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Surrendered Dreaming

I knew you long before
    pursuit's intention shone,
felt you in sun's fiery warmth
       & shooting star surrender,
heard your voice on soft
  burbled whispers of sweet zephyrs
    and nectar'd songs of hummingbirds,
saw your depths of magnificence
        in sapphire ocean tides
     cresting 'neath effulgent moons
savoring breaths of crystalline
   snowflakes on crisp sea air,
I knew strength in your convictions    
   for it braved every fantasy's illusion
     acquiesced 'tween dulcet desires,
whilst the strong presence of your charms
     envelop'd every night's dreaming

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/9/2016 4:41:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your very poetic work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2016 10:30:00 AM
Paloma, your voice washes over the reader, enriching their very blood.
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Date: 11/7/2016 3:05:00 PM
It grabs the heart and squeezes it and then you release Quite beautiful
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Date: 10/31/2016 7:19:00 AM
Too many great images..."savouring breaths of crystalline snowflakes on crisp sea air"...I can taste them. Excellent.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 10:10:00 AM
Enchanted by your review, thanks so much Phil.
Date: 10/27/2016 1:50:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem Paloma...Too .many exceptional lines.Am gonna fave it.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 10:09:00 AM
Many thanks for your lovely review and the fave Charmaine.
Date: 10/27/2016 7:59:00 AM
I really like this one Paloma!
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Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thanks Heidi!
Date: 10/27/2016 6:20:00 AM
Excellent. I like the description of love. Well said. Thanks for sharing it.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thanks for reading and your lovely review Ravi.
Date: 10/27/2016 5:55:00 AM
Your poem is impressive in its descriptive expressiveness
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Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 10:07:00 AM
Much appreciated Susan.
Date: 10/27/2016 5:32:00 AM
A nice dulcet enterprise ... pleasure read ...
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Paloma P
Date: 11/1/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thanks Probir.
Date: 10/27/2016 4:59:00 AM
Now that's the way to do it! Into the fav's this one goes too!
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Paloma P
Date: 10/27/2016 5:31:00 AM
You're too good to me Rick! Thanks so much. :)