Conceded Poems | Examples

7-9-2025

Brilliant it blossoms, 
Struggle and cry out for help. 
Shattered, 
But alive. 

Willingness forgotten, 
Try to huddle as would a whelp. 
I'm not flattered, 
But I survived. 

Killing season, 
More losses, 
Mother may not recognise my yelp. 
Not everyone has heard, 
Feels like everyone scattered, 
I conceded to the night cries.
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberFill it With Ethyl

Conceded to what the Doctor said 

Said needed to squat over my head

Except for that Gecko 

He just heard an echo

Said need to feed your Head more Un-Lead...
                                                                             Lead...
                                                                                     lead...
                                                                                            leaded!
Form: Limerick


What the tea leaves reveal

From a loud-mouth, world’s cease-fire arranger
To desperate man as if in manger,
Who when naught was rendered,
Panned, having surrendered,
And what is worse than that,
For a rival to bat,
Dubbed as salesman and Putin’s messenger! 
_____________________________  
Happenings | 37.08.2025 | USA, humour

Note: Meeting between Trump and Putin in Alaska.  Boasts galore and no more boats to reach the coast across! Putin conceded little, trump ceded his boasts, reduced from being a realtor president to a salesman and messenger to relay Russian terms to EU and Ukraine. But the deal maker that he is, Trump might still get Russian oil to flow in the world easing prices, access rare earths from Ukraine, and his coveted Nobel peace prize.
Form: Limerick

Premium MemberRolling the Dice

 Ruby Tuesday caught him on the rebound
 They met at a Rolling Stones Concert
 He was glad she came into his life, he conceded
 She was nice to have around
 To fill the void his heart needed

 Before he met her, he was in bars drinking whiskey and gin
 Where honkey tonk women danced, gave him a thrill
 He was drowning his sorrows from heartache within
 Angie had left him, and thoughts of her haunted him still 

 But wild horses couldn't bring her back to him
 "I thought I had her under my thumb," he lamented
 His life spiraled out of control, paint it black
 Her memory left him tormented

 Sometimes life can be a game of tumblin dice
 Rolling for love that sometimes will haunt
 Heartaches will come, love has its price
 But you can't always get what you want
Form: Rhyme

Premium Memberdreaming of life

Thanatos granted him a morbid dream in overdrive
the grim reaper at first in the distance of slumber
quietly wielded a blunt axe in dendritic surprise
as if to prolong agony and awakening of the slaughter

both victim and perpetrator of his unwilling demise
he did not put up much of a fight or resistance
knowing full well that meaning might come on arousal
in the shadows maybe but still coherent and lucidly clear

it was not unpleasant no anger fear nor resentment
more nonplussed and startling in surrender and disguise
the end is near he conceded in rational anticipation
the only question being which final conclusion to make
Form: Free verse


Premium MemberJade Stone's :::Vanity:::

Let he who is without vanity cast the first insult
Vain to me smacks of superficialities which 
in the long run prove fragile and meaningless
You can be proud of your accomplishments 
without worries of being vain 
Lose your hair, lose your teeth, lose your looks, 
lose your vanity

Fashion statements
Youth
Dress-up  make-up 
Forsooth
A little vanity never hurt anybody
Until it becomes the substance of your life
Uncouth 
Raison d'être
It’s not necessarily a negative asset


conceit
conceded
vain
narcissism
self-love
self-admiration
self-regard
self-absorption...

...Is self-love really considered vanity?
Form: Dramatic Verse

Premium MemberMy Heart, Felled as a Tree

Deprived of your love I become a will-o-the-wisp,
a ghostlike entity, whose illumination has faded
with the echoing of your final word, "Goodbye."
Not a daunting wisp of the shimmering kind,
nor one to haunt or harm. Feel no alarm from me
for I am no longer whole, the woman I used to be.

Without your hand to hold, your lips to kiss, 
your arms enfolding me close to your chest,
there would be no love to quell my need.
Desire would wither like a forsaken seed.
Felled, would be my heart as if it were a tree.
The brokenness of me would be conceded,
left alone to live with yearning and in misery.

My heart would die a little each day,
without hope of being resurrected.
Its beat would slow, severely impeded.
I would live in a grayling world on my own
where Winter winds would chill my bones.
I would stand on the edge of a frozen lake
contemplating inching my way to the middle,
knowing water flows there, swiftly to the sea.
A break in the ice would end my heartache
as I ride on the current like a felled tree.
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberUndertow

We met on the seam 
between two drownings,
his cuff snagged in the kelp, 
my mouth lined with moss.
He grinned 
like a man who'd forgotten the surface,
held out his hand like a memory.

I took it.

We spun a waltz—
water-logged feet brushing 
the roof of the wreck, 
the nape of our need. 

My dress leaked its scales, 
his coat shed pastured wool,
each step stirring 
the schools of ash-bright fish
undulating in rhythm.

When the tide pulled harder, 
he didn’t let go.
When the tide pulled harder, 
neither did I.

