Dunked Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Jumbo Shrimp Cocktail

For Natasha, written: 08-23-2026     
steamed, beheaded jumbo shrimp
deveined awful good
size clearly misunderstood
freeze burn soon seen
off tasting, dunked in
 cocktail sauce
yum!

Premium Member The Pensive Poet

Constance La France's The Pensive Poet's Contest
Reminiscences are  yet revived by the glory 
of Now mirroring slivers of  past traces' ~  by poet


This thinning pen lays on a shed 
         of damp grasses where there are 
    no flowers to daringly explore--- 
 A gasping star wanes
                      into the ash of light; 
    emptiness raking  its  only shape -
neutral as dunked rays greying the skyline. 

Dreary as a poet's last whimper, 
             unfinished phrases gather
 to rest... anticipating 
    drooped wake of winter petals, 
    as blots of ink
        trace the calligraphy of langour,
  the shadow play from past revelries 
   and adult slow- burn despair :  how pensive
  sighs offer their chánts 
to a rising moon--- and buds of waving lime,
     of the sky cascading 
           all the hums of vintage music evanesce , 

   soft sheen of paper  crumpling thoughts 
          so  darn mellow , gathering on thé barks
   of yesteryears where pages 
of innocence  and grief múst now

                 be rendered  to memorials' grave...

Premium Member Edge Of Night

This thinning pen lays 
on a shed of damp grasses
 where there are no flower
 to daringly explore--- 

A gasping star wanes 
into the ash of light; 
emptiness becomes
 its only environ neutral a the dunked rays 
greying the skyline. 

Dreary as a poet's last whimper, 
unfinished phrases gather to rest
and in the edge of night, the world
grows still as dying petals .


Paper Girl

Paper.
The howl of the last person to put their pencils in their pencil box. 
In this truth, I experience. 
Paper within paper. 
You could boil it. 
And boil everything gone. 
And eat the leftover mashed paper. 
I have several sparkly pens. 
They are just so nice. 
If I could write for a few hours at a time…
I would turn off the stove and order take out. 
Splashing around in the words. 
Laugh and turn the paper into a crumpled ball. 
I don’t think anyone really does these things. 
The weariness, the scribbles. 
Paper strains all water, if it gets dunked in. 
I miss my sister. 
She likes things like magazines, and books. 
And me. 
I’m a paper mache girl!
Wild, and made of scraps. 
Looks real, so real. 
All that paper can be.

Premium Member Sequestered Trilonnet

I have a penchant for your kiss,
I kind of dig that hidden smile;
Look in my eyes there’s no typo;

Each moment I don’t want to miss,
Baby please let me stay awhile;
It’s so warm I want to go slow;

On whispered words I reminisce, 
caught up in your gentleman’s style;
A drawl dripping with southern flow;

My heart hangs on a precipice 
fearing I’m headed to exile;
Picante is charged with mellow;

Affinity for pure jesters,
dunked by desire that sequesters.

Love Is -

love is a biscuit –
spread with jam or dunked in tea
according to mood//

love is a hairnet
catches stray strands to hold them
gently, and softly//

love is a mirror
reflected affinity
in each other’s eyes//

love is a window;
look inside; you see your soul –
look out, see the world//

love is an apple
make apple pies or cider –
it’s your decision//

love is an orange;
squeeze out the last single drop
then make candied peel//

love’s a banana –
yellow outside, white inside
feisty yet tender//

love’s a bicycle
two wheels moving in tandem
like kindred spirits//

love’s a tangerine –
easy-peel, many segments
fragrant smell lingers//


Premium Member Head Dunk

Fred had a huge sore appear on his head
Feeling itchy, he scratched until it bled
He risked looking like a fool
And dunked his head in the pool
Then gasped at the huge tick floating he shed

Premium Member On A Whim

Mom said there's no time for a swim!

For sure, I was upset and grim.

The day was so hot-

Time for a quick shot!

Dunked my brainy head on a whim!

