The Enchanted Forest

Glass illusions forestry of butterflies in flight 
swiveling and turning wing, aiming for sun 
hovering over lulling waters of purple hues  
Breathing like flowers, frilling up the air 
inside a cornucopia world of rich and bright 

Birds are calling from afar symmetrical chirps 
of grandeur, across the wide expanse 
nocturnal illumination of the heart and soul 
Varathane music sonatas, flute escapades  
within a dormant brook, nature's usurp 

Fairies, trellises, and magic twigs interlinked 
inside the Foloi forest, the mighty oak respires 
aside centaurs and dryads, of their time
an emerald green, bottled by nature herself 
all is transformed here, even the sky is pinked  

Altered, Remodeled, Reworked, Transformed, 
by my sweet, poetic imagination...

                           "Follow Me  "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 2/25/2024 5:47:00 AM
Lovely sights and sounds you convey, Vienna. Superb images from your enchanting forest.
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:56:00 AM
Glad you found it enchanting Vijay, wish all of life, contained many enchantments such as these, guess when then don't exist its up to us to create them, lol isn't that poets do ! Thanks for reading, dear poet
Date: 2/25/2024 1:37:00 AM
I love your fantasy poem. Though I didn't believe in fairies when I was young I always read such magical books. More please.
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:56:00 AM
I believe in more things now that I am older than when I was young. lol, perhaps I feel the need to believe more now then ever Victor, what harm can come from a well imagined scene, (smile,) have a blessed day dear poet
Date: 2/24/2024 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful free flowing imagery in your poem, Rose. Fits the title well. It felt like an enchanted trip with your eloquent descriptions. Write On, my friend! Bill
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:55:00 AM
I love the forest and all its mysteries, glad you enjoyed the verse Bill, have a precious day :)
Date: 2/24/2024 6:32:00 PM
Dear Rose, You transported me to a magical world! Your beautiful scenes. I love the harmonious sounds and colors, creating a truly enchanting atmosphere. The playful interactions of fairies, centaurs, and dryads add a whimsical touch, further immersing the reader in this imaginative landscape. It's clear that this forest is a product of your "sweet, poetic imagination," and it's an absolute delight to explore. An enchanting escape! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:54:00 AM
Indeed it is in my imagination, but what is imagine often feels real to us, perhaps in some other time and era, I walked that forest more than once, thanks for reading dear poet
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