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Premium Member For Is This Not My Throne?

Of Victory Here, Of Triumph There, 
for is it Not where Pillars Stand Aloft? Of Israel Here, Of Jerusalem There
Is it not with Thy Staff, Thy Shield, Thy Spear that I Ascend the Mountain Tops?
Shall I Travail Not?
Shall I Commence a Sacred Torch, of Fire, of Light, of Faith and Creed and Sun?
Is it not with Glory, Of Salvation, that I Conquer with my Mightiest Sword Within?
For is this Not my Kingdom? Is this Not my Throne?

Premium Member Footprints

Here is a logical summation
Mother Earth is in a state of severe degradation
Each individual really has an obligation
Or face a future full of devastation

Here now is an invitation
Must be done no hesitation
Commence some form of restoration
Now is the time no equivocation

An example Join an organisation that practices reafforestation
For other examples seek information from an on-line investigation
This knowledge should be part of a school education
But that system is too much into indoctrination

Many people are suffering from brain fog constipation
Minds closed no room for alternative negotiation
Pray one day there will be an awakened realisation
People's footprint on this planet planned minimisation

Oceanic Mechanisms

Oceanic Mechanisms

It was here that I found her sleeping softly,
Somnolence is so beautiful to behold,
When oceanic machines purr,
And the streets of her dreamland,
Bustle with fantastic automobiles,
And subconsciously, the sidewalks
Are strewn with people carrying flowers,
And waking life is very soon to commence,
As I pray, she brings this sublimity to consciousness.


Premium Member Life's Lighthouse

A lighthouse stands as our sentinel
Guarding our lives from harm's way
Let's live our lives being so sensible
We won't have to call out our defense
To avoid a grand last doomsday.
Just let the lighthouse's love commence

A Reflecting Pool

When making a reflecting pool
Make sure it reflects something that’s cool
It’s not the pool’s fault you see
If what it reflects looks more like wee.

You want it to look all patriotic 
But the man in charge is simply idiotic 
Don’t blame the mirror for its reflection 
Rather commence some introspection.

The pool’s current algal bloom 
Isn’t the only elephant in the room
And while the narcissist continues to blunder 
Your tax dollars he’ll continue to plunder.

The pool’s a lovely bubbling green 
And accurately reflects one who’s obscene
Reflecting not what one wishes to see 
But rather what’s truly within thee.

So if you are concerned dear reader
Maybe it’s time to get a new leader
One who’s not a lying fool
Then you’ll have a pure reflecting pool.

Premium Member So Spake Simple Simon

Line Of Inquiry
“We look at spirit not at form
 Our touch is gentle, kind and warm
 We but reflect God’s love and light
‘Tis the path to which we conform.”

As Simple Simon lacked good sense
Knew not the value of his pence
In earning his prize
Did not realize
To earn something, work must commence.

In us God has placed our dear Soul
We must feed it well as our goal
It starves until Love
Faith, Hope, from above
Completes us as His sacred whole.

We're given a Soul to employ
The value of work to enjoy
The gifts of our life
Both lacking and rife
In God's eyes, a feat of true joy.


The Catshifter

If I had to be an animal
I think I'd be a cat,
Sitting on a broomstick
Or on witch's hat.
And then with witchy powers
That my mistress would bestow,
I'd  magic to my heart's content
Oh meow oh meow oh meow.

First I'd have a spot of fun
Just let the games commence,
I'd steal the bones of all those dogs
That live across the fence.
The ones that like to torment puss
And chase her just for fun,
I'd throw their bones to kingdom come
Now cats are number one.

I'd wait until they'd had their fill
Of chump and doggy food,
When curled up snug in doggy bed
I'd sneak up and Kaboom!
I'd suddenly appear and screech
And give them such a fright,
They'd wake up with their hairs on end
And quake all through the night.

And then I'd try and find a home
Where I could be a pet
To love an owner who loved me
As good as it does get.
By nights we'd sit around a fire
All cosy and content,
I'd leave my witchy hat behind
Not once would I lament.

Premium Member Mingle

“Like the river that mingles with the sea, we move quietly towards the ultimate source when our restless journey comes to a halt to commence a new life of peace and ease” ~ By Poet

With a mighty roar 
and blasting winds,
the rains ravaged the earth
in feverish frenzy 
gushing forth in torrents.

Soaked to bones
the trees stood trembling.
The rain water
began flowing in clear streams.
It flowed down, 
mingling with the river.
The river carried it
with a lilting lullaby.
holding the rain water in her bosom. 

Winding down through
valleys all along,
the river mingled with the ocean
waiting with open arms.

No need to roam again
as its journey is over
and it has finally found its home!

Isn’t our life like a river?
Through struggles and sorrows, 
we rush alone, restless
looking for a resting place
until we mingle and merge with our source
never lost, but swimming into new life
as the night mingles with the day!

