hollow ring

Where is life that is abundant
one which satisfies you to the full
that has no horrible emptiness
gives you fullness so very cool

The answer lies in having faith
in God who lives eternally so
believing and trusting on His word
which reveals Jesus His son to show

Jesus calls those that follow Him
to surrender all at His feet
giving up all of self making Jesus Lord
finding loving acceptance at His mercy seat

If Wishes Are Not Surrendered

a tiny particle like 
                                                  in the wishes of God 
                                              wishes are meant to be null
                                        if wishes are not surrendered to Him

Surrendered

hollow echoes call
empty thoughts run mad screaming
cries unacknowledged
heartache surrenders itself
to agony's lewd defeat

©  10-9-2012
For: PD's  Tanka 'Me' a Sad Song

Surrendered Heart

The goodbye part was the hardest to say..
Heartfelt surrender Lord, I will ardently obey.

No one understands, as many tears fall..
Lord, I will adoringly yield and await your call..

As I faithfully hold steadfast upon you..
In your perfect timing, all will come due.

As I continue to learn and surrender my heart.
Holy spirit, guide and teach your wisdom to impart.

Surrendered

He was so difficult to penetrate
it was like trying to infiltrate

he stayed strong
would not be strung along

until that day he cried
trying to cover it up he lied

so I let him be and gave him space
until he felt ready for my embrace

from that moment I felt like a hero
this me is needed, no longer a zero

he needed me in an unique way,
I did not feel like a cast away…

Surrendered To My Love

I searched for you night and day,
My lungs gave out and breath gave way.
It was endless in miles and vast in count.
 
The treasures in measure are heavy in amount.
Piece by piece I seek to find,
Gathering myself with a soul and mind!
 
I prayed for you day and night,
My heart gave way and my feelings gave out.
I was surrendered to my love without a doubt!
 
 
© Copyright: Ann Rich   2006

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