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Snow

flurry of snowflakes,
waltz down in swiveling steps~
sun saw their last dance

Dec.29.2022

Ice, Snow or Frost Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

Syllables-5,7,5 HMS

sunwinterhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

May 15, 2026 at 10:02 AM

Back with a belated congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Since a nice win at that. Sara K.

Constance La France

February 22, 2023 at 10:17 AM

Valsa, beautiful poem and congratulations. I wanted to send you a soupmail today but you do not have soupmail... so about my G Word challenge, can you change your form to Free Verse ? As I cannot follow your rhyme pattern, it is a wonderful poem and I would like to place it, blessings, Constance

Valsa George

February 22, 2023 at 7:28 PM

Constance, you are very kind. Thanks for your suggestion. As I am going away on a tour for three four days, I shall make the change now itself. Once again thanks a lot.

Len Gasun

January 7, 2023 at 5:07 PM

Congratulations on your win my dear friend Valsa! I can see the panoramic image and movement of the snow through your creative words. Amazing! Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings my dear friend. Hugs

Eve Roper

January 5, 2023 at 4:38 PM

Valsa, congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. A great verse with ice cold imagery, but also warmth. Love it! Many blessings to you

Paula Goldsmith

January 5, 2023 at 9:41 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write/picture. Yes, I can see it. I want to do a snowflake waltz out in the snow. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Tania Kitchin

January 4, 2023 at 4:16 PM

Valsa, a great haiku, love the movement in this one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Sara Kendrick

December 31, 2022 at 3:29 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. We love the sun, but the sun ends it for snow and ice. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

December 30, 2022 at 6:52 AM

So pretty…I love the first line, the visual setting perfect!

Mystic Rose Rose

December 30, 2022 at 3:31 AM

how lucky the sun is to see their last dance, the sun, a kind warmth that can melt any snowflake in thin air, I admire your great beauty, Valsa :)

Sotto Poet

December 29, 2022 at 9:09 AM

Beautifully crafted haiku, Valsa. You conveyed a great winter scene. I'm hoping you had a wonderful time celebrating the holidays. I hope that 2023 treats you well.