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20th Anniversary

If Romeo and Juliet could meet
And mate enmasque a thousand years ago,
Then our short period of trick and treat
Could generate a love none would outgrow.
For we hid not behind a frightened mask,
Nor sought protection cleverly disguised;
With eager joy we warmed up to the task
And found ourselves most pleasantly surprised.
Discovery and moonlit interlude
Replaced by coffee bars and taxi rides;
No balcony to climb, no attitude
To change, our long-developed love abides.
The Bard wrote “star-crossed lovers” with his pen,
But we are not; let’s do it all again!

Premium Member Royal Birkdale And His Loving Pride

Prowling the estate  

Seeking a mate  

Thinking he was great  

Royal Birkdale could not wait  

For his date  

When the lioness arrived  

Honestly Royal Birkdale tried  

Thinking the lioness was going to be his bride  

Opening the door  

Letting out a roar  

Exclaiming, "Amor Amor"  

She pranced  

A dance  

Making Royal Birkdale turn red  

Many said  

Time passed  

Lioness tail swung fast  

Letting a lot go  

Wanting to know  

Where things are
  
In their relationship, so far  

Being a future King  

He purchased an honorable ring  

Shiny and bright  

Just right 

"You are my Queen  

A dream"  

Lioness pondered and peered  

"I love you dear"  

Allowing cubbies to magically appear  

Giving Royal Birkdale much pride  

That could never be denied  

As the sun set  

Royal Birkdale will never forget  

What he has in life  

A loving family and committed wife

Premium Member DUTY OBLIGATION COMMITMENT a wmpc

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(Daily Magnetic Poetry Challenge)


Play date

I don't know who you are,
But I’m always with you, my dear.
I would care for you like your mother,
But why did you leave me here?
I placed you in my heart,
Then why did you leave me apart?
I continued living like a guest,
Then how do your words remain in my heart’s crest?
I know you pretend to be hard with me,
You said, “I need some space.”
But now that space only gives you peace,
While I can’t withdraw from you.
And I can’t think those days
Were just a play date.

Premium Member TANGLED ROOTS

Soft hands fold laundry,  
laughter spills like loose buttons~  
warmth in wrinkled sheets.  
No blood binds us, yet we stay~  
roots tangled, holding the earth.

Babe , Jealous Is Love




In realms of love, where passions burn like fire,
Jealousy, a symptom of a heart's desire,
Not insecurity, but care's fierce spark,
Lying deep, where love's most vulnerable mark.

I don't want to lose you, my heart's sole claim,
Yours alone, my love, my every breath's refrain,
Checking up on you, not desperation's game,
But love's fierce vigilance, my heart's sweet pain.

When I lose you, my world crumbles to dust,
Leaving naught but emptiness, a hollow trust,
I've crossed oceans, climbed mountains high and steep,
Kneeling, broken, my heart, a thousand pieces, asleep.

You're all I want, my passion's burning need,
My every dream, my heart's deepest creed,
I won't trade our love for anything, my love,
Yours, forever, till eternity's stars above.


Premium Member ONLINE LOVE COMMITMENT

Is the one click worth it?
Is the online love connection genuine?
Does it get better like fine wine?
Searching for love requires compatibility
Truth and appreciative the love between couples
Respect throughout
True love not false love
Open heart into romance
Actual person with a real photo
No hack in scam
Name worth giving
Not something made up
Love is about enduring heart
Enchanted spirit
Love within
Online love must work out from the very start
Emotions must be felt
Above all trust
There is a start and depart.

Choose Care Over Impulse

Regardless of the commitment,
Something of the spirit always wants to feel free
Regardless of the commitment,
It’s at its purest when led astray but for a moment to see, if both parties come back to the ways of which they wish they went, now breathe.
Someone will make a mistake,
Hopefully you, and hopefully in their dreams.
Only means, you’re lucky enough to have one of the better ones, not one who schemes.
Regardless of the commitment, it’s only but a dream.

Dreams can come true, nightmares can too,
Or you can just be waking up in bed again,
Where do you want your path to lead?
Regardless of the commitment, you can always leave. Before you ever sought one out, alone you should find peace, so you can be not only what someone else will enjoy but give yourself a chance for your own love's deeds. 

