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Deprived of your love

Deprived of your love, I become a mere wind blowing In a whirlpooling storm Deprived of your love I am a fallen leaf in an orchard Crushed under the feet of those Who come to pluck juicy fruits Being in such a state Remains the fear tattooed upon my fate For without your tender eyes And your warm smile Life's meaning is a mere echo sent out In a black hole Swiveling without meaning In the deep and dark universe Life and its temporariness is just illusion Yet, fragranced with the flowers of your love My roots stand firm While deprived of same, I find no shore to look forward to Whilst rowing my raft!

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Date: 5/2/2025 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. So delighted to see it on the winners' list. Sara K
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Date: 4/27/2025 12:27:00 PM
Wonderful metaphors, Anoucheka. I think this is a best entry! "Being in such a state Remains the fear tattooed upon my fate" stand out line ~
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Date: 4/27/2025 11:42:00 AM
When life's meaning swivels it just drives me insane! Fosho fosho
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Date: 4/27/2025 11:06:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Deprived of your love" write. Great Ending... Have a wonderful Sunday writing away.........
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