Paloma P Poet Prose Poetry

Surrendered Dreaming

I knew you long before
    pursuit's intention shone,
felt you in sun's fiery warmth
       & shooting star surrender,
heard your voice on soft
  burbled whispers of sweet zephyrs
    and nectar'd songs of hummingbirds,
saw your depths of magnificence
        in sapphire ocean tides
     cresting 'neath effulgent moons
savoring breaths of crystalline
   snowflakes on crisp sea air,
I knew strength in your convictions    
   for it braved every fantasy's illusion
     acquiesced 'tween dulcet desires,
whilst the strong presence of your charms
     envelop'd every night's dreaming

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Sara Kendrick December 9, 2016 at 4:41 PM Enjoyed reading your very poetic work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Doug Vinson December 7, 2016 at 10:30 AM Paloma, your voice washes over the reader, enriching their very blood.

Jannie Breedt November 7, 2016 at 3:05 PM It grabs the heart and squeezes it and then you release Quite beautiful

Phil Capitano October 31, 2016 at 7:19 AM Too many great images..."savouring breaths of crystalline snowflakes on crisp sea air"...I can taste them. Excellent. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:10 AM Enchanted by your review, thanks so much Phil.

Charmaine Chircop October 27, 2016 at 1:50 PM Such a beautiful poem Paloma...Too .many exceptional lines.Am gonna fave it. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:09 AM Many thanks for your lovely review and the fave Charmaine.

Heidi Sands October 27, 2016 at 7:59 AM I really like this one Paloma! Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:08 AM Thanks Heidi!

Ravi Sathasivam October 27, 2016 at 6:20 AM Excellent. I like the description of love. Well said. Thanks for sharing it. Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:08 AM Thanks for reading and your lovely review Ravi.

Susan Baquie October 27, 2016 at 5:55 AM Your poem is impressive in its descriptive expressiveness Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:07 AM Much appreciated Susan.

Probir Gupta October 27, 2016 at 5:32 AM A nice dulcet enterprise ... pleasure read ... Paloma P November 1, 2016 at 10:06 AM Thanks Probir.

White Wolf October 27, 2016 at 4:59 AM Now that's the way to do it! Into the fav's this one goes too! Paloma P October 27, 2016 at 5:31 AM You're too good to me Rick! Thanks so much. :)