Swiveling Poems | Examples

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Premium Member Tranquility

 The parklane at dusk
can be quite enticing when trails
               of streetlamps begin to set ;
 a lustrous hour could bring one
    right through glimmers of  pearled orbs--
          every leaf roller-coasting  with winds
as orioles join the soft rhythm 
  swiveling on a lattice of tranquility:

And stillness heaves  like zen- flare 
       iridescent lights lulling the breeze ...
  a dazzle , a quiver on painted grass
       quieting night's breaths without unease:
   This park...life's harbinger of calm,
      adorns flowers curling on kneaded arms
                  till sun-moon greets duskfall
                     with an intent wish--  dear one--
     a balm for  surrender ...and tranquil hours

Premium Member Slow Sink

Few years ago, I drifted on a wetland
swiveling through the pewter 
of evening as contours of statelv herons
 unfolded...velvety the feathers white,
 and ablaze by clear Asian ripples of before.

Yet, from a visit today, my eyes
follow them along weeds...
their poses now limp from a gray night 
through rows of frail blooms, fumbling
 along a marsh looking old; 
their feet throttling in slow sink of  motion
against those once radiant plumes:

In quiet reflection, I imagine 
these birds' pliqht amidst 
nature's environ , steeped in frail
passages of late life stages unattended:

How I weep for these herons' destination
 beyond soiled grasses
as I wrap my fingers in prayer, 
relishing this instance where 
I gaze at an avian delight,
slowly yet wondrously aging through my eyes.

Premium Member Lacustrine Opera


In bejeweled jade landscape
the topaz terrain rolls relentless
on wondrous waves,  
undulating with
the sculpted panorama 
of pristine cadence,
entrenches in earthen frame
the sprawling shape 
of a serene lake,
sublimely sparkling,
the sapphire shining face 
looking up
toward the cerulean sky,
       entranced.

The southern zephyr
whispers enticing melody
to the rhapsodic ripples
intensely passionate,
spread in seraphic span  
of self-suffusing rhythm,
slide on slithering shadows 
of the dancing trees,
lining the contorted contours
of the splashing shore,
       adorned.

Malachite lotus leaves 
float flamboyant
with pulsating fervor,
the ruby flush of full bloom
makes the collage 
of fiery fresco
with fanning feathers 
of flaming flamingos,
their ballerina legs wading
the emerald waters 
in avian grace,
supple napes swiveling
in charismatic concerto 
of aquatic ballet,
       surreal.

In the hypnotic gleam 
of the setting sun
I watch the lacustrine opera,
       captivating.


Premium Member Heavens to Betsy

overload of information
this brain retains
so much I’ve forgotten

the bleepers and bloopers
the Southern charm
with the likes of

well
       bless
                your 
                        heart

watch out for the pretty gowns
sweeping, swiveling, smiling
Rhett Butler knows!

Premium Member Deprived of your love

Deprived of your love,
I become a mere wind blowing
In a whirlpooling storm

Deprived of your love
I am a fallen leaf in an orchard
Crushed under the feet of those
Who come to pluck juicy fruits

Being in such a state
Remains the fear tattooed upon my fate
For without your tender eyes
And your warm smile
Life's meaning is a mere echo sent out
In a black hole
Swiveling without meaning
In the deep and dark universe

Life and its temporariness is just illusion
Yet, fragranced with the flowers of your love
My roots stand firm 
While deprived of same,
I find no shore to look forward to
Whilst rowing my raft!

Premium Member Lacustrine Opera


In bejeweled jade landscape
the topaz terrain rolls
as wondrous waves,  
undulates with
sculpted panorama 
of captivating cadence,
entrenches in earthen frame
the sprawling shape 
of a placid lake,
sublimely sparkling,
the shining sapphire face 
looking up entranced
toward the cerulean sky,
spread serene on
boundless blankness.

The southern zephyr
whispers enticing melody
to the rhapsodic ripples,
rolling aquatic rhythm, 
intensely passionate,
stretching in seraphic span  
of self-centric array,
sliding on slithering shadows 
of the dancing trees,
lining the contorted contours
of the splashing shore,
emerald adorned.

Malachite lotus leaves 
float flamboyant
with pulsating fervor,
the ruby flush 
of full bloom
makes the collage 
of fiery fresco
with fanning feathers 
of flaming flamingos,
their ballerina legs wading
the lazuline waters 
in avian grace,
supple napes swiveling
in charismatic concerto 
of aquatic ballet,
rapturous recital
performed unruffled
in hypnotic gleam
of the setting sun,
chromatic spectrum
composes the sonata 
for lacustrine opera.


Premium Member My Darling Dachshund

A dauntless dachshund was my darling dog.
He was charmed to chase the cavorting frog.
He always ran and romped with great agility ,
For sniffing and smelling mice, he had a special ability.

He was rock black in shade and was very bold.
He stayed loyal and lively and never grew old.
His swaddling gait and swiveling move,
Brought much joy. From life, all boredom he did remove.

Safeguarded and shielded our home with a surveilling eye.
Lazily loitered with us under the lulling evening sky.
His sparkling starry eyes shone with joyful delight.
He sought snuggles and cuddles as if they were his right.

Sad, one day, our darling dachshund for ever departed.
Dropping his doggy duties, from us, he silently parted.
The memory of the magical moments he gave, merrily stays.
A faithful friend who gave us funny and festive days!

Premium Member Charismatic Concerto


In bejeweled jade landscape
the topaz terrain rolls
on wondrous waves,  
undulating with
the sculpted panorama 
of pristine cadence,
entrenches in earthen frame
the sprawling shape 
of a serene lake
sublimely sparkling,
the sapphire shining face 
looks up
toward the cerulean sky,
entranced.

