Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Poet Tanka

Valley Creation

In the green valley 
Gentle zephyr blew my hair 
Breathing pure fresh air
Contemplating dawn birds flock 
Commingling with the cosmos











For One Nature Tanka - Inspired By My Short Poem Posted On Contest Page - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Rick Parise
Eight Place
7-31-2016

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Probir Gupta August 8, 2016 at 6:08 AM Congratulations on your win ... Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 8, 2016 at 9:18 AM Thank you Probir

Joanna Daniel August 5, 2016 at 12:42 AM Lovely tanka:) Congratulations on your win, Nayda:) Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 5, 2016 at 6:22 AM Thank you Jo

Alexis Y. August 4, 2016 at 11:00 PM Hi Nayda, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 5, 2016 at 6:22 AM Thank you Alexis

Sandra Haight August 4, 2016 at 10:39 PM Nayda, congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra

Tom Arnone August 4, 2016 at 7:25 PM Enjoyable tanka, Nayda. Favorite line, "Commingling with the cosmos." Congrats on your placement. :-) Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 4, 2016 at 9:50 PM Thank you Tom

Andrea Dietrich August 4, 2016 at 5:34 PM very nicely pictured, Nayda. Congrats on your win. Nice to share this number placement with you. Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 4, 2016 at 9:50 PM Thank you Andrea

Beautiful Scars August 4, 2016 at 4:41 PM Nayda, a wonderful tanka lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 4, 2016 at 4:50 PM Thank you Laura

Probir Gupta August 1, 2016 at 5:29 AM "Commingling with the cosmos" - a rich poetical line ... an emotionally rich Tanka ... Nayda Ivette Negron Flores August 1, 2016 at 11:23 AM Thank you Probir