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Watered-Down Juice

Sister, leave him— do it now He’s cut your sails and your hair He’s burned a hole in your bed In your forest, in your family Leave him now, do it now The latch that you put on your door When we were children It can’t keep me out anymore I am a thief, I’m here to steal you from him You’ve been asleep for centuries Turned on your side, like a mountain in snow To be hardly recognizable, he’s buried your eyes I am jealous, I am your brother! LEAVE HIM How dare you! HOW DARE YOU! Please leave him and come home, I can’t do this alone Sister, leave him Written Friday, January 29th, 2021 For the contest Watered-Down Juice Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/31/2021 6:47:00 PM
Piquant, painful, sincere. Beautifully portrayed! Congrats on your win!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/9/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment !
Date: 1/31/2021 12:26:00 PM
Potent and powerful write, Jeremy! Loved it. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 2/9/2021 10:00:00 AM
Thank you Edward! I enjoyed this contest a lot
Date: 1/30/2021 2:00:00 AM
This really resonates with me and I appreciate the free verse so much. Thanks for sharing.
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Jeremy Martin
Date: 1/30/2021 2:08:00 AM
Thank you Angel, I’m glad you found resonance, a lovely compliment !

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