The Silver Sigh of Dawn

Written: April 29, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Constance La France ************** "Quote: True beauty is a ray that springs from the sacred depths of the soul, and illuminates the body, just as life springs from the kernel of a stone and gives colour and scent to a flower. By Rumi" *************** The springtime voice moves daintily in the air, A silver sigh like dawnlight through the trees, That wakes earth from winter's silent prayer. It lures the buds with dazzling, perplexed breeze, A mystic murmur, attractive as a rhyme, that wanders down the meadows, talking to the bees. Each seed now stirs, as though it recalls time— a sleeping spark beneath the melting loam, standing like hope in some forgotten clime The hills grow warm; wandering winds bring home The flocks of petals, gentle as falling snow, Their hues light up every meadow and dome. O Spirit Spring, whose translucent streams glow, restore the earth—let every heartbeat grow.
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Miller Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 2:32 AM
I have not read you for a while, this is beautiful, congratulations
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. Sara K
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May 4, 2026 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "The Silver Sigh of Dawn" write. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............
Guptar Avatar
May 4, 2026 at 12:52 AM
Conreatulations, dear poet on sharing the top podium in this contest with alovely terza rima on spring time, the season of rebirth and renewal, of joy and mirth, of youth and growth...Wish you a cheerful day.
George Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 10:44 PM
I knew this would be a lovely read. You didn't disappoint me. You are always so gifted in composing poems on dawn and dusk. The quote of Rumi extols the beauty of nature. So does my friend, Lasaad!
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May 1, 2026 at 5:39 PM
Sotto, the title must be 5 words only, just edit, (my soupmail is not working)~
Ball Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 1:24 AM
Absolutely beautiful Lasaad. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Vaso Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:58 PM
Beautiful poetry!
Vaso Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:58 PM
Loved listening to the music while reading as well!
Hind Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 10:03 PM
"The hills grow warm; wandering winds bring home The flocks of petals, gentle as falling snow," !!!
Greenhough Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 9:06 PM
The flow and rhyme of your poem adds a beautiful cadence. Good luck with the contest.
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