Commingling Poems | Examples

Premium Member Embodiment of Light

   Coat stand tree commingling clan protects
   Quilted caterpillar sticks linen to spine
   Pine foliage erect points to its apex
   Before its born, spire spreads star shine

   Swooping swivel neck owl huddles, human eyes 
   Scan heaven, hook beak hoots transmit signal
   For seraphim shifting, shades of dove devise
   Butterfly current shaken napkin nimble


   Venture from avenues of arrow quivers
   Dispell dictating army apostrophes 
   Barrel roll ballistic, blank space delivers
   Delight due outside barracks claustrophobic

   
   Antenna tuned owl throatily purrs
   Pleasure for butterfly’s fast learned journey, laughed
   Drift under dry angel feathers, breeze spurs
   Freedom wish from wizard to aloof aircraft 


         
        27 January 2025

       Written for Contest:
      Embodying the Light
    Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker
Form: Rhyme

Amidst the Snowflakes

Amidst the Snowflakes

Like thousands of soldiers in parachutes
they come out of the winter sky

One by one hitting the pavement
to claim victory for the season now unfolding

At first they are vanquished almost instantly
a price paid for those leading the charge

However as they begin to accumulate and cluster
a formidable foe is being created

Inch by inch, foot by foot, a fortress is being built
one that can be transformed into an igloo for shelter if needed

Soon the landscape will be covered by a heavy white blanket
left unattended it will run amok overwhelming all

As plummeting temperatures assault those not ready
once open lakes and river pathways no longer escape routes

A battering ram of inclement weather hampering travel
imprisoning those caught unaware of its fury

Snow drifts form obstructing passageways
entrapping those not prepared with an escape route

Waiting out the enemy a defensive strategy now in use
As it surrounds you on all sides building an oppressing presence

High winds and frostbite commingling in the air
that will dominate at the end of the day

Beauty or beast
The conflict yet to be decided.

Andreas Simic ©


Premium Member The 'C' In Christmas

Christmas courts contentment, cheer
Contributes comfort, comity-
Commingling with the coming Christ.
Can celebrate with caroling,
Church choir chanting, candlelight.
Create commitments to cherish
Connection conceived with Christ.
Christmas cards and caring confirm
Charity, compassion, closeness-
Culled core of Christmas centerpiece.


December 16, 2020

Contest: Alliteration
Sponsor: Eve Roper

Compelled

drained by seven withering storms
dessert cactus and prickly thorns
littered was the winding road
that charted highways à la mode  

painted strokes of pastel hues
streaming waves of flowing blues
mountains rose that blocked the sky
eclipse when worlds defy

paths followed on cobblestones
passed fallen heroes and graveyard bones
bridges spanned white-capped waters
life misled like seven daughters

amber waves across fruited plains
garnished the life that love sustains
monuments tied to pride
eclipse when worlds collide

wind and fire without concession
merge to rise and take possession 
conquer the failing weak 
the strong refuse to die oblique 

past seven gables on seven roofs
I rode wild horses with pounding hoofs
to a fireside and hearth that warms
commingling hearts hearth silence storms 


February 16, 2020
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Commingling Spirits of Christmas

Heavenly flakes of light snow, drift on down,
weaving soft blankets of whiteness, pristine,
vowing to serve neath His Christmas Eve Crown;
beautiful visions, so peaceful and clean.

Weaving soft blankets of whiteness, pristine,
while from that Star, blessings shower the town.
Beautiful visions, so peaceful and clean;
hillsides cascade like a white satin gown.

While from that Star, blessings shower the town,
nestled this night among glittering trees,
hillsides cascade like a white satin gown;
symbols of Christmas- commingling to please.

Nestled this night among glittering trees,
high on a hill, Santa, with Rudolph, stands;
symbols of Christmas- commingling to please,
spreading God's love- as the bright Star commands.                                                        

High on a hill, Santa, with Rudolph stands,
vowing to serve neath His Christmas Eve Crown;
spreading God's love- as the bright Star commands-
heavenly flakes of light snow, drift on down.


December 27, 2019

Contest: Christmas Pantoum Rhyme
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Prompt: Photo No. 3
Form: Pantoum


Get Away

Cobblestones hold silent steps on damp reflections
Boots echo soft with lightning strikes ahead
A hidden knife in jacket comes to life  
Still pillowed under fog to crack the night wide open
Gray silhouettes set into dim imaginings of action
There where the sleeping ships sink into comas 
Someone comes out from under shadows back
Up from behind a buildings mold ridden bricks
To overcome the unsuspecting victim by the river
No time to scream in agony in pain or prayer
Escape is now impossible under muffled sounds
Slitting throats must stay a secret bleeding out
Floods are expected according to reports
The weather is less predictable by the docks
Commingling crimson in cold waters is odd 
A dingy takes the criminal away to safety
A getaway planned in advance for this occasion
Well before the weather report came out
To forecast the condition red in place of rain

