Watered Down Poems | Examples

They Watered Down The Vodka

They watered down the vodka
                             I barely got a buzz
I bet I’d pass the breath test 
                      If picked up by the fuzz

I’m checkin’ on the gin now
                        It’s tastin’ mighty thin
I guess they mixed that bathtub
            With “pond”, then poured it in

The shots ain’t hitten’ either
               The whiskey’s barely brown
I’m spendin’ my whole paycheck
                    And I’m about to drown

They watered down the vodka
                        And now, I gotta pee
The next time I’m a drinkin’
                         Here comes B.Y.O.B.

Premium Member Watered Down World

I am so tired of things that are fake; 
How much more do I have to take? 
Filters and trends strike again 
reminding me to abstain, 
watered down world give me a break.


Premium Member Watered Down Juice

I can still remember when I was nine, 
the boy across the street made a sign.  
His mother made pitchers of a drink aid,
the cars would stop and we were paid. 
We always said a big thank you,  
many came back day after day we knew.  
A business off the street we now ran, 
it would have been great if we had a fan. 
The days and sun were really hot,   
a cold and refreshing drink they bought. 
We did split fifty fifty of the cash,      
a ton of cups made bags of trash.   
We started selling really young,  
as we yelled to cars with our tongue.  
I can remember that summer well,    
our skin needed a lot of healing gel.                                                          

Date Written: 1/29/2021 
5 Place                                                           
Watered-Down Juice Poetry Contest  
Contest Judged:1/31/2021                                                          
Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh  
Note: This did really happen one very hot summer. Other kids played and the two of us made money.

Watered-Down Juice

Sister, leave him— do it now 
He’s cut your sails and your hair 
He’s burned a hole in your bed 
In your forest, in your family 

Leave him now, do it now 
The latch that you put on your door
When we were children 
It can’t keep me out anymore 

I am a thief, I’m here to steal you from him
You’ve been asleep for centuries 
Turned on your side, like a mountain in snow
To be hardly recognizable, he’s buried your eyes

I am jealous, I am your brother! LEAVE HIM
How dare you! HOW DARE YOU!

Please leave him and come home, I can’t do this alone

Sister, leave him 
Written Friday, January 29th, 2021
For the contest Watered-Down Juice
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Premium Member Watered-Down Juice

The sky called life gleamed in serenity, 
in zephyr floated a butterfly free. 
Its tinged wings embossed your beauty,
as flowers bloomed in all seasons for me.  

The horizon splashed hues of ecstasy, 
to blossom dreams I was on course to fly. 
Rapture took me to realm of fantasy, 
I didn’t see clouds gathered at edge of sky. 

Splintered on threshold of tarnished twilight, 
in deep dismay I found my sky’s waste lie, 
wane with my dreams in storm of morose night. 
Wrecked, I was sucked in stillness of its eye. 

The flushed vale turned to pallid wasteland fast, 
dry flowers didn’t see new sun rise in sky. 
the surge of my tear drowned the pleasant past, 
rinsed colors from the wings of butterfly.

January 21, 2021
Syllable count : 10 per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Contest : Watered-Down Juice
Sponsor : Edward Ibeh


Premium Member Watered-Down Juice

Oh, dreams of my youth – a magical stream -
you flowed without end. You flowed night and day.
I dreamed as I slept, but also I’d dream
while walking to school! you’d not go away,
but in all of my dreams, hope was agleam.

In dreams of my youth, my heart how it beat
when you flowed unto me – sweet cherry juice.
I’d think of the man that one day I’d meet
Sublime were my fantasies . . . and profuse.
With my prince I would find a joy complete!

Dreams of my youth, time has taken its toll.
How foolish are dreams of young girls anyhow!
I no longer dream when out for a stroll.
Mere watered down juice are those old dreams now . . .
though butterfly hopes still flit in my soul.


Watered-Down Juice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
Jan. 19, 2021

Watered-Down Juice

What's poetry  I request don't ask me
Tools of poetry? Have no idea 
Previously poems poured from within
I would write them as it is in dairy
Now still thoughts pour out from somewhere within 
but I tweak them to create poetry 
Contest specify form and syllabus
Different requirements of each contest
Many times poems and thoughts are not same
Is this poetry? I question myself
I am not really sure, it seems maths
I am confused on what is poetry
Is it an creative art form or maths?
What is the role of muse in poetry
when modified for a poetic form?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Syllable count per line 10 checked at ps syllabus counter
Date: 1/15/2021 3:07:00 AM
Written for contest Watered down juice by Edward Ibeh

Premium Member Watered Down Juice

Serenity; not past ferality
Non-judging eye view, geniality
Love misconstrued for lust, misalignment 
Yesteryears, instinct was our sentiment 
Presence smiles today in tranquility

Life flow, a flux of continuity 
Images of past, consigned to memory 
Here and now, free of ego sediment 
Serenity

Free spirit, immune from fatality
Over time, sheds delusionality 
In time reclaims, our native element 
Electrified thus by the joy current
Our ascension slow but a certainty
Serenity

15-January-2021

Watered down juice poetry contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Premium Member Watered-Down Juice

Foray of explosive sunset —
natural fireworks on display.
A banquet of clouds, rolls in wet,
rolling up their sleeves in melee.

