Our community has become diluted.
Where there was once connection?
The remains are septic and disheveled.
It’s sad to see this behavior in action,
witness emptiness eclipsing synergy.
We all lose when we feed distraction.
Multiple pens feed a seed for artistry,
people show up but remain divided.
I don’t see how this will inspire poetry.
Thank you for the platform provided,
regardless of a mission so misguided.
With blurred vision in my one eye,
on this cold winter afternoon
I trace the course of a blue-black fly
in my small kitchen. Pretty soon
my boredom gets the best of me.
Once I eat a macaroon
I rise to make some jasmine tea
and wonder why I allow this bug
(who does not share my philosophy)
to sit there resting on my mug.
I do not know what's in his head,
but think he must be awfully smug,
so I get up and leave. Instead
of drinking tea I go to bed.
You abused the rare title of confidant,
viewing vulnerability as nothing special.
Now I’m in control of the editing of want.
Armed to the teeth and ready to wrestle,
I’m recanting each display of affection.
My discipline has reached a new level.
Toxic dynamics now require intervention,
your frostbitten words have no meaning.
It’s time to rewrite the contract extension.
Never again will I get caught pleading
remember that, take your time rereading.
Grow strong but remember your roots,
explore the world yet seek what is still.
Moment to moment find what suits.
When we let go and tumble downhill,
those hard rolls ignite that inner core.
Nurturing soil brings a spiritual refill.
With just one taste left wanting more,
mastering rules bosses stacks wins.
Don’t aim simply to even the score.
Fly a little bit higher lifted by flat-spins,
embrace the past as you shed old skins.
"The greatest little lighthouse in Nova Scotia."
Quote by_ Canadian Nova Scotia Tourism
A square building called Gilbert's Cove Lighthouse,
built way back in 1904 high above the water;
it was home to a man, children and spouse.
The cove calm but it could get white-water,
the red beacon guided boats of all shapes;
keepers kept them from the underwater.
Often rain would crash down like thick white drapes,
the children would huddle in real dread;
for 50 years the family enjoyed dreamscapes.
It was a lighthouse- a home white and red,
in time, it fell to decay and boarded up;
a Nova Scotia lighthouse and homestead.
But, a historical group did a huge cleanup,
now, museum and tea room pick-me-up !
Let flames be if you can’t fan them,
what a waste to keep words contained.
Intrigue and sparks walk in tandem.
Blind fervor can’t remain restrained.
With an adept Sun’s touch you soar,
that type of glow will not be feigned.
Too prim for this hurried downpour,
please end fake summer renascence.
You don’t dance when hail hits the floor.
Not thinking of the consequence,
heat won’t fire with benevolence.
Never B Flat
Sometimes B Sharp
Always B Natural
Orpheus and
Apollo and
The guided Muses
Octoecho
Dorian mode
Uneven float note
Thoth inventor
Ihy child
Lord of vibrations
True rhythm is
Jehovah’s biz
Created for us
Led by music
Offbeat, weak beat
Syncopated trope
Is nature's fabric polar, dual, or binary,
or is it only our perception,
so that for each position, there's one contrary,
always without exception?
Are left/right, forward/back, up/down,
nature, itself, or is it our conception?
Is he a serious man or clown
in our language's nomenclature?
Does he live in the country or a town?
When it comes to a human's nature,
each one is either "them" or "us",
and we ask which will command the legislature.
We're creative in our definitions, thus,
nationality, gender, ethnicity or age
decides who rides in the back of the bus.
When one puts a story on a page,
introducing conflict is a must.
Internet users won't engage
unless a headline triggers bloody lust,
causing them to click,
making money, but sowing distrust.
Is the Internet, then, making us more sick -
putting us at odds, one by one,
creating two realities, brick by brick?
Here's a headline I made up for fun:
"Mean Ol' Martians are invading earth!"
Now, do you think earthlings can live as one?
involuntary spasms of delight manifest
on our head we wear a crown of bliss
touched thus by spirit we feel blest
reality for us is the here now this
our presence an epitome of delight
fullness in emptiness, nothing amiss
both imbibing and radiating divine light
we are God’s flame that has no name
nodes within aglow day and night
poised thus in vast void with no aim
bliss enablement is our claim to fame
“Everyone’s different,” says someone born in May
To the another whose birthday’s in June.
