If Wishes Are Not Surrendered

a tiny particle like 
                                                  in the wishes of God 
                                              wishes are meant to be null
                                        if wishes are not surrendered to Him
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 12:02 PM
I love the light, and everything I have should come from God, any wish I ever had or have, I will surrender.. Thank you for the lovely and wonderful message, my best friend.. xox~ Linda
Devnath  Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 12:26 PM
Thanks not a lot but unending lot of thanks for your nice comment. Loved always, my best friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 12:59 PM
- You are a "small part of a piece" in a big "puzzle" ..... without you there would be a huge hole in the picture!! - (Do not think I completely understand .... this with the wishes: "are meant to be null") we can not fulfill all our wishes ..... but it is allowed to wish (?!?) ---I am a bit silly now. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 9:27 AM
Yes, i feel in myself that i am a very tiny piece like, in this wonderful Universe including this world. God is so biggest......of infinity that "am" has no meaning at all. Before His highest finest wishes "my" is near about to null, have no meaning at all, i feel in myself. So i feel that it's better to surrender to God. Thanks my lovely friend for your nice comment. Loved always, bl
Michelle Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful. I love this write. -Juli-Michelle
Devnath  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 12:54 PM
Thanks for your beautiful comment, my poetess friend. Loved always, bl
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace