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In the frosty boudoir of the winter The fireplace's blaze seems dancing. Legs and arms move hastily to hinder. Hands and shoulders are swiveling. As if there was a lovely lady dancer.
Written: February 05, 2022 Bite Size Poem #35 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 2/6/2022 2:16:00 PM
Oh, the hypnotic drawing in of a lady dancer~ you have penned a charming Quintain; your imagery exudes exotic! Good Luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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Date: 2/6/2022 5:15:00 AM
Much warmth in this write on a cold winter day.
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Date: 2/6/2022 4:32:00 AM
Fantastic, Quintain, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Much enjoyed!
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Date: 2/5/2022 10:29:00 PM
Lasaad, nicely worded lady dancer, undoubtedly smoldering, possibly Andrea's Cinder Girl methinks, another enjoyable creation my friend, Aloha!
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