“But we all get a “hip hip hooray!”!”
“Every cake’s different,” say tastebuds to a spoon;
A stable table to some disposable plates
As they hear for the first time the table’s same tune.
“Every bite’s different,” say the plates in turn on the table.
“Every different bite’s bitten to a new beat on the first record
That plays when cake song’s sung and cake placement is stable.
The foreground to “the food of love” is to tape record.
The format of birthdays is repeated, results still differing for
Each year’s wish, released like a parachute pack by a ripcord.
"Wisdom doesn't automatically come with old age. Nothing does - except wrinkles. ~ Abigail Van Buren
Hear me, my ardent, eager, bright-eyed youth.
I'm flattered that you would lend me an ear,
though you are imaginary, in truth,
and I am quite unqualified, I fear -
to utter words, unquestionably wise.
But I love to speak, and my time is near.
What I didn't know, when I was your size,
is that lives are a mix of joy and pain,
so that everyone, sometimes hurts and cries.
Sometimes, the sun shines, sometimes, it will rain.
So, have faith. There is no need to despair.
The bright sun will always come out again.
Be brave, try hard, be true, be kind and care.
Laugh, have fun, nurture yourself and others,
and you will see the sun more than your share.
Remember, we're all sisters and brothers.
I always wanted most of all to know,
but why this fierce passion I cannot say.
Other children might want to jump or throw,
and while they wished to laugh and run and play,
I read the books written through the ages -
to gain knowledge to keep danger away.
Yes, knowledge is power, said the sages,
but o'er safety and power, there is love,
and abandoning life in the pages,
and driven by a force, seemed from above,
I was drawn to a sweet flower in bloom,
but not showing what I was thinking of,
I tried in vain to possess and consume
by knowing all about her that I could
and so I lost the scent of her perfume.
An irony I wish I understood -
fifty years on, I don't know who I am.
My memory's not working like it should.
In fact, I do not even know my name.
I struggle in confusion and in shame.
A quiet love outlives the turning years,
It bends through storms yet never asks to rest,
It hums beneath the weight of hidden fears.
It learns to lose and still be softly blessed,
A fragile thread that will not tear apart,
Though every night it fails the silent test.
It guards a fire that trembles in the heart,
And stands against the sharpest edge of pain,
Yet yields its breath before it turns to art.
For love can war, but cannot war in vain,
It fights the world with gentle, open hands,
Till one soft word can break it like the rain.
“Stay not,” it hears and all it understands,
Is love can live, but dies when it disbands.
Written: April 29, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Constance La France
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"Quote: True beauty is a ray that springs from the sacred depths of the soul, and illuminates the body, just as life springs from the kernel of a stone and gives colour and scent to a flower. By Rumi"
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The springtime voice moves daintily in the air,
A silver sigh like dawnlight through the trees,
That wakes earth from winter's silent prayer.
It lures the buds with dazzling, perplexed breeze,
A mystic murmur, attractive as a rhyme,
that wanders down the meadows, talking to the bees.
Each seed now stirs, as though it recalls time—
a sleeping spark beneath the melting loam,
standing like hope in some forgotten clime
The hills grow warm; wandering winds bring home
The flocks of petals, gentle as falling snow,
Their hues light up every meadow and dome.
O Spirit Spring, whose translucent streams glow,
restore the earth—let every heartbeat grow.
Contest 2026 - 04 - 02 While Beautiful Tarzarma Sponsor Constance La France
A Therianthrope’s Harsh Winter
Snowflakes sunk into my soft fur
I purred as my fur began to puff
the puff wetting my once so soft fur.
I fluttered as my fur began to puff.
During the Nightengale, when its cold,
When my head is filled in the slough
tarnished in scuff making me less bold.
My lips shuddered in the freezing snow,
flakes flowed and i decided to bring my body to a fold
from hind legs to long legs nestled in snow
wallow in the warmth, losing my wool
soft skin leaving me in a soft glow
I run against the snow and its cool
running back to my home and no longer being a fool
drugged winter fighting against the null
Introduction
One sound has barely settled before it begins pulling the poem toward its next destination. That continuing pressure gives terza rima a distinctive reading pleasure: each tercet can feel momentarily poised, yet the ear knows that something remains unresolved. The result is a form equally capable of measured reflection and urgent forward motion. Rhyme becomes more than ornament; it acts as promise, memory, and invitation.