Premium Member Four Limericks


#1 Topless Mermaid

Big bully who teased younger Guy
Said, "dude, go give it a try!
A mermaid, No shells,
at the bottom,!” he yells…
… and boy, he ran head first to dive!

#2. Literal Lot

Literal Lot, temper so hot,
Symbolic speech understands not.
 Then, when someone said,
“Man, you have a hot head!”
he dunked in the pool like a shot!


#3. Swim At Your Own Risk

Swimming in pool was Lou- Lou,
In distress yelled, ”MA! Gotta poo !”
Momma was too late.
So the cowboy, Nate,
stuck in head n'said, “Howdy-DOO!”



#4.Boy Wizard Disappears!

Boy wizard with magical wand,
could open the doors to beyond!
 in the pool one day,
 dropped it with dismay,
One second there, n'then he was gone!

From Up Here

    
    Gushing garish grin greets God’s playhouse
    Enthusiastic thrust roars cacophony chorus 
    Onyx walls leer clown mouth, splash pounce
    Mountain morose bellows waterfall raucous 


    Forceful pools swirl, gentle raptor glide
    Cyclonic claws tug a dunked daredevil
    Pop up toast, poured tea tropical slide
    Drop dagger deluge, strange fish swivel 
    Trapped in green marble pummel frigid
    Tap of gurgling bubbles bores odsidian

    
    Eye to eye with cruel cassowary, my inquiry 
    Why chase your young away, are you afraid? 
    Aghast grips his cobalt throat, furnace fiery
    Answer slips from stone, thrown to cascade






                4th July 
           Forceful Judge

Premium Member Broken Biscuit People

The world is full of broken biscuit people
Julie got pregnant on a whim
She said they used the withdrawal method
He withdrew in London while she was still in Manchester
It would bring them closer together, she said
So he moved to America to prove this theory
She decided he would be back when the whim was three
Where there's a whim, there's a way
Broken biscuit people are philosophical
It’s in their DNA
He’s coming back
Ten years gone he’s still coming back
Julie sat down with a cup of tea and her favourite digestives
The biscuit always tasted better when she dunked it into her tea
But the biscuit broke, and her life unravelled before her
He was never coming back
The words finally hit home
The world is full of broken biscuit people
Broken biscuit people.

Premium Member Painting Tigers Turquoise

King wanted tigers, but he did not want them yellow
He was an incredibly self-absorbed, picky little fellow.
I want my tigers to be turquoise, he said, lead them to the paint.
They got tipped and dunked, and a few of them did faint.

The baby tigers did better than the older ones, so those he kept.
He moved all the adult tigers out while their offspring slept.
The babies were annoyed when they discovered their parents gone.
They got rid of the king and his throne and readily moved on.

Premium Member Cookies

Soft cookies
Dunked in creamy tea
Such a treat for me
Such a guilty pleasure.

Flambed

The blood in my veins,
Long past smoldering, begins to scorch---
Beneath the skin
Purple agony erupts again,
Ignited by the shimmer of your eyes---
My breath is gone,
Excluded by my swollen tongue---
My nose feels like a potato
Overcooked,
Or dunked in hellish alien wines---

Impossible concentration---

How long will you stretch the agony---
My skin is near the breaking point,
Flame broiled beneath your gaze

Please release me,
Let me go

Dunked

DUNKED

I feel like a badly dunked and broken biscuit
Sweet icebergs floating in a warm cup of tea
What was to have been a favourite texture
Now a mudslide with soft submerged blobs
Abandoned now as the drinker walks away

Is this how people always are at the end
As hopes for something good are dashed
Beyond any recovery, left to sink unseen
Discarded, bereft of earlier anticipation
Despite all good intentions, now failed

However solid things were at the start
A confection constructed for a soft bite
Now just a sludge with no pretensions
Not having made it to teeth or tongue
That missed taste opportunity now lost

But the other half still between the fingers
Perhaps a chance for some redemption
Not risking a further failed attempt
But a crisp bite is now just acceptable
And avoidance with a careful sip of tea

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