Star-struck is my heart indeed
God grants great mercy and grace*
Since He always meets our need
Let's win in running life's race.
Good news yon stars we ought to share
Compassion, kindness and peace
Let's show our sincere care
Marked with love that does not cease.
As stars with unique radiance reign
Let's persist in our roles to prevail
Vanquishing hypocrisy's strain
Allowing truth to shine without fail.
Glowing bright midst divine stars' light
We spread cheer to all, smiting gloom
Inspiring others with joy's delight
Let's radiate nurturing bloom.
*Ephesians 2:4-5But God, who is rich in mercy, for his great love wherewith he loved us, Even when we were dead in sins, hath quickened us together with Christ, (by grace ye are saved).
April 29, 2026
edited on August 27, 2026
8th place, "In the Stars by The Rolling Stones" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest
Sponsored by Robert James Liguori; judged on 9/7/2026
I’m lonely for your face,
the sound you made as you passed
with such mild pronouncements in your step.
The door through which you walked
remembers well how you beguiled
the night with summer romance
and the magic sighing of your hair.
I miss, too, your tender fingers
renewing the seasons
and the hopeful folly of my mind.
Somehow, as you went, you always knew
all the secrets wherewith moonlight spread,
avoiding brutish occlusions and rough winds,
all the disturbed waters of my life.
Now, you walk where rivers murmur,
hushed in the sweet silence of your smile,
never to be forgotten, ever to reappear.
Christopher M. Swan, “Song of Susan,” 2008
Comfort* prevails
since Mom’s lullaby
lingers and never fails
like nightingale that cheers
with God's melodic
bliss as life sails.
*2Corinthians 1:3-4 Blessed be God, even the Father of our Lord Jesus Christ, the Father of mercies, and the God of all comfort; Who comforteth us in all our tribulation, that we may be able to comfort them which are in any trouble, by the comfort wherewith we ourselves are comforted of God.
March 6, 2026
3rd place, "EXPRESS THROUGH COMPRESSION" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud; judged on 3/13/2026
What does it mean to be a bard of rhyme,
when locusts swarm to eat my life away,
destroyed before I reach my chosen time,
to enjoy every single focused day?
What does it mean to be a bard of song,
when life's sweet notes are played and out of tune,
when the world shouts at me, “You don't belong!”
and casts me out, beneath a frigid moon?
Ay! what it means to be a bard is choice:
when nothing else for me in life is meant,
then hope and faith must find their lifting voice,
wherewith against my fate I circumvent.
More than songs that rhyme, meaning's what bards make:
so, I make all the love that this world can take!
2 Corinthians 1:4 “Who comforteth us in all our tribulation, that we may be able to comfort them which are in any trouble, by the comfort wherewith we ourselves are comforted of God.”
pleading for relief
from the darkest grief
my heart was torn in two
one part light, the other askew
shadows filled my life
there was so much strife
then there came the truth
He loved me from my youth
still as the song of praise
joy that can always amaze
when I let His spirit shine
showing the world He’s mine
there is assurance of grace
oh, how I long for His embrace
pleading for a new hope
wondering if I’ll be able to cope
time seems to move me away
from the moment when I can pray
there is peace that consoles my spirit
it’s the music so alive and I hear it
the world is such a lost, lonely place
only the love of our Savior can erase
the darkness that covers every feeling
blessings come to souls who are healing
pleading for a second chance, a new day
love this alive is love that seems to say…
let go and let God’s voice restore your belief
there is One who is love where you’ll find real relief
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelu-yahweh
I am not alone, I walk with Him
I am at His throne, abide in Him
The Holy Spirit moves my place
Fill me up with perfect grace
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelu-yahweh
Honor my God with my sword
Ten thousand times and many more
The rudder that steers the mighty vessel
To speak life and of the Good News
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelujah
Hallelu-yahweh
(Poem by ScottM 7/28/2024 praise dot tapdig dot com)
??Ephesians? ?5?:?14? NIV
14This is why it is said: “Wake up, sleeper, rise from the dead, and Christ will shine on you.”
??Ephesians? ?6?:?16? ?KJV
16above all, taking the shield of faith, wherewith ye shall be able to quench all the fiery darts of the wicked.
??Psalm? ?147?:?3? ?KJV
3He healeth the broken in heart, And bindeth up their wounds.
??Colossians? ?3?:?14? ?NIV
14And over all these virtues put on love, which binds them all together in perfect unity.
??Judges 9:8-15 KJVAAE??
[8] The trees went forth on a time to anoint a king over them; and they said unto the olive tree, Reign thou over us. [9] But the olive tree said unto them, Should I leave my fatness, wherewith by me they honor God and man, and go to be promoted over the trees? [10] And the trees said to the fig tree, Come thou, and reign over us. [11] But the fig tree said unto them, Should I forsake my sweetness, and my good fruit, and go to be promoted over the trees? [12] Then said the trees unto the vine, Come thou, and reign over us. [13] And the vine said unto them, Should I leave my wine, which cheereth God and man, and go to be promoted over the trees? [14] Then said all the trees unto the bramble, Come thou, and reign over us. [15] And the bramble said unto the trees, If in truth ye anoint me king over you, then come and put your trust in my shadow; and if not, let fire come out of the bramble, and devour the cedars of Lebanon.
I’m here, but I can be there in the spirit of joy's iridescence---
As my faith brings me to behold your triumphant presence.
I’m here, yet I can reach you from afar
Together, virtually, we watch the star.
I’m here with my body and soul, reading
Then you join me through poetic feeding.
I’m here alone... viewing loveliness of nature
And I’m by your side along technology’s venture.
I’m here fully absorbed with your creativity’s zest
Vicariously, we both experience sublime peace that's blest.
