Broken Biscuit People

The world is full of broken biscuit people
Julie got pregnant on a whim
She said they used the withdrawal method
He withdrew in London while she was still in Manchester
It would bring them closer together, she said
So he moved to America to prove this theory
She decided he would be back when the whim was three
Where there's a whim, there's a way
Broken biscuit people are philosophical
It’s in their DNA
He’s coming back
Ten years gone he’s still coming back
Julie sat down with a cup of tea and her favourite digestives
The biscuit always tasted better when she dunked it into her tea
But the biscuit broke, and her life unravelled before her
He was never coming back
The words finally hit home
The world is full of broken biscuit people
Broken biscuit people.
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Jones Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 6:35 AM
This one is deep and makes you think! I like how you put it together! Great job!
Empress Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 11:53 AM
Broken biscuit people, now that’s unique! How did i never think of describing people that way. Ive had similar experiences with digestive biscuits breaking: its so frustrating: but overall youv delivered a very deeply meaingful poem on that is so profound. “ Broken biscuit people are philosophical It’s in their DNA” that should be framed. Love the depth of this one
Bell Avatar
July 5, 2024 at 11:08 AM
You can't beat a digestive in tea.
Lander Avatar
June 30, 2024 at 7:25 AM
well said.. to many broken people, alone and afraid
Bell Avatar
July 1, 2024 at 4:56 AM
Sadly true.
Canerdy Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 9:12 PM
Very creative and thought-provoking, Paul. Janice
Bell Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 6:38 AM
Do you dunk your digestive, Janice.
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