Watered-Down Juice

Let’s go on a journey, reversing time and space.
Back before every rat had joined my race.
This is one memory that I’ll try and share.
We’ll have to pass through the dark, only come if you dare.

It’s about a young boy’s first day on the farm.
With cats and dogs, and three pigs in the barn.
A mother and father, who’s love was shared.
A moment in time when I actually cared.

Right before the light disappeared from my sky.
Before the darkened night, had caused me to cry.
Before depression had squandered my very soul.
Back in the day, when I still had a full bowl.

This is about a young boy running free in the woods,
feeling happy and laughing, like all boys should.
Not a care in the world, free from danger and harm.
Before the evil, that came to visit our farm.

There was no fear, no fighting to live.
Only my Mother and Father and their willingness to give.
The rest gets cloudy and fades off underground.
Before my living hell, and that’s watered down.

January 1, 2021
Watered-Down Juice Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 1/2/2021 6:39:00 AM
Hmm...so you make me wonder what happened. Internal or external. My wonderful nephew goes in and out of rehab (where he is currently). God bless you with much light. Poetry is so cathartic.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/2/2021 10:12:00 AM
I wish it would have been an addiction. Thanks for stopping by Kim, it's been a pleasure!
Date: 1/1/2021 11:28:00 PM
Evil can always be repelled. There's only one way to do it. ~~
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Mark Koplin
Date: 1/2/2021 10:11:00 AM
Indeed it can Victor, Thanks!
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