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Premium Member Tambourine Tears

Tambourine tears fall with such grace
They actually make music on my face
A festival of salt on blackened skin
Pickled smile teasing the audience again
Bitterness is an acquired fruit
After fasting, it is at least something…to eat
A means of consuming protein…the meat
Of getting back to business and reconstructing
Changes shuttle as seasons flavor the wind
Like melting snow
The saltiness gives way to new perspective 
Like lemonade from lemons
Tambourine tears begin to sing
Of jaded joy
Of laughter after loss
Of love and light again

Premium Member Jesus Is the Master Potter

Jesus is the Master Potter
By Franklin Price
09/14/2023

Jesus, is the master potter
We, the followers His Clay
He molds us into shining lamps
Reconstructing day by day

He lays His hands upon us
Kneads and shapes us 'til we're done
 He is the Master Potter
Who recreates us, He's the one

As cracks appear, remolds us,
Provides our structure with relief
Then fuels us, and lights us
To be His lamps that shine belief

He trims our wicks when needed
To even light the darkest hour
Leading others to salvation
His lamp has given us that power

He adds a globe of glass or crystal
To let the light burn in the wind
To guide lost souls to heaven
For since the garden, all have sinned

He cleans our globes when they have darkened
And our lamps are not as bright
And we doubt that we are able
To shine out believing light

If Jesus had not died for us
On that cross upon the hill
Would be no need to have our lamps
For other's nights, our lights, to fill

Vanishing Spirit

Time reconstructing the construction    
cell by cell eroding,
trying to remember something
something beyond my grasp,
There is a vagueness  
a shaft of light
Through a darkened door.
a transient brilliance
that fails to illuminate.
a truth that i once carried  
lightly on my back
something essential has gone
As if its floating out there
among the stars.


Premium Member Kintsugi

when her shadow cracked

fragments entered her mind

shards of false gold

pierced façade and persona

left her in pieces

splintered images and illusions


the mask had been held tight

a rope strangled the puppet

clown’s grimace incised

by strings of attachment

and forced assimilation


a mirage in the making

projection of fake courage

pied piper tune on the march

dissonant shrieking contour

silhouette of crushed empty words


with no choice left

she picked up the pieces

and timid surface tension

adhered to the task

of reconstructing a narrative

without othering

gendering

ab-normalising all rupture


when she looked at the mosaic

the patchwork montage

appeared more sustainable

self-sufficient and rewarding

as the sum of all parts

had been hidden in a whole

where the light needed to fill

crevices and fissures


and she began to accept

time lines and gaps

which assembled 

the shape of outlines 

of necessary change 


12th August 2021

Premium Member Fragile

Fragile
She's quite brittle
Please, handle her with care
Lest she drops and shatters like glass
She's one of a kind; one in a million
There is no reconstructing her
She's emotionally
Destructible
Fragile


Date written and posted: 10/13/2018

Career Path Change

career path change 
reconstructing future 
self's realm of reality 
by way of altering 
present life path 
reshaping the course 
of inaction into action 
not allowing path to remain the same 
not allowing the current self to sabotage the future self
altering the space time continuum 
creating an alternate future reality


F R a G M E N T E D Memories

Staring up at a S T A T I C sky,
Searching through clouds of
F R A G M E N T E D  thoughts.
 
The M E M O R Y of your voice, 
hums like a long forgotten 
D I A L-U P-E A R W O R M.

lost in the depths  
Of a 16-bit  W A S T E-B I N,
reconstructing C O R R U P T E D passions 
Lost in layers of,
D I G I T A L-S N O W.

Perfect Paper Plane

Slowly, slowly but surely
this day is swirling down the drain
Tempers are flaring, orders are dastardly; being lashed out
Obnoxious, oblivious, overwhelming stupidity
How much more is the margin pushed before it becomes enough
Society is taking a step back, a step back from progression
Obsession, controlling of time
writing takes care of the problem though others arise
Revising, reconstructing, reiterating
so redundant, repetitive, annoyance
When will everything finally cease
when will everything finally cease, dissipate...
Fuse with the wind, take the shape of an inanimate object
and fly, float away into the nothing
or like a perfect paper plane
signed with grief in the misty rain
as if to say come back another day

Tattoos and Titles

Is there any kind of person who is perfect, an example?
Someone that helps every single day should be ample,
Although could even that one be considered perfect?
People aren't perfect, so that's what you would expect.

