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Watered Down Juice

Serenity; not past ferality Non-judging eye view, geniality Love misconstrued for lust, misalignment Yesteryears, instinct was our sentiment Presence smiles today in tranquility Life flow, a flux of continuity Images of past, consigned to memory Here and now, free of ego sediment Serenity Free spirit, immune from fatality Over time, sheds delusionality In time reclaims, our native element Electrified thus by the joy current Our ascension slow but a certainty Serenity 15-January-2021 Watered down juice poetry contest Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Jeremy Martin

Date: 2/9/2021 10:02:00 AM

I can feel this poem breathe. Excellent job and congratulations on your win.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/9/2021 6:11:00 PM

Thank you, Jeremy!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/1/2021 5:32:00 AM

So true--sometimes images of past get consigned to memory. Well done in this hard to execute form, US (wish I knew your first name). BIG congrats on your win in Edward's contest.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 2/1/2021 6:30:00 AM

Thanks Vijay! I use this same screen name across all forums I’m active on ... spiritualforums.com, spiritualinspiration and actualised.org.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 1/31/2021 1:15:00 PM

Love this. God bless you and Congrats. With love and prayers, Gina

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/31/2021 6:57:00 PM

Thanks Regina! :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/31/2021 12:22:00 PM

A fantastic poem, Seeker:-) I have to try this Rondeau form sooner or later! Congratulations on your win in my contest!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/31/2021 6:56:00 PM

Thanks Edward! Happy you enjoyed! Yes, I do like the rondeau form!