Premium Member Xavier

I was at deaths door blind and could not see
With faulty mind and lips unable to speak
My life changed forever after Xavier told me

Be not afraid of the vastness of the dark
Find your way using the guiding silver star
The pain won’t remain He will lift your heart

Gently my child your life indeed will end
Whether later or now only He commence
Soiled soul sifted made saintly despite sin

Your desires are like fires burning your soul
To go higher you must release them let go
For His love is more precious than gold

You haven’t much time left to persevere 
As clock ticks unwinds remember my dear
You are destined whether there or here 

Hanging in the balance with this wise man 
Who could be an arch angel by his stance
Giving me knowledge and a fighting chance

The Ritual

I’ll sit in a cafe with a tea and a grin,
Wondering which version of "Me" should begin.
Do I lead with the humour? The hobby? The scar?
Or just pray they don’t mention their favorite car?

It’s a gamble, a circus, a strange little dance,
A marathon sprint for a glimmer of chance.
But here goes the plunge—let the madness commence,
I’m back in the market (and losing my sense).

Note to self: 
If they ask if you're "adventurous" on the first date, 
remember that "trying a new brand of cereal" does not count as a personality trait.

Premium Member Event disappearance

I told them several times
This is not my place
Certainly I will go beyond!

It’s their turn
They appear in my dream
One by one

For a few minutes even 
They make me feel, they are around
Soon I open my eyes, they disappear!

Shocked!
Mystery of these two worlds!
I live in one, disappeared they live the other!

In search of the other world 
I dived deep
My goodness! It’s same! Commence with the event disappearance!

The one I live, appears real
Moments I live here, stepping stones
Mason in waiting in other side, path is disappearance!

The Wind

The wind whistles over the mountains
Across the valley below
Just to let you know it’s there
And to say hello
The chill it brings makes the air go cold
You shiver and shake just to keep warm
It can also bring inclement weather 
Hailstones, Rain or Snow
As it howls out its fearful call
Animals run for cover
To find a nice sheltered place
To huddle against one another
Darkened clouds form overhead
You know a storm is brewing soon
As darkness descends you tend to forget
Its only early afternoon
The Trees and Flowers will welcome
The storm that is about to commence
But an Owl contemplates his next move
As he sits upon a fence
The nearby wood seems to be
His refuge throughout the coming storm
So off he flies to sit and wait
Till all returns to norm
The Deer are all running wildly
Frightened at what is about to occur
As other creatures run and hide
Suddenly everything’s a blur
As the Wind and Rain starts to pour down
With Hailstones, Snow and Rain
The Valley becomes a desolate place
Until better weather returns again
Shortly all is quiet
As the storms desist and leave
But leaving behind such devastation
Such a sight is hard to believe.

Premium Member Become Self Empowered

There is a mad phenomenon 
that  stalks sick sad modern zest
Seek an external remedy
to remove a chronic pest

The body is a miracle
when given what it needs
But first you must remove the cause
upon which it feeds

Hey Guru mister Guru
won't you come and help me through
What you really must realise 
is that the Guru is you

Prescription for the doctors
that well may preserve your life
The doctor of sunshine and also fresh air
In such abundance on this planet
these supplements are rife

The doctor of restful sleep and daily exercise
are you alerted, does it ring a bell
Adhering to these principals 
will surely make you well

The doctor of non poisoned food
and clean water too
With this scope of daily living
your vitality will enlarge
No need for appointments 
all provided free of charge

If you wish to commence healing 
this is what to do
What you must realise 
that the Guru is you

Premium Member Ice Forest

Age, baby steps across the icy pond
scorpions tap-tap-tap the flesh
the sun hovers brittle and honest.

An unknown selects the spot
passages are drilled then gleaned
seasons tangle-miracles are imminent.

The line quivers, age dons a child's heart
silver thrash is coaxed into silence-
as memories flaunt their fractured crowns
...a wall, a vow, a flag encased in glass
the birth of birdsong-whispers of loves long dead.

A bird bleeds color along the shore
age thinks the truest smile
is the one performed alone.

Evening's grand candles commence
crooning a miracle's lament.
Only then does age re-enter the ice forest
leaving the pond alone but unforgotten.

Premium Member VICTORIOUS

 As the Sword lies await in Stone
 and Death is Conquered, Alas The Way comes Forth
 and the Soul is Reborn and Reborn and Reborn
 until the Day of Reckoning, How Sweet Is This Forge
 and by the Blade, Subdues the Evil One
 All Victorious, All Triumphant, All Return To The Sun
 and The Great Seal Erupts, Let Thy New Age Commence Nigh
 and Heaven Descends to Reclaim it's Light,
 through Fields of Battle where Souls are Wrought
 we claim our Victory, for Heavens Calvary is Unbought
 and the Nations Tremble, for here come the Saints and Cavaliers
 through the Upheavals, a New Jerusalem, a New Israel, a New Shield
 Justice is Divine, No Staff Too Just
 and The Great Patriarchs of Old Ascend from Dust,
 and The Church Trembles, what was lost is Yet Again Reclaimed
 these Swords of Heraldry Vanquish these Miseries, and Abraham is Uncaged
 and by The Pillars Of Salvation, We are Set Free
 and The Blade Of Science Claims it's Victory

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