As you read the community poems, notice how much variety can exist within that shared momentum. One poet may use the form for a journey through landscape, another for an argument that keeps revising itself, and another for grief, comedy, devotion, or dramatic address. Voices may sound ceremonious, conversational, intimate, playful, or unsettled. Some writers make the interlocking sounds conspicuous, while others let them work quietly beneath flexible sentences and subtle tonal changes.
Browsing several poems reveals choices that a single example cannot. Compare how different poets manage the delay between introducing a sound and fulfilling its promise, how they position vivid or surprising words at rhyme points, and how they prevent recurring sounds from making thought predictable. Read beyond the first example to see whether each poem moves by narrative steps, accumulating images, logical stages, or emotional intensification. Most revealing of all is the ending: after so much forward linkage, every poet must decide how firmly to stop. Side-by-side reading turns that decision into an audible study of expectation, release, and closure.
Reading Guide
Read terza rima with two kinds of attention at once. Follow what the poem says, but also listen for what the sound pattern makes you anticipate. The form continually asks the ear to remember an earlier sound while the mind receives new images or ideas. Strong readings therefore resist rushing. Pause enough to register each tercet, then notice how syntax, rhythm, and meaning either honor that pause or carry you across it. As you compare community poems, consider not merely whether rhymes are present, but what imaginative work those rhymes perform.
- Track the forward pull of sound. Notice where a rhyme creates expectation and how the later answer changes its meaning. Does the returning sound feel inevitable, surprising, ominous, comic, or merely convenient? Compare which poets make anticipation part of the poem's emotional experience.
- Watch sentences cross stanza boundaries. A sentence that continues beyond a tercet can accelerate thought, while a full stop can make the stanza feel reflective or emphatic. Ask where each poet lets grammar agree with the visible grouping and where it resists that boundary.
- Listen to the underlying pulse. Regular movement can give the rhyme chain dignity and steadiness, while carefully placed variations may emphasize agitation, hesitation, or an important word. When reading aloud, where does the voice move naturally, and where does it seem to serve the pattern rather than the speaker?
- Examine the rhyme words themselves. Because these words occupy acoustically exposed positions, weak abstractions, filler, and strained phrasing become especially noticeable. Ask whether the end words carry imagery, action, or thematic weight, and whether their relationships deepen as the poem proceeds.
- Follow image development. An effective poem may pass an image forward much as it passes a sound forward: wind becomes breath, breath becomes speech, and speech becomes memory. Does each new tercet transform earlier material, or does the poem simply add unrelated description?
- Study the manner of closure. After sustained linkage, the final answering sound can feel like a door closing, an echo fading, or a thought returning home. Ask whether the ending resolves the poem's central pressure, deliberately leaves it unsettled, or stops only because the pattern has reached its planned endpoint.
Browse the poems in this collection more than once: first for sense, then aloud for sound, and finally in comparison with another poet's approach. The form becomes clearest when eye, ear, and expectation work together.
Writing Tips
In a workshop, begin by treating terza rima as an engine of thought rather than a container to be filled. Its linked sounds keep asking the poem to continue, so choose material that benefits from pursuit, unfolding, reconsideration, or cumulative movement. A static description can work, but it needs an internal progression: changing light, deepening perception, mounting pressure, or a speaker whose understanding shifts. Draft toward discovery instead of making formal completion the poem's only goal.
- Choose a subject with stages. Journeys, arguments, memories, transformations, and sustained addresses naturally provide successive turns. Before writing lines, identify what changes from beginning to middle to end. If nothing develops, the rhyme chain may produce motion that the subject does not earn.
- Sketch the semantic route first. Write a brief prose account of the poem's emotional or narrative movement. This prevents available rhymes from dictating the subject. Once the route is visible, let the form complicate it by suggesting connections you had not anticipated.
