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Surrendered

hollow echoes call empty thoughts run mad screaming cries unacknowledged heartache surrenders itself to agony's lewd defeat © 10-9-2012 For: PD's Tanka 'Me' a Sad Song

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Debra Squyres

Date: 10/24/2012 5:02:00 AM

As much as I dislike calling Surrender, I do feel each line. Congrats on making the winners list !! Nice Tanka !!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2012 3:56:00 PM

good job, Tanya, congrats on the winners' list.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/22/2012 12:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Tanya. Love, Carol XXXX

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 10/22/2012 7:37:00 AM

congrats on your win! so sad...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2012 4:40:00 PM

CONGRATS TANYA ON AN OUTSTANDING WRITE AND WIN WITH TANKA SURRENDERED LUV ..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2012 11:55:00 AM

Tanya, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD

Robert Johnson

Date: 10/10/2012 4:12:00 PM

Reads wonderful up as well as down. In solemn content, we know ourselves. A little hell bent up on the shelves. A poet knows a silent verse. Befalls the spirit like a curse.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2012 3:49:00 PM

It really gives the sensation of defeat. HOpe you don't really feel that way, but after what you said about relating to my bio, Maybe you kind of do!! Good luck in PD's Contest.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/10/2012 3:48:00 PM

This is a truly sad write my friend! I really enjoyed this incredible poem that you have written here! What a seriously intriguing piece, Great Work!!