The southern zephyr
whispers enticing melody
to the rhapsodic ripples
intensely passionate,
spread in seraphic span  
of self-centric rhythm,
slide on slithering shadows 
of the dancing trees,
lining the contorted contours
of the splashing shore,
adorned.

Malachite lotus leaves 
float flamboyant
with pulsating fervor,
the ruby flush of full bloom
makes the collage 
of fiery fresco
with fanning feathers 
of flaming flamingos,
their ballerina legs wading
the emerald waters 
in avian grace,
supple napes swiveling
in charismatic concerto 
of aquatic ballet,
surreal.

In the hypnotic gleam 
of the setting sun
I watch the lacustrine opera.

The Enchanted Forest

Glass illusions forestry of butterflies in flight 
swiveling and turning wing, aiming for sun 
hovering over lulling waters of purple hues  
Breathing like flowers, frilling up the air 
inside a cornucopia world of rich and bright 

Birds are calling from afar symmetrical chirps 
of grandeur, across the wide expanse 
nocturnal illumination of the heart and soul 
Varathane music sonatas, flute escapades  
within a dormant brook, nature's usurp 

Fairies, trellises, and magic twigs interlinked 
inside the Foloi forest, the mighty oak respires 
aside centaurs and dryads, of their time
an emerald green, bottled by nature herself 
all is transformed here, even the sky is pinked  

Altered, Remodeled, Reworked, Transformed, 
by my sweet, poetic imagination...

                           "Follow Me  "

Hats Off To You

What can I say but hats off to you
The top of mine to the tip of my shoe
A tap of a cane with twist of a wrist
On a roll as you stroll to top of the list
A nod of the brim and knot of your tie
Adjusted in coy with shadowed right eye
Toe pointed down to rap on the ground
Clickety clack and tappety sound
A twirl followed swirl tweak of a curl
Harmonies afloat resounding in plural
Red velvet swung away in a swoosh
Whisk onto stage in a whistle and whoosh
Toe tapping cane cracking swiveling moves
Cap tipping feet flipping clapping approves 
Set the stage with your ways and away we go
Flaunting this jaunty cascade of a show 
Imploring a roaring of standing to say
Hats off to you and enjoy the bouquet

Laughing Angels

You can hear the echo of their laughter ringing through the halls of bliss 
voices rippled soft as feathers, swiveling down on earth like this!    
Airborne landings, joyful tickles, oh how innocent they are   
in the cradle of God's Kingdom, always landing like a star. 
Feel the rush of wind on your heart without rescind ,  
as they flutter here and there doing as they please.  
They are often slow to anger, jovial and complete, 
and if you ever are in danger they can take a giant leap.  
Sometimes, a wayward feather drops by unexpected time   
perhaps it is your Angel saying, " its your time to shine !"
Sometimes, you can hear them giggle from Elysian fields of blue  
where there are no storms or downpours, only heroes of the sun.  
Sometimes, you can see their antics if your eyes are rinsed and pure, 
you can be their brave crusader using laughter as the cure. 
Voices rippled soft as feathers swiveling down on earth like this,  
sometimes softer than a feather, arriving like a kiss.

A Candlelight Moment On the Heart

Dance your soul into a candlelight moment where the flame is bright 
waltz to the music of your heart inside the center of this golden room.  
Swiveling confetti floating down upon your shimmering astral self,  
enjoy these heavenly notes of love, for they are coming from above...
A Candlelight moment on the heart, is what it is, my dear soulful one 
step by step you are invited in, to join the Universal energetic sphere 
Bound onto heaven's palatial perfect place, of happiness and joy 
swivel into orbit and meet the stars, the moon and planets too 
Turn away from worries of this world and enter the jovial freedom 
of soaring way above yourself, into a place of solitude and contentment.
Join the magic of the sky and swing onto a branch of heaven's garden 
live in the moment of breath and take each one slowly each intake counts 
when you are meditating. 
Open your heart and enter the cradle of your peaceful place 
thanks the God's and Goddesses of heaven, for all that they bring 
in this great moment of peace, its a candlelight moment on the heart.

Premium Member Snow

flurry of snowflakes,
waltz down in swiveling steps~
sun saw their last dance

Dec.29.2022

Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

Syllables-5,7,5 HMS

Premium Member Heinous Betrayal

Secure within the mother’s womb.
Sheltered from all storms of life

Swimming,
Swiveling,
and
Sustained.

The countdown begun-

A wide world awaiting,
Eager faces looking,
Windows opening,

To

Colour,
Scent,
Sound,
Taste and Touch.

But,

Expectations shattered,
Exasperation heightened,
Execution begun,
Excruciation settled,
and
Expulsion confirmed!

Chopped to pieces,
Down to trash.
‘The most unkindest cut of all’!

Betrayal!
Horrid Betrayal!
Through aeons,
History repeats.
‘Am I my brother’s keeper’?

The Son of Man –
sold out,
with a kiss.
Et tu, Brute! 

----------------------------

Placed Third


April.12.2022
U Choose Poetry Contest
Theme- Abuse of the Unborn
Sponsor- Anthony Biaanco

Premium Member Hoofing Blaze

In the frosty boudoir of the winter
The fireplace's blaze seems dancing.
Legs and arms move hastily to hinder.
Hands and shoulders are swiveling.
As if there was a lovely lady dancer.


Written: February 05, 2022

Bite Size Poem #35 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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