Swiveling Poems | Examples

Premium Member Deprived of your love

Deprived of your love,
I become a mere wind blowing
In a whirlpooling storm

Deprived of your love
I am a fallen leaf in an orchard
Crushed under the feet of those
Who come to pluck juicy fruits

Being in such a state
Remains the fear tattooed upon my fate
For without your tender eyes
And your warm smile
Life's meaning is a mere echo sent out
In a black hole
Swiveling without meaning
In the deep and dark universe

Life and its temporariness is just illusion
Yet, fragranced with the flowers of your love
My roots stand firm 
While deprived of same,
I find no shore to look forward to
Whilst rowing my raft!

Premium Member Lacustrine Opera


In bejeweled jade landscape
the topaz terrain rolls
as wondrous waves,  
undulates with
sculpted panorama 
of captivating cadence,
entrenches in earthen frame
the sprawling shape 
of a placid lake,
sublimely sparkling,
the shining sapphire face 
looking up entranced
toward the cerulean sky,
spread serene on
boundless blankness.

The southern zephyr
whispers enticing melody
to the rhapsodic ripples,
rolling aquatic rhythm, 
intensely passionate,
stretching in seraphic span  
of self-centric array,
sliding on slithering shadows 
of the dancing trees,
lining the contorted contours
of the splashing shore,
emerald adorned.

Malachite lotus leaves 
float flamboyant
with pulsating fervor,
the ruby flush 
of full bloom
makes the collage 
of fiery fresco
with fanning feathers 
of flaming flamingos,
their ballerina legs wading
the lazuline waters 
in avian grace,
supple napes swiveling
in charismatic concerto 
of aquatic ballet,
rapturous recital
performed unruffled
in hypnotic gleam
of the setting sun,
chromatic spectrum
composes the sonata 
for lacustrine opera.


Premium Member My Darling Dachshund

A dauntless dachshund was my darling dog.
He was charmed to chase the cavorting frog.
He always ran and romped with great agility ,
For sniffing and smelling mice, he had a special ability.

He was rock black in shade and was very bold.
He stayed loyal and lively and never grew old.
His swaddling gait and swiveling move,
Brought much joy. From life, all boredom he did remove.

Safeguarded and shielded our home with a surveilling eye.
Lazily loitered with us under the lulling evening sky.
His sparkling starry eyes shone with joyful delight.
He sought snuggles and cuddles as if they were his right.

Sad, one day, our darling dachshund for ever departed.
Dropping his doggy duties, from us, he silently parted.
The memory of the magical moments he gave, merrily stays.
A faithful friend who gave us funny and festive days!

Premium Member Charismatic Concerto


In bejeweled jade landscape
the topaz terrain rolls
on wondrous waves,  
undulating with
the sculpted panorama 
of pristine cadence,
entrenches in earthen frame
the sprawling shape 
of a serene lake
sublimely sparkling,
the sapphire shining face 
looks up
toward the cerulean sky,
entranced.

The southern zephyr
whispers enticing melody
to the rhapsodic ripples
intensely passionate,
spread in seraphic span  
of self-centric rhythm,
slide on slithering shadows 
of the dancing trees,
lining the contorted contours
of the splashing shore,
adorned.

Malachite lotus leaves 
float flamboyant
with pulsating fervor,
the ruby flush of full bloom
makes the collage 
of fiery fresco
with fanning feathers 
of flaming flamingos,
their ballerina legs wading
the emerald waters 
in avian grace,
supple napes swiveling
in charismatic concerto 
of aquatic ballet,
surreal.

In the hypnotic gleam 
of the setting sun
I watch the lacustrine opera.

Premium Member The Enchanted Forest

Glass illusions forestry of butterflies in flight 
swiveling and turning wing, aiming for sun 
hovering over lulling waters of purple hues  
Breathing like flowers, frilling up the air 
inside a cornucopia world of rich and bright 

Birds are calling from afar symmetrical chirps 
of grandeur, across the wide expanse 
nocturnal illumination of the heart and soul 
Varathane music sonatas, flute escapades  
within a dormant brook, nature's usurp 

Fairies, trellises, and magic twigs interlinked 
inside the Foloi forest, the mighty oak respires 
aside centaurs and dryads, of their time
an emerald green, bottled by nature herself 
all is transformed here, even the sky is pinked  

Altered, Remodeled, Reworked, Transformed, 
by my sweet, poetic imagination...

                           "Follow Me  "


Hats Off To You

What can I say but hats off to you
The top of mine to the tip of my shoe
A tap of a cane with twist of a wrist
On a roll as you stroll to top of the list
A nod of the brim and knot of your tie
Adjusted in coy with shadowed right eye
Toe pointed down to rap on the ground
Clickety clack and tappety sound
A twirl followed swirl tweak of a curl
Harmonies afloat resounding in plural
Red velvet swung away in a swoosh
Whisk onto stage in a whistle and whoosh
Toe tapping cane cracking swiveling moves
Cap tipping feet flipping clapping approves 
Set the stage with your ways and away we go
Flaunting this jaunty cascade of a show 
Imploring a roaring of standing to say
Hats off to you and enjoy the bouquet
Form: Couplet

