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The Enchanted Forest

Glass illusions forestry of butterflies in flight swiveling and turning wing, aiming for sun hovering over lulling waters of purple hues Breathing like flowers, frilling up the air inside a cornucopia world of rich and bright Birds are calling from afar symmetrical chirps of grandeur, across the wide expanse nocturnal illumination of the heart and soul Varathane music sonatas, flute escapades within a dormant brook, nature's usurp Fairies, trellises, and magic twigs interlinked inside the Foloi forest, the mighty oak respires aside centaurs and dryads, of their time an emerald green, bottled by nature herself all is transformed here, even the sky is pinked Altered, Remodeled, Reworked, Transformed, by my sweet, poetic imagination... "Follow Me "

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Date: 2/25/2024 5:47:00 AM
Lovely sights and sounds you convey, Vienna. Superb images from your enchanting forest.
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:56:00 AM
Glad you found it enchanting Vijay, wish all of life, contained many enchantments such as these, guess when then don't exist its up to us to create them, lol isn't that poets do ! Thanks for reading, dear poet
Date: 2/25/2024 1:37:00 AM
I love your fantasy poem. Though I didn't believe in fairies when I was young I always read such magical books. More please.
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:56:00 AM
I believe in more things now that I am older than when I was young. lol, perhaps I feel the need to believe more now then ever Victor, what harm can come from a well imagined scene, (smile,) have a blessed day dear poet
Date: 2/24/2024 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful free flowing imagery in your poem, Rose. Fits the title well. It felt like an enchanted trip with your eloquent descriptions. Write On, my friend! Bill
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:55:00 AM
I love the forest and all its mysteries, glad you enjoyed the verse Bill, have a precious day :)
Date: 2/24/2024 6:32:00 PM
Dear Rose, You transported me to a magical world! Your beautiful scenes. I love the harmonious sounds and colors, creating a truly enchanting atmosphere. The playful interactions of fairies, centaurs, and dryads add a whimsical touch, further immersing the reader in this imaginative landscape. It's clear that this forest is a product of your "sweet, poetic imagination," and it's an absolute delight to explore. An enchanting escape! - Blessings, Daniel
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Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/25/2024 10:54:00 AM
Indeed it is in my imagination, but what is imagine often feels real to us, perhaps in some other time and era, I walked that forest more than once, thanks for reading dear poet
Date: 2/24/2024 3:50:00 PM
a magical, mystical, and enchanting place you created with such soft and eloquent imagery. I felt like I was being swept away in a beautiful current, unable to resist. When I finished reading your poem, I felt a little transformed. Simply beautiful, sweet Rose. Enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/24/2024 6:16:00 PM
That is the whole idea, to allow our minds to follow the path down the evergreen forest, thanks for reading Sara, blessings of the heart

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