Echoes

Echoes!
Faint echoes
abound.
Ghosts in
the ether.
Faint, subtle.
Barely discernible.
Information
never lost
 yet
nearly so.
The void,
filled with
echoes,
forever.
Echoes of 
once was. 
Echoes filled 
with civilizations
noise.
Filled with 
essence,
filled with
history.
Stories
of civilizations.
All that ever
was, just echoes.
Echoes filled
with ethos,
filled with
poems,
filled with
 aspersions, 
filled with each 
civilizations
 essence.
All they
 represented.
Gone now!
Passing like
ghost ships.
Ghost ships
in the
night.
Echoes
passing thru
echoes.
Commingling.
Meeting!
Ghosts, meeting
ghosts deep
in the void!
Exchanging,
yet
never to 
have met
at all.
art

Premium Member Epiphany

The first crystal drop 
of realization 
shatters your glassy surface

and radiates the idea outward
in reflective ripples growing in concentric circles 
with the newness of being thought of for the very first time.. 

one drop 
follows another 
in a thoughtful cascade
and a thrilling commingling of contemplative resonance
skimfully intersects on a liquescent wavelength -

like a collection of Chinese linking rings 
smoothly passing through each other

exchanging enchantment and casting their own brand of magic
in lucid fluidity across the suffused surface
of your soulful depths;

that -
in this most 
precious of moments -
revels in revealing the answers you seek.


Susan Ashley 
July 28, 2018

Premium Member Gayeast Ginger Bread

I know something about being a GLBT Ginger,
the undress and redress of our left leaning politics,
like sacred naked communion
for Therapeutic Warriors.

At my best,
when adolescence urged HisHer ugly ambiguous head
through pubescent tail,
I wondered if other fire redheads
and sun speckled skins
felt this co-passioned love,
desire beyond procreative need
to touch,
embrace,
to smell,
to taste,
but not to own.

How could I have known
difference between my Ginger sensuality
and gay male nervous sexuality
without more comparative communion?

Although,
in hindsight,
perhaps not quite so much commingling
of sacred elements
I invested with integrity
for sorting out these red
and blue-black,
purplish and heated
ultra-violet distinctions
of warm wet rainbow Gay ecopolitics,
with Ginger red-yin differences,
influences,
tinctures seductive and reductive,
distinctions inductive and deductive;
Integrity of wild red unrest.

Premium Member Aloes - Haiku

three aloes in spring
roots commingling with moist soil -
they exist as one


Susan Ashley
August 13, 2017
Form: Haiku

Thirst Quencher

Poetry is a thirst-quencher 
I look forward to my daily cup
It rehydrates my parched spirit
Attenuates the bitter taste of life
Every sip, I savour 
As I see poetry everywhere 
In everything 
In Toronto's tall buildings, 
In its small cafés 
In its multitudes 
In the blue eyes, green,
And brown eyes 
In the smiling faces 
And the mirthless ones
In doors opening like gaping mouths 
Ejecting hapless Torontians 
In the big blue lake
In the multiple languages commingling with English 
In the churches, mosques and temples 
Side by side 
In the aroma of ethnic cooking 
In the wide highways 
Offering endless possibilities 
In the ever so brief but warm summers 
In the hope written on immigrant's faces
I see poetry 
In the priest's homily at Sunday mass
In the voice of a young mother
Scolding her child 
I hear poetry
Poetry is a thirst-quencher 
Pour me a cup 
And I'll forever be your friend

Premium Member Framed Soul

Framed Soul


Within their frames, like lovely captured dreams,
     my art and poems speak of life: green trees,
soft azure skies, sun-sparkled winding streams;
     a field of daisies leaning in the breeze.

With paint and words, I often rendezvous,
     commingling nature's glory with my own;
those imageries create a window view
     thru which my inner joys of life are shown.

I stand apart and contemplate my art...
     recall the tedious, long hours so spent
to merge with what dwells deep within my heart.
     But, always I am filled with the lament...

of an observer...never meant to win;
     forever on the outside looking in.


Sandra M. Haight

~3rd Place~
Contest: The Poet's Own
Sponsor: Greg Barden
Judged: 09/18/2017
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Valley Creation

In the green valley 
Gentle zephyr blew my hair 
Breathing pure fresh air
Contemplating dawn birds flock 
Commingling with the cosmos











For One Nature Tanka - Inspired By My Short Poem Posted On Contest Page - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Rick Parise
Eight Place
7-31-2016
Form: Tanka

Premium Member Humor's Rumored Tumescence

Seems like good humor grows positive, 
healthy
resonant
confluent
sometimes co-invested
passionate consciousness

And bad humor grows negative,
unhealthy,
dissonant
contentious
dispassionate unconsciousness

So, maybe compassionate consciousness grows 
global intelligence.

And, perhaps shared intelligence could grow 
universally cooperative 
sacred unitarian integrity,
co-passionate joy
commingling health and beauty,
co-invested peace,
wise therapeutic humor,
amusing comprehension.

Wouldn't it be unsurprising if love's omnipotent comprehension
feeds good humor,
feels healthy,
breeds universally wise 
and unitarian wealthy,
trauma-free compassion?

Olfaction

Flanked by Dame’s rockets and Yarrow
familiar flowers that greet me
every spring with their breezy nods.
Their irresistible, subtle
scents never cease to captivate
my olfactory perception.
I swoon amidst their fragrant breaths
and for one imaginative
moment become their distant kin
with an alien hue and scent
commingling with them nonetheless
until their odoriferous
scents again sober my senses
leaving a feeling of gladness.
Form: Verse

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