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October-13- 2024
Alliteration Nursery Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Eve Roper

 

 

A dauntless dachshund was my darling dog. He was charmed to chase the cavorting frog. He always ran and romped with great agility , For sniffing and smelling mice, he had a special ability. He was rock black in shade and was very bold. He stayed loyal and lively and never grew old. His swaddling gait and swiveling move, Brought much joy. From life, all boredom he did remove. Safeguarded and shielded our home with a surveilling eye. Lazily loitered with us under the lulling evening sky. His sparkling starry eyes shone with joyful delight. He sought snuggles and cuddles as if they were his right. Sad, one day, our darling dachshund for ever departed. Dropping his doggy duties, from us, he silently parted. The memory of the magical moments he gave, merrily stays. A faithful friend who gave us funny and festive days!

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Date: 11/7/2024 9:39:00 AM
Nice tribute to your beloved dog. Pretty garden background too. Congrats on your win in the coontest.
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Date: 11/7/2024 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful write with a great picture. What a Great yet sad ending. I know you miss him, so sorry. Good memories are the best kind to have...  Have a fun day writing away.............
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Date: 11/7/2024 5:31:00 AM
Valsa, this is a very lovely, sweet tribute to the dog you loved so much. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Date: 10/28/2024 1:31:00 PM
this is a lovely tribute to your dog. Nice picture too. We were so heartbroken when our Snickers died three years ago.
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Date: 10/15/2024 12:52:00 PM
I know the feeling of losing one that is truly loved, and they seem to love us as well. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Date: 10/14/2024 2:53:00 AM
They are adorable Valsa and so cute especially the long haired ones. We had two long haired chihuahuas, not at the same time, and once the last one moved on we couldn't bring ourselves to get another. All the best for Eve's contest - Hugs Maria
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Date: 10/13/2024 10:39:00 PM
Well written Valsa, beautiful dogs too, my daughter has got two of them. Tom
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Date: 10/13/2024 6:35:00 PM
Dachshunds are lovable. I had one too. Hearts break when they die. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 10/13/2024 3:41:00 AM
You have mastered alliteration well, dear Valsa. Best for a win.
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Date: 10/13/2024 12:29:00 AM
A delightful tribute poem for your furry friend! You will do well in the contest!
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