Watered-Down Juice

Oh, dreams of my youth – a magical stream -
you flowed without end. You flowed night and day.
I dreamed as I slept, but also I’d dream
while walking to school! you’d not go away,
but in all of my dreams, hope was agleam.

In dreams of my youth, my heart how it beat
when you flowed unto me – sweet cherry juice.
I’d think of the man that one day I’d meet
Sublime were my fantasies . . . and profuse.
With my prince I would find a joy complete!

Dreams of my youth, time has taken its toll.
How foolish are dreams of young girls anyhow!
I no longer dream when out for a stroll.
Mere watered down juice are those old dreams now . . .
though butterfly hopes still flit in my soul.


Watered-Down Juice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh
Jan. 19, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 2/9/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea! Lovely! Love that cherry juice line
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Date: 2/1/2021 9:48:00 AM
Way to capture the fading of youthful thinking!
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Date: 1/31/2021 6:32:00 PM
Sparking with your usual morning dew freshness! Congrats on your win, Andrea!
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Date: 1/31/2021 12:57:00 PM
Congrats Andrea... on a beautiful write. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 1/31/2021 12:03:00 PM
What is stellar poem this is, Andrea! I loved every line of it! Big congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 1/28/2021 10:52:00 PM
Hi Andrea— a wistful nostalgic poem you have here. Just wanted to say that I missed reading your work while I was away and hope you are well. Jeremy
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Date: 1/28/2021 11:08:00 AM
Another great write from you. Good luck with it in the contest.
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Date: 1/23/2021 4:05:00 AM
This is so true, but I had not thought of this for a long time. "also I’d dream while walking to school!" I used to spend my school days in daydreams, in order to survive the humdrumness of them.
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Date: 1/22/2021 9:34:00 PM
Very imaginative, Andrea
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Date: 1/22/2021 9:48:00 AM
Wow Andrea, an excellent poem, I wish you a 1st win in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 1/21/2021 9:33:00 PM
Hello Andrea … lovely verse Andrea. As we grow older dreams do appear to become less meaningful - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 1/21/2021 4:28:00 PM
Very good, I prefer dreaming to waking.
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Date: 1/21/2021 2:58:00 AM
- Dreams are never foolish, they are important there and then:) - Best wishes in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:20:00 PM
This is a very clever and beautifully composed take on the theme, with many personal notes sprinkled in. LOVE your theme and your excellent rhymes ~ John
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Date: 1/20/2021 8:59:00 PM
Yes, those old dreams are watered down! GL in contest!
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Date: 1/20/2021 7:23:00 PM
Ah the dreams of youth. Then life wakes you up. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/20/2021 4:58:00 PM
What a beautiful last line to end this dreamy write Andrea, hugs
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Date: 1/20/2021 4:45:00 PM
That's a great truth you told in those last two lines. The juxtaposition resonates with me, for sure. Super contest entry, Andrea. Here's to a big win. Ciao, Gershon
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Date: 1/20/2021 4:44:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, This is my kind of write. I enjoyed it from start to finish. I can relate to those types of fantasies. I still do shsh... don't tell anybody. I agree; those butterflies have to stay put. This is a winner in my book.Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-)Alexis
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Date: 1/20/2021 3:43:00 PM
Ahh!! Do you now have water that has just a little cherry flavor? Enjoyed reading this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 1/20/2021 6:09:00 AM
Yes, those butterfly hopes... I still dream and breathe my share of these blessed inspirations... like a caress touching the spirit, they enhance the moments I'm living. God bless you with a win, dear Andrea.... This is enchanting.
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Date: 1/20/2021 5:57:00 AM
Dreams are so sweet especially about love. And especially in youth--a form of imagination that keeps hearts fluttering. Keep dreaming, Andrea--even when you are out on a stroll.
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Date: 1/20/2021 2:11:00 AM
Fragility of those teenage dreams.. .I can relate to this.. those dreams are teen magic... they water down or vanish when time takes toll. Your last line gave me a smile.. Apt for the contest and best wishes dear Andrea. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/20/2021 1:39:00 AM
All dreams are foolish sometimes. I always forget what I dream. ~~
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Date: 1/20/2021 12:55:00 AM
Oh how our mind wanders in our youth, it proves you have an active mind that prepares you for adulthood. Tom
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