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caress me with soft love and a lullaby it would sing a starry night up above fierce flame will burn harmony of passion will light unworn breath kiss by candle light bliss fleeting glance awakes Love bathing in afterglow moon's light bliss 3/5/2021 Minichu form by: Mohan Chutani to late for the contest 1. This is a New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU (proposed by Mohan Chutani) 2. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 3. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting. 5. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 (3 times 2,4,1) Stanza 2: 4,8,2 ( 2 times 2,4,1) Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

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Date: 4/3/2021 6:55:00 AM
Eve, a lovely perfect Minichu. How tender feelings can be expressed in a strict regimen, we must learn from you. Hope all well. next time, hoping to see your entry in my contest. Best wishes. Mohan
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Date: 3/8/2021 5:25:00 PM
Wow! You have worked so hard on this beautiful love-poem, and you didn't have a chance to enter it!!! The rhyme-scheme sounds challenging - you have successfully incorporated it in a lovely romantic poem. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 3/5/2021 11:43:00 AM
Kudos for writing a wonderful romantic poem with a style that looks very complicated. Hugs and love Jennifer.
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Date: 3/5/2021 6:28:00 AM
Lovely and lively.. exciting. Enchanting. Enlightening. love it. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/5/2021 2:46:00 AM
- So sad you did not make it to the contest ... it would be a winning poem ... lovely written, Eve :) - Have a wonderful day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2021 2:17:00 AM
A lovely romantic lullaby. Best for a win.
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