I’m here in the infirmary vanquishing sickness with its pain
Indeed, praying for you to run the race for championship gain.
I’m here testifying about God’s love and mercy*, so gracious
While letting you feel the ripples of divine gift that’s precious.
*Ephesians 2:4-5 But God, who is rich in mercy, for his great love wherewith he loved us, Even when we were dead in sins, hath quickened us together with Christ, (by grace ye are saved).
February 12, 2024
3rd place, "YOUR CHOICE AGAIN" Poetry Writing Premiere Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 2/20/2024
O how had I always fallen back;
With days full of retrogressions, alack!
I was degenerate;
Surely a youth of no notable rate.
My existence was like an ungodly song
With defiled rhythms was it sung
Wherewith I dreamed no dream
And saw no, not a gleam
For there was no light in me to reflect;
So my star could take no effect.
I was consumed by the darkness
Of mundane blissfulness,
Which was deceptive to inward madness.
I thought I was living happily;
Alas! I was dying virtually,
Forgetful that Life could wane out for itself alone
And hand over me to my Maker whom I never knew.
But there came an hour
At the Annual National Campus Community Congress
Of the Deeper Life campus fellowship
Entitled `Excelsior`
For bringing Life and Hope to intellectuals
And equipping them to reach the utmost height:
Where I wholly got transformed.
I was taught to be purposeful, and not lust to be conformed
I could then soar to the farthest height
And ignited became my light
Revived to live for Christ the Saviour
After which I farewelled failure.
When I see your fantasy,
My heart is filled with ecstasy;
Roses my eyes do see.
When I set them to lie,
Over night's terrors they can't survive
But in your beauteous light do rely.
Goodnight to our sleepless souls,
Which linger not in holes;
But with endless oaths, stronger than poles:
Wherewith loving dreams can't help,
Espying the daily memories kep'.
We'd play in the downs
When the morning wears sweet-love gowns.
Indelible in the dark.
Love is stressed happiness:
That though it aches,.
Strengthens confidence of plain hearts.
Lo, Love be sickness:
To heal or let die away
Like a night turned out unto a day.
Blest freedom
secured imprisonment in God's will
where I enjoy best liberty*.
*Galatians 5:1 Stand fast therefore in the liberty wherewith Christ hath made us free, and be not entangled again with the yoke of bondage.
January 19, 2023
Great symbol of patriotism and hope
Captain America’s shield has prevailed
Showcasing courage of heroic scope.
As needed and vital armor from Christ
Mine is shield of faith, being God’s soldier
To win for what is right, graciously priced.
Made of vibranium, but purely fiction
Captain America’s shield stood time’s test
Reigning still with its iconic function.
My shield of faith is actually divine
Based on undisputed truth, and it’s real
Crafted by the Lord of heaven’s design.
So completely vibration absorbent
Captain America’s shield was awesome
Protecting him from villainous agent.
Tested and tried in Christian fighting bouts
I trust my CAPTAIN with my shield of faith
To surmount temptations for triumph shouts.
Marked by bravery for his dear country
Captain America handled shield well
As offense and defense for victory.
Indeed guarding me from satanic blows
Shield of faith* I use assures champion stand
Serving the Almighty, conquering foes.
*Ephesians 6:16 Above all, taking the shield of faith, wherewith ye shall be able to quench all the fiery darts of the wicked.
August 4, 2022
“Stand fast therefore in the liberty wherewith Christ hath made us free, and be not entangled again with the yoke of bondage.” Galatians 5:1 of the King James Bible.
Divine freedom propels faith to soar high
as soul does inhale peace for service fly
reaching-out with steadfast compassion grasp
against selfishness clutch heart can’t deny.
Pardoned by God from sins of pride hued guilt
my spirit was quickened, life now rebuilt
upon Christ’s gracious hold of gentle clasp
so I won’t glide toward worthlessness’ wilt.
Through the grace of the Lord driving day’s goal
I ascend like vines entwined to Life pole
the Almighty Who blows revival gasp
for triumphant fulfillment of blest role.
July 2, 2021
3rd place, "Writing Prompt - Grasp" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France; judged on 7/12/2021.
Liberty
propelled by love
leads heart to choose
truth and right midst faith’s might
surmounting doubts, vanquishing fears
conquering selfishness of pride’s dominion
toward joy, worth sharing not kept to be cherished alone.
Love-led liberty
devoid of selfishness
while caring for others
drives ransomed soul
to reach-out along mercy and grace
braced through the Lord's hand of goodness
making possible faith-performance, against vain freedom show.
* Galatians 5:1 Stand fast therefore in the liberty wherewith Christ hath made us free, and be not entangled again with the yoke of bondage.
March 18, 2021
Edited on April 15, 2021
2nd place, "The Poet's Hands Are Tied" Poetry Writing Premier Contest
Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann; judged on 6/27/2021.
Preservation quality
such is the essence of my functionality
along endowed saltiness’ purity
especially bestowed by the Creator Almighty.
Sodium chloride is my scientific identity
in human body, I’m an essential entity
helping maintain health’s activity
ensuring muscle and nerve integrity.
Flavor-enhancement magnifies my beauty
surely food-processing pursuits regard me as necessity
toward grand color and good texture intensity
aside from my nutrient-provision capacity.
Indeed I’m a valuable commodity
and I thank God for this significant opportunity…
even the Bible mentions my salt-vitality*
for mankind to consider, surviving against futility.
Mark 9:50 Salt is good: but if the salt have lost his saltness, wherewith will ye season it? Have salt in yourselves, and have peace one with another.
March 8, 2021
Personification in monorhyme
5th place, "SALT" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Anthony Biaanco; judged on 3/10/2021.
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