- Build rhyme reservoirs, not rigid lists. Gather possible words for several sound families, including different parts of speech and levels of diction. Reject words that would require padding or distortion. If you adapt rhyme exactness, make the sonic relationship deliberate and consistent enough that readers can still hear the interlocking logic.
- Protect natural syntax. A common beginner mistake is reversing ordinary word order merely to secure an end sound. Try moving the rhyme word, recasting the sentence, or changing the sound family before accepting an unnatural inversion. Formal pressure should sharpen expression, not make the speaker sound involuntarily antique.
- Vary the relation between sentence and tercet. Use a complete syntactic unit when you want composure or emphasis; carry a sentence onward when you want speed, suspense, or continuity. Too many identical stanza endings can make the poem march mechanically, while constant overflow can hide the architecture altogether.
- Let cadence support the voice. Establish enough rhythmic steadiness for departures to register, but do not hammer every line into identical stress. Read each line as speech. A devotional voice, an angry witness, and a comic narrator should not all produce the same beat merely because they share a form.
- Give rhyme points imaginative responsibility. Place concrete nouns, active verbs, or charged ambiguities where the ear is most alert. Better still, let paired rhyme words create a meaningful friction: shelter against failure, desire against fire, or another relationship discovered through your own subject. Avoid using generic intensifiers simply because they fit.
- Design the ending early, then revise toward it. The conclusion must answer accumulated sonic expectation without feeling like an administrative final line. Decide whether the poem needs release, reversal, return, or purposeful incompletion. The last sound should clarify the journey behind it, not merely certify that the pattern has stopped.
During revision, mark every rhyme word, every sentence ending, and every place where the rhythm becomes conspicuous. Remove explanatory lines inserted only to reach the next rhyme. Test whether images develop rather than repeat, and whether the speaker's diction remains credible under pressure. Finally, read the entire draft aloud to someone who has not seen it. Ask where anticipation strengthened, where the chain became predictable, and where the ending felt emotionally earned. Revise the weak transitions, not just the imperfect sounds.
Interesting Facts
- The form creates an acoustic debt. A sound introduced in one tercet remains active in the listener's memory until the poem answers it. That delay can generate suspense even when the subject is quiet, because the ear is waiting while the sentence continues elsewhere.
- Rhyme can redirect thought. A useful rhyme word may suggest an image, action, or contradiction the poet did not plan. The challenge is to distinguish genuine discovery from a detour taken only because a convenient word appeared.
- Visual units and spoken units need not coincide. Tercets remain visible on the page, but sentences can move through them in many ways. A poet can therefore create tension between orderly appearance and breathless speech, or make syntax reinforce the poem's composure.
- Constraint becomes more noticeable over distance. In a longer poem, every chosen sound affects later vocabulary and pacing. This can produce impressive continuity, but it also exposes filler quickly. Length magnifies both the form's momentum and its risks.
- The same linkage can express opposite emotions. Recurring sounds may suggest inevitability in a tragic meditation, persistence in a love poem, circling thought in an obsession, or comic entrapment in a satire. Structure supplies pressure; context determines what that pressure means.
- Selective variation is most effective when audible as choice. A loosened rhyme, disrupted cadence, or abrupt syntactic break can intensify a moment if the poem has established a clear expectation first. Without that preparation, variation may sound accidental rather than expressive.
- Closure changes the memory of the chain. A decisive ending can make earlier delays feel purposeful, while an open or troubled ending may leave their echoes active. Compare several community poems to hear how different conclusions reshape everything that precedes them.
Popular Themes
Subject matter and structure continually influence one another in terza rima. Its ongoing linkage favors themes that can deepen, travel, argue, circle back, or gather consequence. The possibilities below are literary affinities, not statistical rankings of what PoetrySoup members write most often.
- Journeys and quests. Successive tercets can mark physical stages while the carried sounds bind departure, obstacle, and arrival. The form is especially effective when outer movement mirrors a changing inner purpose.
- Grief and memory. A sound that disappears and returns can resemble recollection itself. It may create the feeling that the past cannot be dismissed, while the forward motion prevents elegy from becoming entirely static.
- Nature and seasonal change. Weather, rivers, wind, growth, and decay offer images that transform continuously. Linked rhyme can make separate observations feel part of one ecological or emotional process rather than a catalogue of scenery.
