Succumbing Poems | Examples

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At the Street Fair

Police cars block the side streets;
The avenue’s car-free
To make the strolling easy
For pedestrians like me.

The booths hold clothes and jewelry
And crafts of every type,
But front and center is the food,
Deserving of the hype.

Most every nationality
Is represented by
Whatever meals the chefs at hand
Can chop or stir or fry.

Aromas fill the neighborhood
As people buy and munch
A snack to tide them over
Or a more substantial lunch.

Distilleries display their wares
Near smoothies packed with fruit,
The locals and the visitors
In purchasing pursuit.

A lovely way to spend some time
On a fall-like afternoon,
Succumbing to the urge to buy,
To which I’m not immune.

Care not for the Wh0re

Poke and point and pince and prod
My penniless pockets
And a bra unable to uphold,
A breast to guarantee your rest

Lay in alleys in all your ailing worries 
And sloughs of spittle
Splurged and purged b'neath your body.
Hold me, honour me,
Caress the cares entangled within my clumped hair
Harass the proficient proclamations of love,
Laying alongside my broken body.

I dare leer at the lies, leashing my soul to your life
For I do but believe 
Boys breed bearded brawlers 
And flesh too calloused to caress
And I vacate a vacuum 
Of hands vying for the wet of my sex 
And the sucking cumbersome succumbing 
Salary, siezing a lustful lustre to shine 'pon my sultry gaze

Silent Bees

The dumbfounded apiary
It has struck dumb the humming bee

The Queen is dead like still-born lamb
Mute mellifluous dithyramb

The hive is numb a hollow tomb
And honeycomb a waxy womb

The honey workers of the comb
Took crumbs of wax and left their home

In stillness like a catacomb 
They make their way to distant coomb

Off on a prom climbing the air 
With great aplomb yet unaware

On a limb far away from hive
On strange corymb they can't survive

Succumbing now to nature's debt
I doubt they'll see a new sunset

Benumbed sadness in my heart's plumb
For, I shall miss their subtle hum


Premium Member The Pensive Poet

    morose 
sleepless in bed
a grieving poet
his raw emotions
     flooding 
         blank pages
 in the dead of twilight
c  a  l  c  u  l  a  t  i  n  g 
the weight of his grief
         paralyzed 
by sudden loneliness
his moribund four-legged companion 
of a decade and change
couldn't be saved
succumbing to cancer
euthanized
        a huge loss
he loved that dog 
more than he ever did 
most humans
his thoughts 
intermittently wandering 
toward a particular memory -
a fun game of fetch 
at the park with "Lucky" -
his tired eyes 
finally flutter shut
heartfelt send-off
unfinished 
pen still trapped
between his ink-stained fingers 
elegy to be continued...
in the infancy of daybreak
he will ensure 
his fellow mourners 
know just how much 
his beloved "Lucky"
 meant to him

Premium Member Evoking the Sky

I seek the thunderclouds 
 on thunderous nights 
when karma roars under sieving clouds
 bolting within, driven by desires 
the darkness of Brahman & vitality of Krishna
rumbling earthlings, throbbing arteries 
blood rushes the heart
lightning striking limbs succumbing 
my knees weaken, 
streaked is a surrealist’s sky lit,
 shamed shadows hide
tinkling rain droplets
quenching naked napes    
given into those elements 
evoking God's wrath,
 judgement alive, awoken I’m gaining
 invoking reality, unearthing its 
primal pathways

Premium Member Addicted to Your Alchemy

The air stirred
Just enough to hold my attention
An eerie warning
A subtle summons 
No hint of witch or wizard
The subtlety of a sensuous
Mortar and pestle
Drifting through the room
Crushing my resistance
Seeking the presence
Of unknown feelings
The air swirled
Easing my resistance
Succumbing to her wiles
Captured within her aura
I rose to greet her
Somehow
I had become
Addicted to your alchemy


Premium Member Untitled

A proud city in utter ruin
So many heroes slain
A fleet sailing homewards
Loaded with noble captives
Destined for slavery
After a ten years' siege
 Prompted by a king's wrath
Over his wife's succumbing
To a young prince's charms
Which won her heart,
Himself bedazzled 
By the fineness of her form.
They fled his kingdom
For the prince's own
Out of that love tryst
Tragedy grew
To leave pristine white sands
 Stained with blood
And all because of beauty.

Premium Member An Epiphany Dawns

An isolated journey towards the shores of remembrance.
Open toed traces pave the path of acceptance,
She looks up at stars that have already fallen.
Upon Her arrival, She held Her hand for a blessing.

The elegance, held together by a silk white dress.

A crescent moon signals the rising dusk.
Teasing Her, the light casts Her shadow.
The silhouette grows as She waits under the white glow. 
Quietly lying still, succumbing to forbidden emotion.