Premium Member Laughing Angels

You can hear the echo of their laughter ringing through the halls of bliss 
voices rippled soft as feathers, swiveling down on earth like this!    
Airborne landings, joyful tickles, oh how innocent they are   
in the cradle of God's Kingdom, always landing like a star. 
Feel the rush of wind on your heart without rescind ,  
as they flutter here and there doing as they please.  
They are often slow to anger, jovial and complete, 
and if you ever are in danger they can take a giant leap.  
Sometimes, a wayward feather drops by unexpected time   
perhaps it is your Angel saying, " its your time to shine !"
Sometimes, you can hear them giggle from Elysian fields of blue  
where there are no storms or downpours, only heroes of the sun.  
Sometimes, you can see their antics if your eyes are rinsed and pure, 
you can be their brave crusader using laughter as the cure. 
Voices rippled soft as feathers swiveling down on earth like this,  
sometimes softer than a feather, arriving like a kiss.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member A Candlelight Moment On the Heart

Dance your soul into a candlelight moment where the flame is bright 
waltz to the music of your heart inside the center of this golden room.  
Swiveling confetti floating down upon your shimmering astral self,  
enjoy these heavenly notes of love, for they are coming from above...
A Candlelight moment on the heart, is what it is, my dear soulful one 
step by step you are invited in, to join the Universal energetic sphere 
Bound onto heaven's palatial perfect place, of happiness and joy 
swivel into orbit and meet the stars, the moon and planets too 
Turn away from worries of this world and enter the jovial freedom 
of soaring way above yourself, into a place of solitude and contentment.
Join the magic of the sky and swing onto a branch of heaven's garden 
live in the moment of breath and take each one slowly each intake counts 
when you are meditating. 
Open your heart and enter the cradle of your peaceful place 
thanks the God's and Goddesses of heaven, for all that they bring 
in this great moment of peace, its a candlelight moment on the heart.
Form: Narrative

Premium Member Snow

flurry of snowflakes,
waltz down in swiveling steps~
sun saw their last dance

Dec.29.2022

Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

Syllables-5,7,5 HMS
Form: Haiku

Premium Member Heinous Betrayal

Secure within the mother’s womb.
Sheltered from all storms of life

Swimming,
Swiveling,
and
Sustained.

The countdown begun-

A wide world awaiting,
Eager faces looking,
Windows opening,

To

Colour,
Scent,
Sound,
Taste and Touch.

But,

Expectations shattered,
Exasperation heightened,
Execution begun,
Excruciation settled,
and
Expulsion confirmed!

Chopped to pieces,
Down to trash.
‘The most unkindest cut of all’!

Betrayal!
Horrid Betrayal!
Through aeons,
History repeats.
‘Am I my brother’s keeper’?

The Son of Man –
sold out,
with a kiss.
Et tu, Brute! 

----------------------------

Placed Third


April.12.2022
U Choose Poetry Contest
Theme- Abuse of the Unborn
Sponsor- Anthony Biaanco

Premium Member Hoofing Blaze

In the frosty boudoir of the winter
The fireplace's blaze seems dancing.
Legs and arms move hastily to hinder.
Hands and shoulders are swiveling.
As if there was a lovely lady dancer.


Written: February 05, 2022

Bite Size Poem #35 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

Taking Over From An Outgoing Treasurer

The Out-Going Treasurer had me briefed
But through the released records I still leafed,
Just in case a thing was tightly overlooked
And I some tomorrow hatefully booked
Over some books I had barefacedly cooked
And some missing one million or thereabouts
I should kindly explain its whereabouts…

The one hitting about The Handed Over
And one lousily taking them over:
Before a week’s swiveling of the chair, A Police Land Rover,
If one had happened to be lucky with Army Range Rover;
For unsmiling cops that shall in your office hover…

Always, while taking over from A Treasurer,
Try to be about one or two things surer.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member A Winter Wish

Pen pals from the very start 
scented paper and feathers of pink 
inside a pre-kissed envelope of white 
You, writing about the taste of Trinidad 
by the sweet-burning smoke of a pipe blend,
me, whispering to you about the beauty of a snowflake  
as it comes swiveling down from heaven; 
Letter writers of ancient times, hoping for love's arrow  
You, singing a Christmas Parang in a Trini voice of honey  
me,  with my faux fourrure and Christmas boots of leather;
Lovers yet to be my love but if this year I get my winter wish, 
I will meet you by the Pigeon Point,   on December 29th, 
with a glass of rum in one hand 
and a plate of festive rice on the other 
Together we will melt the last glacial memory 
from our burning waiting hearts. 

December 7 2021  

Meaning of Fourrure / french word for fur

Premium Member Falling Leaves

Fall is the most beautiful time of the year for me, with its blushing  
Apples and fruitful trees dressed in zesty rubious healthy leaves with       
Luminous fruit hanging off its stems, like galas, granny smiths, and fuji 
Leaves of multi colored sunburnt shades of yellow, gold and brown   
Inside the orchard, ladders, bushels, straw hats and farmer pant- grins  
No better place to be then underneath an Autumn tree when every    
Golden leaf shimmer-shimmies before swiveling down at  your feet    

Leaves that dance and shuffle-shake before landing in your hands     
Earthing to the ground covering you with giant leafy  dry crispy limbs   
Arrest the night, stop the moon, hold the stars, its time to listen to the       
Voices of the night, the falling leaves have their sorrowful story to tell 
Ease into their season with a quiet soul.  Help them say goodbye to the   
Summer. After all it is the season of Autumn,  a time for falling leaves. 

September 27, 2021
Form: Acrostic

Whirling

wish to sleep
not to die;
wish to fly
not to cry

root to vertex
not any text;
the breath’s whip
in life’s fax

feast of end
implanting trend;
in whining gyre
swiveling blood gland


© Mahtab Bangalee
Chattogram
09/09/2021

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