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I Surrendered

Mine eyes never saw such a handsome face, thoughts of you became every part of me. I longed to be in thine strong embrace, You set my being aflame immediately. One look from you unlocked unknown passion, your presence caught me by surprise. I have no doubt you will bring much satisfaction, I want to rest on your chest until sunrise. Who knew I'd be smitten by just a glance, my mind, body and soul belongs to you. In awe of your physique; I'm in a trance, You rescued me from feeling sad and blue. I've found the one who holds the key to my heart, I surrendered to love; and we shall never part. Alexis Y. 08-02-16

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/9/2017 1:45:00 PM

A very romantic sonnet, Alexis. Sensual and silken words laced with desire and confession. A poetic gem. An instant fave. Love always.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/11/2016 5:16:00 PM

Hi Alexis, excellent sonnet. I love the content and the flow of this piece. The emotions flow so gently. Your ending couplet does sing into my night, so beautiful the vision. This This is a wonderful write Alexis. The gentle love flows from your pen. Thishas to be a seven. Have a good evening. Hugs....Mike. XX

Justin Bordner

Date: 8/9/2016 6:37:00 PM

Rest on the chest of love until the sun begs to see you bloom...you make being smitten so very pleasant Poetess. Your love is decisive in this poem's finish, it's great! J.A.B.

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/8/2016 7:27:00 PM

A well-written, beautiful and romantic Sonnet, Alexis. The last two lines sum it all up very well. Your poem should do very well in the contest.

Funom Makama

Date: 8/6/2016 11:45:00 AM

This is awesome and fantastic. I love it in every way. Lovely, lovely, so lovely.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 9:28:00 AM

Your romantic pen has served you well, Alexis! Glad you found the one who holds the key to your heart:) In a case like this, it is so easy to surrender to love! Regards // paul

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/6/2016 7:27:00 AM

Beautifully worded, Alexis and very romantic. CayCay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/3/2016 3:09:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..I enjoyed reading it today..Thanks for dropping by..I wonder if today was Tom-Pierre's day to die?? Sara

Gerald Kithinji

Date: 8/3/2016 2:34:00 PM

Surrendered to love... loved that.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2016 7:09:00 AM

Great to see you doing a romantic sonnet like this, Alexis Well done, and I am so happy. I am now caught up with comments. Just too busy sometimes to get to them all . I am hoping my mind will let me get back to sleep now. Been up since after 3 a.m.!!! See you later, kiddo.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/3/2016 6:07:00 AM

I think you meant " I've found the one who holds the key to my heart" as a whole you have eloquently expressed desire. Thanks as well for your thoughtful visit and comment.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/2/2016 9:38:00 PM

So lovely Alexis, was that a song inspired you? I searched and couldn't find it!

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/2/2016 10:04:00 PM

Hi Arthur, Thank you so much. No it was inspired by Becca's contest. I appreciate that yoh stopped by:-) Alexis

Viv Wigley

Date: 8/2/2016 8:26:00 PM

Lovely sonnet,Alexis. It could have been written about me. Apart from the physique. And the satisfaction bit. Viv x

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/2/2016 8:30:00 PM

Hi Viv, Lol. Thank you so much. You made my day with that awesome comment:-) Alexis

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2016 4:35:00 PM

Very beautiful and so romantic...Charma : )

Alexis Y.
Date: 8/2/2016 8:32:00 PM

Hi Charma, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you were the first comment: -) Alexis