The light flickers. Drifting forward, She ascends.

Shine down, a soft kiss from the waning crescent. 
Floating above stranger tides, water spreads outwards.
The hollowed out patterns of footprints,
washed away by shallow ripples.

As the tide comes, Her heart races.

The radiant glow softly disappears into the darkness.
A slow descent allows Her feet to rest once more.
With tears from Her eyes and a soft smile,
She looks upon the rising blue hues of the sky.

Resting on Her knees, She lowers Her hands in Her lap.

With a soothing breeze,
All She can do is stare at the faint cries of daylight.
With dawn on the rise,
a moment of peace leaves through a tear from Her eyes.

Premium Member LET IT RAIN

The distant touch of an ocean breeze
Softly caresses an eager awareness
A tease upon the tip of the tongue
The silence of a now idle flag
Inhaling the heaviness of the moment
Readying itself for the coolness of her kiss
Savoring the humid aroma of its nearness
Succumbing to the Summer’s humid need


//Nette Onclaud sponsor, LET IT RAIN Poetry Contest//


©1/18/2026

Always there on a tough day

My dogs look at me and I know what they say
Go away, shut up so we can play
They look at me with those adoring eyes
And know how to get their prize
They know how to manipulate my soul
Have me under their full control 
They will bark at me if they want something 
Will bully me until I start succumbing 
They dare me to challenge them
No shouting or condemn 
They will answer me with attitude 
Expecting me to show gratitude 
They are so damn cute
And an absolute hoot
They are the rulers of my world
Without them I would be twirled 
They keep me going everyday
They are kind and gentle, not when they play
They can communicate
And can educated
Into their way of thinking 
Without over thinking 
They are my fur babies
All cute as daisies

Fruits

A fruit from the tree of life,
Fed by goodness and strife,
Like a knife the winds blow,
It falls into the shadow,
Withered and rotting,
Waiting to grow,
Succumbing to the flow of time,
Priming the seeds inside,
Aware of the ride,
Through changing tides,
And riversides,
All the elements collide,
Dividing the seed from its needs,
They've agreed to the process,
As they progress down the river,
Quivering into crevices,
Eventually coming to rest,
Doing their best to take root,
Breaking through into a new world,
Growing toward the light,
Fighting the environment,
It grows into enlightenment,
The excitement of new things,
Brings many different offerings,
A collection of blossoms,
Waiting to bloom,
Grooming for pollination,
Opening to the invasion,
Any moment the miracle could happen,
The force of life takes action,
The interaction taking root,
The tree of life grows another fruit.

Premium Member Death Bed Poetry: Jesus Christ

Not succumbing to eternity 
at a death bed, but at the cross
My Saviour and Lord gave up the ghost…

According to the Scriptures in John 19:30, 
“When Jesus therefore had received the vinegar, 
he said, It is finished: and he bowed his head, and gave up the ghost.”

Yes, at His crucifixion, He declared, “It is finished.”
Such was and is always a statement of great triumph
Reverberating God’s compassion toward every human
Offering His gift of eternal life to sinners like you and me.

Indeed, He uttered, “It is finished.”
Such is His assurance of everlasting redemption
Reaching-out to those who believe His sacrificial work
By faith… believing Him as the way, the truth, and the life.

Gloriously, He proclaimed, “It is finished.”
Such is now my vibrant hope as I strive and persist
To share the Gospel, testifying of His loving kindness
And by His grace, cheering others with His peace and joy.

With His omnipotence, He asserted, “It is finished.”
Such keeps me going on, persevering to do my best
Maximizing opportunities for functional role-performance
So that when I face Him, I’ll say, “By Your mercy, I finished the race.”

Emptiness

alone on this desolate beach 
this sandcastle sits
empty, like me

a thunderous roar
of emotions
crashing down
threatening existence
its salty spray
taunting my lips
where kisses once lingered

darkened thoughts
weaving in and out
of a clouded mind 
a soul lost
somewhere within

heartbeat quickens 
like the ocean’s force
within this storm’s rage
Its fury inching 
closer and closer

short winded breaths 
succumbing 
beneath its crash

Premium Member Love the Pathfinder

In quiet moments
a compass points to the way
out of time's tide plod
that drags the mind to boredom
confined by reality

Love the pathfinder
bridges the gap to find bliss
beyond mind's limits
when you yield to what drives you
succumbing to true love's pull

Premium Member Human Nature

Skeptical midst truth
deceiving self with hope's bliss
while struggling against pride
then battling over jealousy
as triumph missed mark of confidence...
oh, vain glorying becomes inevitable
along agony to accept flaws...
here am I succumbing 
yielding ego upon divine altar
striving to persist, and now express:
"forgive me." 
Such is what heart beseeches.

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