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Watered-Down Juice-Monotetra

A friendship made can often fade I had one that quickly decayed Loyalty was just a charade I was dismayed I was dismayed My eyes did not at first conceive the lies her tongue began to weave Slanderous words that made me grieve I was naive I was naïve She criticized me on twitter Her betrayal left me bitter What a mean gossiping critter Won't acquit her Won't acquit her Cruel, the rumors she had spewed She needs a change of attitude A real friend is never that crude Hateful or rude Hateful or rude Was upset when double crossed Then realized nothing was lost My looks burned her like Winter frost Friendship tossed Friendship tossed They day I told her we were through She said, "I was a friend to you." I walked away because she knew It was not true It was not true From ones like that, I turn away Devious people who betray She taunted like a mocking jay And I, her prey And I, her prey January 5th, 2021 Watered-Down Juice Contest by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/1/2021 7:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Friendships come and go. Only a very few are real friends. Enjoy your win/day/week with blessings................
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Date: 1/31/2021 6:37:00 PM
Wow! Love the way each last line emphasises the undercurrent emotions! Beautiful! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/31/2021 1:08:00 PM
Sad tale indeed... congrats on your win friend. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 1/31/2021 12:08:00 PM
What a wonderful poem, Jenna:-) It's a gripping write throughout! I've never heard of this Monotetra form. I've got to try it sometime. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 1/5/2021 3:48:00 PM
This monotetra is a very appealing poetic form, which you've utilized superbly. For true friends we pray... For true friends we pray. ~ Gershon
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/5/2021 10:14:00 PM
Thanks for liking this one, Gershon. I appreciate sincere friends.
Date: 1/5/2021 3:45:00 PM
That's deep Jenna...J.A.B.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/5/2021 10:14:00 PM
Thanks, Justin.
Date: 1/5/2021 3:34:00 PM
wow jenna this is a gem of a poem I wish i could have written it about someone who is no longer in my life, love the rhyme and the impact of that repeated phrase:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/5/2021 10:13:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. I enjoy the form and the emphasis does create an impact.
Date: 1/5/2021 1:26:00 PM
She's well out of your life Jenna, good riddance I say Well written verse. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/5/2021 10:13:00 PM
Yes, she is, Tom. Thanks for your thoughts.

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