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Commingling Spirits of Christmas

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Heavenly flakes of light snow, drift on down, weaving soft blankets of whiteness, pristine, vowing to serve neath His Christmas Eve Crown; beautiful visions, so peaceful and clean. Weaving soft blankets of whiteness, pristine, while from that Star, blessings shower the town. Beautiful visions, so peaceful and clean; hillsides cascade like a white satin gown. While from that Star, blessings shower the town, nestled this night among glittering trees, hillsides cascade like a white satin gown; symbols of Christmas- commingling to please. Nestled this night among glittering trees, high on a hill, Santa, with Rudolph, stands; symbols of Christmas- commingling to please, spreading God's love- as the bright Star commands. High on a hill, Santa, with Rudolph stands, vowing to serve neath His Christmas Eve Crown; spreading God's love- as the bright Star commands- heavenly flakes of light snow, drift on down. December 27, 2019 Contest: Christmas Pantoum Rhyme Sponsor: Eve Roper Prompt: Photo No. 3

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Wendy Watson

Date: 1/26/2020 3:26:00 AM

This is as usual masterfully composed, Sandra and you have set a magical atmosphere. Congratulations.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2020 6:02:00 PM

Thank you very much, Wendy, for stopping back with your congratulations and lovely comment. Hugs, Sandra ;)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/26/2020 1:03:00 AM

Sandra, your imagery in this piece really stands out. I see why it was chosen as a first place winner. Congratulations my friend! xxoo

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2020 6:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie, for reading my poem and for leaving your very supportive comments and congrats! I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra ;)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/25/2020 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your very well-deserved win, Sandra. I want to thank you for entering my contest.Your poem had great flow, perfect rhyme, and imagery. Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/27/2020 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Eve, for your very inspiring contest, my fine placement, congratulations, and lovely comments! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra;)

John Watt

Date: 12/28/2019 11:57:00 PM

Sandra, your pantoum is so fluid and silky smooth, like a December snowfall. Good luck in the contest ~ John

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/30/2019 6:17:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by, John, with your uplifting and positive comments. Much appreciated. Sandra ;)

Wendy Watson

Date: 12/28/2019 11:31:00 AM

Sandra, what a smoothly flowing rhythm and wonderful imagery, my favourite being 'hillsides cascade like a white satin gown'. really beautiful.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/30/2019 6:18:00 PM

Thank you so much, Wendy, for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them so much. Hugs, Sandra

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/28/2019 12:11:00 AM

Sandra, this is a marvelous Christmas pantoum. They are not easy. I have done them, and I feel that many of mine were forced. This one flows with great beauty.

Sandra Haight
Date: 12/30/2019 6:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren! So nice of you to stop by with your uplifting and encouraging comments. Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra