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Edward Ibeh's Pick- A - Title, Vol 55... 13 Feb 26
Edge Of Night
This thinning pen lays
on a shed of damp grasses
where there are no flower
to daringly explore---
A gasping star wanes
into the ash of light;
emptiness becomes
its only environ neutral a the dunked rays
greying the skyline.
Dreary as a poet's last whimper,
unfinished phrases gather to rest
and in the edge of night, the world
grows still as dying petals .
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