Status and position, you can be born into it, or find it,
The appearance you have doesn't matter, don't mind it,
Or else you'll find yourself in a precarious predicament.
Knowing what to do is starting to become omnipotent

With professors, doctors, priests, soldiers, and bankers.
Because they have their skin emblazoned with anchors,
Anchors to the soul, body and mind, or the literal form.
Fact is, people have to hide their anchors, it's 'the norm'.

Lets say a qualified person is reconstructing your heart,
Would you really care if their skin were covered in art?
What about serving in the war, rolling up their sleeves,
To reveal more sleeves, and everyone tattooed leaves.

That Was Us

Weeks pass
	and words cannot help but fail me.
The expression of the season
	whimpers quietly on the sideline.
Waiting, wishing hoping and searching exasperate the mind 
	as nothing appears to raise my spirit.
A period of nothing but empty loneliness recalling years 
        when you were here sharing, celebrating the joy.
We are so deafened by the season
	and in its brief life, relive memories of the heart.
Memories that tend to fade like the words,
	reconstructing poorly what was us.
Come back to me
	enlighten all we shared.
Return to me again
	with the words and the love,
the dreams and the happiness, the life
        that was us.

Premium Member Obliquely Opaque

obliquely opaque 


opaque – soft light sifts through stained drape
filtered through muted sunshine’s dancing shape
trapped within dim confines - dust covered trust
love’s charred remains - victim of unbridled lust

awakening to darkness – blinding brightness
stumbling sightless through outdated rightness
alone with thinking’s disconnected fears
seekers reconstructing new frontiers

layering more dust upon the Grail
adrift amid the thoughts they never sail
searching without - for that within
saddled with past - and future sin

oblique – soft angle breaking stride
questioning the truths - that “must abide”
within the hearts and souls - of all but one
awakened to the truth - that there are none



8/27/2015

Rock-Man


Reconstructing me -
Scattered by life's challenges - 
Still waiting for you, 
On the same bench of that park
Where we spent a life..

(C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

Hudhud

Nature and Nature fight,
To switch off the light.
And to grab the right, 
that loosens us at night. 

People say it's not good, 
since it grabs our food.
For so it should, 
Be called Hudhud.

A day for destructing, 
a decade for reconstructing. 
With such power of its Incoming,
And an obstacle for Outgoing. 

Bye bye Hudhud,
Never again say you could.

Life

The battles that I
endure are seemingly
imaginary 
to the worlds eye
but when you you
finally see 
get a glimpse 
a first sight
you would see the
things I battle 
when my mind is not
right
How do you explain
that you have
searched to find
refuge 
though the places
you have searched
have left you more
lost than before
I have looked
through God, music
and meditation
The answer seems to
be a magical Doctor 
with a miracle
medication
I feel as though I
am just waiting to
catch my break 
I drop my lives
mirror in
overwhelming
anticipation
for the broken
pieces to appear 
So I can attempt at
reconstructing my
jigsawed life
Back to what I
remember
The only fear I have
is as mirror drops
the pieces just
vanish
nothing left 
an empty canvass.

Feedbacks

Feedback, 
A poet strive for perfection 
Someday his work will become a worldly reflection 
Of whom he is 
With each line he procrastinate, 

With each verse, 
Reaction, pro action and anticipation 
To the point 
Of debating or reconstructing his latest 
Despite receiving favorable reviews 

Should I read it out loud? 
Or should I let it simmer 
And invited samplers to sample my work 
Too many mind and voices 
Can be influential

Unlike a Sunday buffet his poem 
Is not the main course? 

His work is his ode 
So he becomes a prolific composer. 

Author note: 
To be or not to be this is the question

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