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Surrendered

He was so difficult to penetrate it was like trying to infiltrate he stayed strong would not be strung along until that day he cried trying to cover it up he lied so I let him be and gave him space until he felt ready for my embrace from that moment I felt like a hero this me is needed, no longer a zero he needed me in an unique way, I did not feel like a cast away…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/2/2010 1:31:00 PM
nice write
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Date: 8/30/2010 2:50:00 PM
Wow Im glad I read this today, all kinds of feeling flow with this Gem....Luv Michael
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:45:00 AM
Penetrate? MMMmmmmMMMmm!!! what on your mind GIRLFRIEND? As always an excellent piece Wilma
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Date: 8/30/2010 8:16:00 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:36:00 PM
great little poem about someone who finally needed you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:43:00 PM
oooooooo! I love this one, enjoyed your couplets a gift a man can feel the same way to,..p.d.
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:26:00 PM
Men try to hold in their emotions more than women, Wilma. You were right in giving him space until he could accept comfort. Beautifully written, my friend. And I want you to know how much your support has meant to me in the past week. Thanks so much! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2010 11:19:00 AM
In time he capitulated, but you were there. Nice poem Wilma. Well done on the walk > thank you for your always lovely comments >> James
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