The confusion has its beauty —
thunderous blue, gray and white clash.
Diffusion smacks hued patootie.
Sea of the air throws quite a bash.

Brightly colored dresses behind
this curtain of discontentment.
A leprechaun’s gold, silver-lined —
cloaked rainbow’s tittle presentment.

Drink to me only with thine eyes*
the poet says, stirred as they wade.
The belle’s fluttering lashes sigh.
Are they orange or lemonade?


1/11/2021
Watered-Down Juice Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Used HMS, 8 syllable lines, 16 lines

*Ben Johnson’s Song: to Celia

Watered Down Love

The loved started out full of feelings
With heart felt excitement and joy
But with time it fizzled away
Endless bickering and arguing 
That seems to grow with each passing day
No time to think about what happened
To the love we shared in our life
The love making that was filled with passion
Hot lust, and unstoppable sex changed
Is not like it use to be, even though we still
Love each other, it has turned
Into a chore that seems to drag on
Where neither is pleasured at the same time
And now living in limbo, watered down

JANUARY 8, 2021

WATERED DOWN LOVE

EDWARD IBETH

Premium Member Watered-Down Juice

When I used to look into his eyes, the wings of my heart
Attached to my soul, would flutter, and open up, lifting me up
To the point of having me, at last, accept life, and love it
Even, a feat no one and nothing had been able to make me do so far
Regardless of whatever essence they were made of and I, so 
Eager to see the celestial boon of this love being prophesized
Dreamt not of the possibility that it may never consume itself!

Dragged by its mystical flow, I let myself drown in its waves,
Occasionally allowing myself to weave stories, penned as poetry,
Written with the glow of my soul, seeking solely to love and
Now, the memory of it leaves me empty and void, wanting to

Just be made of enough energy as to be able to fly from this world, so
Uncertain, even in the love that it gives, promised by the skies,
Instrumenting itself as a place where all souls are laden with 
Curses, allowing them not to have that which they yearn for,
Enveloping them always in the gloom of that which flew away!

Written on 6th Jan 2021

Watered-Down Juice-Monotetra

A friendship made can often fade
I had one that quickly decayed
Loyalty was just a charade
I was dismayed      I was dismayed

My eyes did not at first conceive
the lies her tongue began to weave
Slanderous words that made me grieve
I was naive        I was naïve

She criticized me on twitter
Her betrayal left me bitter
What a mean gossiping critter
Won't acquit her      Won't acquit her

Cruel, the rumors she had spewed
She needs a change of attitude
A real friend is never that crude
Hateful or rude        Hateful or rude

Was upset when double crossed
Then realized nothing was lost 
My looks burned her like Winter frost
Friendship tossed     Friendship tossed

They day I told her we were through
She said, "I was a friend to you."
I walked away because she knew
It was not true       It was not true

From ones like that, I turn away
Devious people who betray
She taunted like a mocking jay
And I, her prey     And I, her prey



January 5th, 2021
Watered-Down Juice Contest by Edward Ibeh

Life - Watered Down Juice

human life
juxtapositions galore~
watered down juice

Premium Member Watered-Down Juice- Wdj

        Oh sadness, I am like the rose that fades,
                 withered, frail, colorless, and bland; 
                            my life has been many moments,
but one moment will ever dilute me.
         The moment I buried my son,
                  that memory stabs at my heart;
                            leaving my soul weakened and diminished.
and I become wishy-washy.
        A watered-down version of me,
                  so, I drink from the sweet nectar of life;
                               the claret of vitality,
the extract and essence of strength.
        I let the deep sweetness flow through my veins,
                   no weak liquid will lift me up;
                                only essence like blood will do.

_______________________
January 2, 2021

Poetry/Free Verse/Watered-Down Juice
Copyright Protected, ID 01-1318-169-02
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Watered-Down Juice
sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 01/31/2021

Second Place

Premium Member Watered-Down Juice

Let’s go on a journey, reversing time and space.
Back before every rat had joined my race.
This is one memory that I’ll try and share.
We’ll have to pass through the dark, only come if you dare.

It’s about a young boy’s first day on the farm.
With cats and dogs, and three pigs in the barn.
A mother and father, who’s love was shared.
A moment in time when I actually cared.

Right before the light disappeared from my sky.
Before the darkened night, had caused me to cry.
Before depression had squandered my very soul.
Back in the day, when I still had a full bowl.

This is about a young boy running free in the woods,
feeling happy and laughing, like all boys should.
Not a care in the world, free from danger and harm.
Before the evil, that came to visit our farm.

There was no fear, no fighting to live.
Only my Mother and Father and their willingness to give.
The rest gets cloudy and fades off underground.
Before my living hell, and that’s watered down.

January 1, 2021
Watered-Down Juice Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

Related Poems

Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter