A Winter Wish

Pen pals from the very start scented paper and feathers of pink inside a pre-kissed envelope of white You, writing about the taste of Trinidad by the sweet-burning smoke of a pipe blend, me, whispering to you about the beauty of a snowflake as it comes swiveling down from heaven; Letter writers of ancient times, hoping for love's arrow You, singing a Christmas Parang in a Trini voice of honey me, with my faux fourrure and Christmas boots of leather; Lovers yet to be my love but if this year I get my winter wish, I will meet you by the Pigeon Point, on December 29th, with a glass of rum in one hand and a plate of festive rice on the other Together we will melt the last glacial memory from our burning waiting hearts. December 7 2021 Meaning of Fourrure / french word for fur

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Date: 12/28/2021 9:19:00 PM
I love this poem, and especially the last two lines. It's too bad letters aren't written anymore. I still have my mother's letters that she sent to me in college in the '80s They are precious to me. The payphone and letters were our only form of communication to our families and friends then of course. It was always exciting to get a letter. Tres jolie Mystic Rose Rose.
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Date: 12/21/2021 1:49:00 PM
Oh my, I really loved your entry Vie. Enchantment through and through! Romance long lingers after reading your words. Congratulations on your well deserved win! Have a blessed Christmas my friend. xxoo
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Date: 12/18/2021 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Rum and rice what a night. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
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Date: 12/15/2021 1:14:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. A blessed Christmas to you and your family. God bless you.
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Date: 12/14/2021 10:40:00 PM
"with a glass of rum in one hand and a plate of festive rice on the other Together we will melt the last glacial memory from our burning waiting hearts" - Very interesting writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/14/2021 9:06:00 PM
Dear Rose, your enrapturing pen thrills my heart’s imagination. Such a beautiful romantic piece, so intimately expressed, your emotions and imagery bringing me easily to the heart of this exquisite poem. Congratulations for your excellent win in Chantelle’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/14/2021 4:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Rose, you deserve it with this very well-crafted poem. Kindest wishes
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Date: 12/14/2021 3:52:00 PM
oh la la Vie you certainly pulled out all the stops with this poem, its wonderful:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2021 2:30:00 PM
ooh, la la! May your wishes come true! Congratulations! ~ps
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Date: 12/14/2021 1:53:00 PM
I love it! I hope you meet! A unique list, a winner for sure :)
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Date: 12/8/2021 6:32:00 AM
You give as astounding wishes. Thank you for a wonderful verse.. Hugs.
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Date: 12/8/2021 5:35:00 AM
Amazing wishes you got, Vie:) a lovely write:) Really unique:)
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Date: 12/7/2021 1:35:00 PM
Lovely write - Truth? God bless you sweet friend. Love to you, Gina
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Date: 12/7/2021 2:46:00 PM
Oh Regina, thanks to me wild imagination everything appears truth, lol, thank you for reading my friend, be well, stay in touch !
Date: 12/7/2021 1:26:00 PM
Sounds glorious, Vie. I hope it comes true! Best of the season to you!
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Date: 12/7/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with your precious comment Milton, be well, talk soon :)
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