Watered Down Juice

Serenity; not past ferality
Non-judging eye view, geniality
Love misconstrued for lust, misalignment 
Yesteryears, instinct was our sentiment 
Presence smiles today in tranquility

Life flow, a flux of continuity 
Images of past, consigned to memory 
Here and now, free of ego sediment 
Serenity

Free spirit, immune from fatality
Over time, sheds delusionality 
In time reclaims, our native element 
Electrified thus by the joy current
Our ascension slow but a certainty
Serenity

15-January-2021

Watered down juice poetry contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/9/2021 10:02:00 AM
I can feel this poem breathe. Excellent job and congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/9/2021 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, Jeremy!
Date: 2/1/2021 5:32:00 AM
So true--sometimes images of past get consigned to memory. Well done in this hard to execute form, US (wish I knew your first name). BIG congrats on your win in Edward's contest.
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Date: 2/1/2021 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Vijay! I use this same screen name across all forums I’m active on ... spiritualforums.com, spiritualinspiration and actualised.org.
Date: 1/31/2021 1:15:00 PM
Love this. God bless you and Congrats. With love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 1/31/2021 6:57:00 PM
Thanks Regina! :)
Date: 1/31/2021 12:22:00 PM
A fantastic poem, Seeker:-) I have to try this Rondeau form sooner or later! Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 1/31/2021 6:56:00 PM
Thanks Edward! Happy you enjoyed! Yes, I do like the rondeau form!
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