Love yourself before seeking out that dream

And regardless of the commitment, consciously commit to treating those of significance as the human they are within.
Treat as if you were me and 'they' were 'we'
There's so much love,
Don't let the rush burn with its steam.

The stars

Two stars, two of a kind
Speaking of their love filled bind.
Behind the nighttime shield 
These stars thought they had healed.
But around them the shield made others blind.

Their love spread, but so did the hate,
The other stars didn't find their love great.
But the pair didn't care,
For they did not need “repair”
They could carry each other's weight.

Our love , Our Joy

My love, my heart, my soul's delight,
In your eyes, my world is made anew,
With you, each moment's a sweet, sweet night,
Our love's a flame that burns, forever true.

Let's weave a love that's strong, yet gentle too,
A tapestry of laughter, tears, and sighs,
With every breath, my love for you grows true,
In your arms, I find my peaceful skies.

My darling, let's explore the world's delight,
Hand in hand, with hearts that beat as one,
We'll dance under stars, and in the morning light,
Our love will shine, forever, just begun.

Forever with you, my love, is where I'd be,
With you, my heart, my soul, is set free.

Premium Member The way it's meant to be

Opulence suits you, my Queen.
To you I humbly devote my life
~ cater to your every whim.



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025

Be Persuasive, Speak Of A Strong Commitment

One knows by the blinking eyes
when someone lies to hide guilt...
even words sound fake on your waking up;
I'm tired of the promises coated with lies:
times and times again I've pleaded to quit,
but obeyed your command turning into a pup!

Be persuasive, speak of a strong commitment,
stick to true words: they're a golden treasure,
don't use me only for your intimate pleasure:
passion can last as long as there's a heartbeat!  

Have you kissed another man's sensual lips?
Was he able to convince you he was better?
Damn fool, your folly existence stirs up anger: 
deceive no hearts, don't make sarcastic remarks!! 

Be persuasive, speak of a strong commitment
to build a tomorrow stronger than a fortress;
don't ask more than I am able to give when in total doubt:
I foresee days of endless joy, but also days of deep sadness!

One tastes much bitterness when sweetness is missing
from the eager mouth that wanted to delight in every truth;
it shows in the eyes, even in the emotions that are fading:
remain faithful to me, look no further, and find some worth!

No Longer Icing

two dancing silhouettes,
lurking in the shadows
fireflies spark like static in the air
a dream that bloomed
from a far-fetched delusion,
a love that demands lifelong care.

i trip on the train of her white-laced dress,
hoping some man might catch my fall.
how typical of me, to make a mess,
then run away
before time can take it all.

i envy the love i always crave.
i wish it was me
but the brick wall in my mind
won’t let me stay.

wine glasses, once sweet with cake and cheer,
lie shattered on the floor.
a dream dissolved
by the one thing I feared 
so they all slammed the door.

it’s clear i’m scared of a lifelong vow 
my trust is frayed,
and my heart’s not in it now.
so why do i still long for what i push away?

there’s no more icing on the cake.
i dropped the bouquet.

Premium Member when I said I Love you


The love I have for you is too powerful for words.

It cannot be contained by any ordinary imaginings,

Like the ones that come from the places life devours.

This moment;  Here, Now:  is yours forever.

I am in it only for you.

This is the forever I was talking about 

When I said I love you.

Premium Member From Now On

That brilliant smile upon your face, 
it lights my darkened soul. 
One gaze upon your heavenly grace 
and I lose all control. 

Your face, so graceful in its form, 
is ne’er an afterthought. 
Your eyes, my soul seem to warm, 
when in your gaze I’m caught. 

Your skin, so lovely, is soft as snow; 
I feel it as I dream 
about you, and the things I know. 
You are not as you seem. 

Your presence is so dear to me. 
I’m pained to be alone. 
But I know you’ll appear to me 
when I am on my own. 

I see you when I close my eyes. 
Your smile I see so clear. 
My rationale mystifies. 
Why should it be so Dear? 

I’ve only known you for a few short weeks, 
yet to you I feel drawn. 
I find your presence so unique 
I want you from now on.

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