Notes About The Poem
This was going to be my entry for the Limerick picture prompt contest (with the swimming pool and boy with his head submerged) but I've tried a few and decided on the last one. (Swim At Your Own Risk) However, I did like these as well, so thought I'd add it to my poems anyway. ;) If you're up for it, read the others too and let me know which is your favorite. Only if you want to,
No pressure!! Perhaps I'll delete that entry and use this one instead of I get enough votes lol!! Thanks yall!
Four Limericks
#1 Topless Mermaid
Big bully who teased younger Guy
Said, "dude, go give it a try!
A mermaid, No shells,
at the bottom,!” he yells…
… and boy, he ran head first to dive!
#2. Literal Lot
Literal Lot, temper so hot,
Symbolic speech understands not.
Then, when someone said,
“Man, you have a hot head!”
he dunked in the pool like a shot!
#3. Swim At Your Own Risk
Swimming in pool was Lou- Lou,
In distress yelled, ”MA! Gotta poo !”
Momma was too late.
So the cowboy, Nate,
stuck in head n'said, “Howdy-DOO!”
#4.Boy Wizard Disappears!
Boy wizard with magical wand,
could open the doors to beyond!
in the pool one day,
dropped it with dismay,
One second there, n'then he was gone!
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