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Be Persuasive, Speak Of A Strong Commitment

One knows by the blinking eyes when someone lies to hide guilt... even words sound fake on your waking up; I'm tired of the promises coated with lies: times and times again I've pleaded to quit, but obeyed your command turning into a pup! Be persuasive, speak of a strong commitment, stick to true words: they're a golden treasure, don't use me only for your intimate pleasure: passion can last as long as there's a heartbeat! Have you kissed another man's sensual lips? Was he able to convince you he was better? Damn fool, your folly existence stirs up anger: deceive no hearts, don't make sarcastic remarks!! Be persuasive, speak of a strong commitment to build a tomorrow stronger than a fortress; don't ask more than I am able to give when in total doubt: I foresee days of endless joy, but also days of deep sadness! One tastes much bitterness when sweetness is missing from the eager mouth that wanted to delight in every truth; it shows in the eyes, even in the emotions that are fading: remain faithful to me, look no further, and find some worth!

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