- Argument and spiritual inquiry. Each tercet can advance a claim, introduce doubt, or revise what came before. Because the poem must continue answering earlier sounds, it suits speakers who discover that every answer produces another question.
- Desire, pursuit, and obsession. Deferred sonic satisfaction can embody longing. The reader hears the speaker approaching an answer, receiving it, and immediately being drawn onward, a pattern well suited to wants that renew themselves.
- Conflict and public witness. Interlocking movement can connect action with consequence, personal experience with larger forces, or one generation's choices with another's burden. Care is needed so formal music does not beautify suffering without examining it.
- Comic escalation. The pressure to keep finding credible rhymes can become part of the joke when handled with control. Repeated complications, increasingly surprising images, and a sharply prepared final turn can transform constraint into comic momentum.
As you read the community poems, compare works that address similar subjects. One poet may make a journey feel inevitable, another uncertain; one may render memory as return, another as pursuit. The form's shared pressures make these differences in voice, image, and emotional direction especially revealing.
Editorial Insights
The central artistic tension in terza rima lies between obligation and discovery. Every carried sound creates a commitment, yet a memorable poem makes that commitment seem to open possibilities rather than close them. A technically recognizable draft may deliver its expected echoes, but a successful poem allows those echoes to influence thought, mood, and dramatic movement. The reader should feel that the poem continues because the subject is still unfolding, not because the writer owes the pattern another installment.
Structure feels necessary when sonic linkage and conceptual linkage reinforce one another. A rhyme word can revive an earlier image, sharpen a contrast, or reveal that two apparently separate ideas belong together. Sentence movement matters just as much. A phrase that crosses a tercet boundary may enact pursuit or resistance; a sudden stop may give moral weight to a statement. Editors also notice whether rhythmic variation serves the speaker. A disruption near an admission, accusation, or revelation can sound psychologically exact, whereas random irregularity merely weakens the poem's authority.
Common weaknesses arise when formal problem-solving becomes visible in the wrong way. Predictable rhyme pairs can make the reader anticipate vocabulary before thought has earned it. Forced inversions damage the credibility of the voice. Mechanical stanza pacing gives every moment equal weight, while explanatory padding delays the next rhyme without developing the poem. Another danger is insufficient development: images accumulate, but no relationship among them changes. At the opposite extreme, a poet may over-explain every transition and leave no imaginative space for the reader. The best chain is clear enough to be heard yet supple enough to carry surprise.
Individuality remains visible through diction, sentence architecture, degree of sonic exactness, image logic, tonal range, and the handling of closure. One poet may favor ceremonial resonance; another may place colloquial speech against the form's patterned expectations. One may make each tercet a firm step, while another creates a long current passing through visible divisions. Comparing multiple community poems develops judgment because it separates convention from artistic decision. Readers begin to hear which effects belong to the form, which belong to a particular voice, and which moments transform shared constraints into an experience that could not have been produced as powerfully by looser means.
Read, Write & Share
Read several community poems before settling on what terza rima can sound like. Compare how each poet manages anticipation, sentence movement, rhyme-word pressure, imagery, and the difficult act of stopping an interlocking sequence. A thoughtful comment might identify where a transition surprised you, how an echo changed meaning, or why an ending felt earned.
Then try your own poem. Choose a subject that can unfold in stages, listen closely as the sound begins to guide thought, and revise until the form supports the voice rather than displaying itself. When the draft is ready, publish it on PoetrySoup and add your interpretation to the continuing conversation.
Collection Statistics
This collection contains 470 terza rima poems, offering many opportunities to compare how writers approach linked sound, pacing, voice, imagery, and closure. A collection of this size can include poets who follow established conventions closely, adapt them to the needs of a particular subject, or challenge reader expectations while preserving a recognizable relationship to the form. Read across several entries to appreciate the range of possible interpretations.
Terza Rima Categories
Read wonderful terza rima poetry on the following sub-topics:
art, animals, christmas, death, family, flowers, food, friendship, funny, kids, life, love, music, nature, nursery, parents, sadness, school, spring, sports, summer, war, winter
and more.
Definition | What is Terza Rima in Poetry?
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