I'M Surrendered

You can blame me as a nefarious devilish being
Your judgment can convict me as a hellish king
But I'm a surrendered creation from the womb
Where my birth has cultivated my ultimate tomb

© Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
01/05/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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January 12, 2025 at 12:11 AM
You are a devilish being. You people are demons..
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January 12, 2025 at 12:32 AM
Yeah....sometimes okay
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