What else could we do
but dance, 
until the water conceded—
we were breathing inside her.
Form: Ekphrasis

Premium MemberHeart-centric stillness

Opting to feel, rather than think,
sensing energy flow in form,
as a non-doer we receive
hues of bliss flavoured with love’s ink
and as we’re centred in this storm,
soul’s at peace when ego begs leave.

The simple shift from head to heart,
is really all that’s needed
for soul to transmute as God’s light,
causing bliss ignition to start,
that with will to Him conceded,
we see Him clearly in plain sight.

God calls to us, let us respond,
forging with love, a lifelong bond.
Form: Hybronnet

Premium MemberThe Battle

Twilight arrived before we could prepare.
The watch fires were cold. Not properly set.
Our adversaries we knew were aware.
But night would fall soon… no time to regret.

Armies had massed just outside of our sight.
We stood beneath stars, all chilled to the bone.
Enemies everywhere, ready to fight.
Together we huddled, somehow alone.

Generals plotted, attack or retreat?
But nowhere to go if we chose to run.
Down in our hearts we conceded defeat.
The battle ended before it’s begun.

Morning would find us all lying there dead.
Unable to fight the fears in our head.
Form: Sonnet

Premium MemberAdrenaline Junket

The vague and the abstract turned into a contract,
adrenaline junkies, now joined in a dare.
With hands up, no screaming, they’d both go careening,
defying gravity at the State Fair.

What started as amity morphed to calamity
enough that the riders had panic attacks.
When they reached the summit, they started to plummet
just as a mutt ventured onto the tracks.

The new rollercoaster got hot as a toaster
as the conductor stomped hard on the brake.
With no time for acting, they heard the impacting
of metal on flesh as the mutt flew the lake.

To worsen the matter, gratuitous splatter
was added for gratis to this ruinous ride;
they grew more embittered once they had considered
those patches of hide from the cur that had died.

The horrors receded as they both conceded
while parting the last bits of gore with a comb.
They climbed in the pickup, and with no further hiccups
slumped up the hill slowly and headed for home.
Form: Quatrain

IN A WORLD WHERE I DO NOT EXIST

IN A WORLD WHERE I DO NOT EXIST

In a world where I do not exist
Nor believe I am entitled to be
Then that will be my destination
Following a period of gestation
And do not need a reservation
From this here and now, I see
A transition that I cannot resist

No entry permits ever needed
But such emigration is one way
As a stranger in a strange land 
It cannot be as anyone planned
With much I won’t understand
But a freedom so unlike today
Such little benefit is conceded

Will it be a different tomorrow
But still based here, in this place
Or somewhere in the distance
Should I challenge my existence
Avoiding any lingering resistance
Could it even be a state of grace
A permanent goodbye to sorrow
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberWhat is our love index

Intolerant toward a flaw,
more oft than not, we quote the law
and so burn the witch at the stake,
whilst love weeps for love, for love’s sake,
that if we peep into our past,
at our conduct, we’ll be aghast
but when it comes to our own soul,
we call to God to make us whole,
with a gentle slap on our wrist,
letting us enjoy our life tryst
but right is right and wrong is wrong;
conceded yet take all along,
that at end of days, we may smile,
since love never goes out of style.
Form: Lay

Premium MemberEpitome Of Existence


With empty capacious containers 
the living entities 
arrive arrogant 
and depart desolate,
in between turn into 
greed slaves to snatch
the unearned fortune,
getting sucked spellbound 
within abyss of temptation.

In the inferno of 
corporeal passion temporal,  
the frenetic flare 
laced by luring lust
debases the fervent feeling 
of platonic pining,
but in blooming love 
it can sparkle sublime
with the patina of penchant.

The chase of mirage 
in the deceptive ego desert 
etches the fragile footprints 
of delusive dominance
with sandstorm trajectory,
but the squall of strife 
over the dune of dwindled life
subsides in the inner space 
of latent love configured
in the conceded cauldron 
of self-less surrender.

In the blazing realm 
of connived conflict 
sane senses of sobriety 
turn into cinder,
flaming the fiber of prudence,
but the shower of sagacity,
spurting from love fountain 
with divine flamboyance
douses the fire of disdain
and
with the allayed ashes 
fabricates the framework 
of cordially congruent 
epitome of existence.
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberSpontaneity


One day, as I sat musing
Matter at hand, confusing

Nothing came to me enforced
No matter how much coerced

Effort was there, intent too
Ideas not coming through

Seemed to me a mental block
Not knowing how to unlock

Lacked in spontaneity
Frozen till eternity

Nothing had worked until fear
gripped me as I shed a tear

Just then the cogs of life turned
Things fell in place as I yearned

The cobwebs began to clear
Out of self-doubts, I could steer

Ebbs and eddies receded
Swiftly gained ground conceded

Sharp mind's spontaneity
Removed my anxiety

Case of serendipity
Resolved my old self-pity

I was searching for power
But discovered fair flower

Things now come naturally
Deal with 'I' rationally

Ideas now come in droves
My spontaneity shows

Spontaneity in life
Happiness even in strife

Life in full with better half
You're never short of a laugh
Form: Couplet

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